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Description THESE TRUTHS / ARE UNIVERSAL :
SKINNED KNEES / ACHING LIMBS /
YOUR MOTHER'S SADNESS / HIDDEN /
IN THE BREADTH OF HER SHOULDERS /
OR WEDGED BETWEEN HER PRIZED /
PORCELAIN PLATES
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Comments: 7

PoetsHand [2017-02-24 02:48:15 +0000 UTC]

One of your best! Very good!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to PoetsHand [2017-03-03 16:34:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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watergypsy50 [2017-01-21 07:36:35 +0000 UTC]

Your poems make me gasp with the sudden shock of recognition and I love how you choose 'grow' not 'get older' in your description. 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to watergypsy50 [2017-01-23 04:51:33 +0000 UTC]

i'm honored to produce such a reaction! i don't expect that.
thank you so much, as always! you're lovely and i hope you're having a nice day!

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watergypsy50 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2017-01-23 07:37:36 +0000 UTC]

Right back atchya (the being lovely bit!). Your poems, their topics, the language and the rhythm of them are very powerful. They say things known but unsaid and they help me grow. You are a true poet. 

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angelserum [2017-01-20 22:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, raw, to the point, and delicate.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to angelserum [2017-01-23 04:51:00 +0000 UTC]

i'm so pleased to hear you think so. thank you so much!

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