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brokenfragilethings — miles, miles, miles
Published: 2013-07-24 01:37:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 665; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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i have so many things that i want to saythat i'm dizzy with it.
it swims in my head
and in the spaces between my ribs.
and i know that i'm not magnificent
but i can tell you that i'm like the stars;
the streetlamps dulling out their luminescence
so you only see them
burning faintly alongside the moon
i can tell you
that the already-set sun
turns the night sky a dark navy
and that if i try hard enough
i can turn it into the depths of the ocean
and exhale for good
and i know that i'm not magnificent
but i know you're in milwaukee,
just a silhouette to a passerby in the street
through an open window--
hold the sweet,
because all i taste
is bitter.
[ and i could see for miles. ]
Comments: 22
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I feel like I should drop this here for you to peek at.
It was also inspired by that song, the music video, specifically.
Strange how people interpret differently. But anyways, I love the song. C:
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Oh it's lovely!!
Thank you so much! I love this song, so anything for it is always a pleasure to read c:
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It was no problem, I thought you would like it.
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hello! your absolutely lovely work has been suggested to me by one of your friends and is featured here: fav.me/d6g1s2z
show some love by 
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Oh my goodness! I'm definitely going to go check it out (and by check it out I mean cry for a little because people are so kind and then cry over the rest of the literature because I'm positive it's wonderful)
I don't know who suggested me but, man, I really appreciate it! Thank you for considering and including my piece. I'm really honored!
I'll definitely check out the other work, too!
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aren't you just the sweetest thing?!
& i do believe it was ~ready-to-go who suggested the piece, if you'd like to show her some love
though i'm not quite sure why i hadn't favorited it before! silly me
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Lovely! I'mm definitely go show her some love, oh man, she's far too kind to me figuhsdjkn WHATTA CUTIE
You're a cutie too, okay, thank you so much for being so sweet! <3
SSSHHHH I'M JUST HONORED YOU EVEN LOOKED AT IT OH GOODNESS, thank you >//w//<
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she'd definitely one of the sweetest
and ahh you are too adorable, thank YOU for writing such great poetry
OH HUSH YOU'RE AMAZING AND I COULD GO ON AND ON ABOUT YOUR GREATNESS lsajfsdf
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Indeed! C:
And haha, NO PLEASE, you're the adorable one okay, thank YOUUU eep<3
SSSHHHH NO YOU XOXOXOXO firuekjdsf
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ahh you are just so precious
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I LITERALLY SQUEALED OUT LOUD WHEN I SAW YOU WATCHED ME
i think i scared my dog but thank you <333
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AWWWWW YOU'RE SUCH A SWEETIE
your work is lovely c: I'm glad to be following you! <3
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i literally wish i could find you in person and give you a hug
thankyouthankyouthankyou
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ps i'd also like to say that your work is breathtaking and i 
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such a beautiful piece, and the bon iver references are lovely.
i hope you do feel better, sweetie.
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Thank you so much! I've been a bit obsessed with the song, recently, so I wrote something with it in mind.
I appreciate that. Thank you very much, darling. <3
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ooh, i love that song. and i love this a lot.
if i may ask, why are you sad?
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I appreciate it! Thank you. It's a beautiful song. It leaves me almost aching.
Hm. I wish I had a clear answer for you, darling.
I think I'm sad for a lot of reasons. Some I can't even describe, myself.
It's a bit more difficult than I'd like to acknowledge, you see.
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i know exactly what you mean.
that's okay. i've felt that way before too. i hope you feel better soon though dear
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It's nice to find people who get music.
A lot of people just listen--which is a good thing, too.
But sometimes it's nice to find people who feel it.
I appreciate it, sweetheart.
Thank you c':
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i agree. c:
no problem at all, love.
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