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Description you took my flesh and
left me a pile of bones;
you are my sickness.
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the-solimnludic [2014-02-19 17:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, again!
I can't believe these haikus you're capable of!
It doesn't even look like you were struggling with the amount of syllables limited to each line!

"You took my flesh and
left me a pile of bones;"
That really rings with me. Really great metaphor.

And then the last line follows up nicely, if heartbreakingly.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to the-solimnludic [2014-03-24 17:27:39 +0000 UTC]

!!! THANK YOU GOSH
i love haikus and so ugh you're an angel you always say the nicest things and i have the biggest smile on my face you are positively my favorite thank you so much for being so knd! C:

!!! gosh, i'm so glad you like it. I appreciate that c:

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the-solimnludic In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-05-04 17:13:39 +0000 UTC]

It's my pleasure!!! <3 Aww, jeez, you're making me flush here asyrfaekf|aesfwsgf
just knowing that I can make you smile is enough, okay.

C:

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