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Description do you kiss
your mother
with that mouth?

i try not to
kiss anyone, honestly,
because kisses
are bullets and
trust is a gun
and i don't think
you can look me in the eye
and promise not to kill me.

i said,
do you fucking
kiss your mother
with that mouth?

no, i'm trying not to
taint anyone else
with my sins,
they pour
from my loose lips
and i can't seem to stop
being something unholy.

                      sorry, mom.
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Comments: 8

RadiantGloom [2015-05-03 23:01:45 +0000 UTC]

This is really powerful. I feel like I can really relate to this, but I relate to all of your work, haha ^^'

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brokenfragilethings In reply to RadiantGloom [2015-07-11 04:03:12 +0000 UTC]

haha! oh man. i'm both happy and saddened i hope you're well! and thank you so much.

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RadiantGloom In reply to brokenfragilethings [2015-07-11 09:03:30 +0000 UTC]

^^

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dietcocaine [2015-01-25 00:32:53 +0000 UTC]

I don't even feel right in church anymore.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to dietcocaine [2015-01-25 02:34:14 +0000 UTC]

me neither.

i don't know if i ever did.

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dietcocaine In reply to brokenfragilethings [2015-01-25 02:56:33 +0000 UTC]

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MapleGravy [2015-01-24 15:28:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh this...struck a chord. I especially like how it's almost in letter format with "sorry mom" kinda shoved to the edge a bit. It's really creative but very unpronounced so it creates just a beautifully sad last moment.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to MapleGravy [2015-07-11 04:02:54 +0000 UTC]

that's kind of what i had in mind, so i'm very happy that it somewhat went through! thank you kindly. 

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