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Published: 2014-01-12 07:53:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 370; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description you told me to stop feeling sad
as if it were something
tangible in my grasp
that i could simply drop
on the floor next to your old
dress shoes
to sweep under the carpet
and forget about.

but in the end we're going to
have to lift the carpet
and all of that dust
is going to filter into my lungs
anyway.

you're a fool if you think otherwise.
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Comments: 8

Brb-gtgmilkacow [2014-06-07 03:52:05 +0000 UTC]

i love your work oh my gawsh
 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Brb-gtgmilkacow [2014-06-07 11:48:00 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE SO LOVELY EEEE thank you so much!

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Brb-gtgmilkacow In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-06-08 04:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome~ i seriously cannot stop reading your work :') <3

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Lintu47 [2014-01-13 13:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Hello
You have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Lintu47 [2014-01-14 06:40:52 +0000 UTC]

GOODNESS! Thank you so much, I'm going to go check it out! I appreciate this greatly.

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Lintu47 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-01-14 10:49:54 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, no problem!

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overtsexualized [2014-01-12 13:34:03 +0000 UTC]

what an amazing analogy, i absolutely love this poem.
great job : )

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brokenfragilethings In reply to overtsexualized [2014-01-14 06:40:32 +0000 UTC]

EEP! Thank you so much. This means a lot<3

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