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brokenfragilethings — slow decline
Published: 2013-04-06 20:16:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 367; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 1
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Description i've lost myself to the ocean, my
bones lying haphazardly in a watery grave.
but oh, i'm feeling fine,
the salty tang of the sea has
taken me home.

(we made it to the coastline.)
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Comments: 10

camelopardalisinblue [2013-04-20 01:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely stunning.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2013-04-23 01:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Aw wow, thank you so much! C:

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-04-23 10:50:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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nosedivve [2013-04-07 15:04:06 +0000 UTC]

This is so one of my favorite poems of yours.so beautiful.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to nosedivve [2013-04-07 21:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Aw, man! That's so nice of you to say. Thanks dearie. <3

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nosedivve In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-04-07 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome.

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ithaswhatitisnt [2013-04-06 20:59:37 +0000 UTC]

It's so...final.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ithaswhatitisnt [2013-04-06 21:07:16 +0000 UTC]

That's a very interesting view! I can definitely see where you got the feeling of finality, I had a lot of choice words that, sort of, led there.

I hope 'final' isn't that bad of a thing, though! Bahaha.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, doll. x

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ithaswhatitisnt In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-04-06 21:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Final isn't a bad thing. In this case, it works very well.

You're welcome. <3

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ithaswhatitisnt [2013-04-07 06:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Then, I'm extremely pleased. x

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