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Description i am acid;
you wring me out
of your bones without
a second glance, and i hope
that i scar your fucking palms
so that everything you touch
will be tainted
by me.
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Comments: 10

azuline-furcula [2016-03-12 04:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to azuline-furcula [2016-04-06 02:50:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much. <3

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angelserum [2016-03-06 00:16:40 +0000 UTC]

lovely metaphor here. lovely.
please know you can talk to me if you feel like it (even though i don't know you too well, my inbox is always open). stay strong.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to angelserum [2016-03-06 05:30:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you! i'm glad you like it.

and thank you so much for the offer—it's so kind, and i'm extremely grateful. thank you. <3

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the-solimnludic [2014-02-19 17:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow...really reflects your emotions, all of them.
I'm not entirely sure what "i never meant enough" means, but I think that's something for you rather than for the reader to understand clearly.

Just so you know whenever I get to your writings I always hope you're feeling better (or at least less sick) by the time I read them. So I sincerely hope you're doing better when you read this. And if not, I'm really sorry!

(What's kind of cool about this though is that I'm going backwards from the number titles, counting down just like one of your poems said.)

I liked the formatting of that last line, gives it more privacy...how it almost looks like a scroll or something how it's contained between the squiggly brackets in small font.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to the-solimnludic [2014-03-24 17:32:30 +0000 UTC]

yeah. it's bitter and sad and i guess i'm a little bitter and sad. maybe jealous. i don't know.
and ah, yeah. it's kind of why it's in parenthesis; it's important but, not enough to stand in it's own. it's more of a personal thing, yeah.
it's basically hoping that there's some sort of lasting affects, that the speaker did something to the object of the poem, because at least that'd be something. they didn't mean enough to stay around for, so the speaker hopes something stuck.

kind of.

and oh muffin c: thank you so much. I think i'm a little bit better from this scenario than i was when i wrote it. but it comes in waves. nonetheless, i'm okay! hanging in there.

(ah! that's so neat. thank you for reading my work all the time gosh i am so honored okay)

yes! that's what i wanted to get across. I'm glad it did. C:

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the-solimnludic In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-05-04 17:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww, sweetheart....don't be.
Yeah. Oh. That's slightly depressing, oh man.
I see a little better now that you've explained it, though.

Oh, that's great to hear.
Right. For me, too.
Yayay!!! That's great to hear!

(Aw, well, not all the time. Only when I get the time, because I like to make sure I drop you a comment. )

Oh, wonderful! Yay!

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therootcellar [2014-01-31 06:13:49 +0000 UTC]

that... is horrifyingly beautiful 


i am sorry that you feel so sick though 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to therootcellar [2014-01-31 16:41:38 +0000 UTC]

I think that's a compliment? Baha, thank you, doll.

And oh, thank you.
I am sorry as well.

I'm working on it, though. S'alright. (:

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therootcellar In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-01-31 19:24:31 +0000 UTC]

I definitely meant it as a compliment! ha ha 


Your welcome  


good

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