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Description she left the sweet-soft scent
of her vanilla perfume
on your nightstand;
a little bottle of writer's tears
because she loved you –
but not enough
to stay
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Comments: 12

the-solimnludic [2014-03-01 22:27:22 +0000 UTC]

"little bottle of writer's tears" - that's gotta be one of my favourite tidbits that you've written. I saw it in the other poem too. <3

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brokenfragilethings In reply to the-solimnludic [2014-03-24 17:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's a line i've grown really fond of, and it might appear in a few of my works, whoops.

Thank you! I actually do like it a lot. so it means a lot c:

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the-solimnludic In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-05-04 17:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha! It's okay...I really love it, too.

Of course, dear! C:

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stichesBodyBagTtags [2014-01-14 11:50:55 +0000 UTC]

This is so Beautiful and unique , you are a very talented writer  

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brokenfragilethings In reply to stichesBodyBagTtags [2014-01-16 04:44:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness! I'm so honored. Thank you, darling.

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stichesBodyBagTtags In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-01-16 19:47:44 +0000 UTC]

its my pleasure just keep writing !

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MsGeekNerd [2013-12-31 08:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Hm

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brokenfragilethings In reply to MsGeekNerd [2014-01-05 09:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Hm?

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MsGeekNerd In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-01-07 18:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Hm as in a sound of agreement

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JohnAshleigh [2013-12-17 23:16:04 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible. I honestly cannot think of any criticism. A polished poem if ever there was one. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to JohnAshleigh [2013-12-22 05:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness! That's so, so kind.

I appreciate it greatly – you might not even know how much.

Thank you! x

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JohnAshleigh In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-12-22 16:59:19 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome.

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