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the world bleeds,and i
along with it.
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This is a very interesting concept. I'd almost love to see it expanded on.
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thank you! i appreciate that.
did you mean in a lengthier poem, or a series ?
i'm thinking of maybe doing some things with some old work, and it's nice to hear there's interest in certain pieces : )
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No problem!
Either one, whichever you think is best.
Ahh, that'd be cool
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And ONLY one.
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Good for you, getting into the swing of writing!
It's neat how these poems seemed to get shorter and shorter as I read through them counting down to one.
But they all still retained a poignant message and meaning, no matter their length. This one especially. Love it, dear.
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Haha! The length isn't intentional, but now that I look at it, you're totally right c: what a coincidence! I guess it fluctuates, though, depending on the piece c':
and thank you gosh you're wonderful eroiljsdkf
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Yeah, I didn't really expect it to be. (:
Haha! I think it's cool!
It does, though--you're absolutely right. You can't force poetry to be what it's not. Just let the length be what it is.
Aww, you sweetheart akshgsk <3
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