The-Craftsmans-Pen In reply to ??? [2014-04-20 22:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Very effective! Even though we try not to believe this, it is completely true.

I see a snail as the image...but I think it probably suggests that we humans are rather slow thinkers/dim with logic, I don't know. 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to The-Craftsmans-Pen [2014-04-22 18:13:26 +0000 UTC]

It is. I'm glad you think so! Thank you so much for the kind words, too. 

And oh! That's really interesting, actually. Thank you for sharing C:

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Aerode In reply to ??? [2014-04-20 01:31:39 +0000 UTC]

I see the shape as a snail. Is there an intentional form?

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Aerode [2014-04-20 02:27:13 +0000 UTC]

No real intentional form! I just wanted to line up the verse, if you see what I mean? 

So that everything
looks         like this
from  first word  to
the     last     word

instead of it
looking like this, you know?

but its so interesting you found a shape!

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Aerode In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-21 15:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, thank you!

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SereneCyrene In reply to ??? [2014-04-19 22:21:16 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful! Great work.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to SereneCyrene [2014-04-20 02:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Gosh! Thank you so much. (:

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TimesFire90 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 08:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately, this is all too true.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to TimesFire90 [2014-04-17 13:56:09 +0000 UTC]

You're right, sadly. Thank you!

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HarpingHawke In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 06:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes. Yes darling, yes.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to HarpingHawke [2014-04-17 13:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. (:

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HarpingHawke In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-17 17:36:35 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is amazing!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to HarpingHawke [2014-04-19 17:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh! I appreciate that. Thank you!

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Pinkster7 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 02:17:24 +0000 UTC]

;_;

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Pinkster7 [2014-04-17 13:55:04 +0000 UTC]

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Dreamworld88 In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 21:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Sad, but true. 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Dreamworld88 [2014-04-17 13:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment! It is sad.

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Micithemisterious In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 14:22:55 +0000 UTC]

This is the truth.Sadly but the truth.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Micithemisterious [2014-04-17 13:54:45 +0000 UTC]

(:

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Everlasting90 In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 11:50:55 +0000 UTC]

There is so much truth in this.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Everlasting90 [2014-04-17 13:53:59 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that!

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jmelisio In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 10:16:00 +0000 UTC]

This is strong. This is good.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to jmelisio [2014-04-17 13:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I appreciate that.

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jmelisio In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-17 14:07:40 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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PushingPeople In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 07:12:48 +0000 UTC]

This is very true.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to PushingPeople [2014-04-17 13:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Sadly.

Thank you for the comment!

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Ice-Cove27 In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 05:26:56 +0000 UTC]

So amazing how true and sad it is

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Ice-Cove27 [2014-04-17 13:53:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I appreciate your words.

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Ice-Cove27 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-17 14:10:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^ I really liked this poem.

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Mimi-Chanchu In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 23:38:23 +0000 UTC]

And then no one ever realizes it was them...
~sigh~
Beautiful <3~

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Mimi-Chanchu [2014-04-16 02:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Appreciated. (:

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Mimi-Chanchu In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-16 11:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Yup :3

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lidsworth In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 00:22:03 +0000 UTC]

so true.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to lidsworth [2014-04-15 19:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Sad truth.

Thank you for commenting!

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32bees In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 19:13:01 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful (and I apologize for not having a better compliment)

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brokenfragilethings In reply to 32bees [2014-04-15 19:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness, no apologies, ever! You were kind enough to leave something. I appreciate that greatly!


And thank you for the kind words. (:

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32bees In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-15 23:32:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh, phew, that's good.  No problem at all! <3

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lonewolfhowl87761994 In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 13:10:37 +0000 UTC]

make you question things

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brokenfragilethings In reply to lonewolfhowl87761994 [2014-04-14 15:03:36 +0000 UTC]

it does, doesn't it?

I'm glad it could evoke that, though. Thank you!

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lonewolfhowl87761994 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-14 16:43:11 +0000 UTC]

yes it does  and your welcome

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LadyLincoln In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 06:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, darling.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to LadyLincoln [2014-04-14 15:03:14 +0000 UTC]

gah you're a gift. Thank you<3

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LadyLincoln In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-15 02:59:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, honey.

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TheRemnantJuice In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 05:19:43 +0000 UTC]

I really like this.

-T

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brokenfragilethings In reply to TheRemnantJuice [2014-04-14 15:03:06 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate this greatly. Thank you so much!

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TheRemnantJuice In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-04-14 22:10:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Cannabiscuits In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 05:18:59 +0000 UTC]

this was so powerful I cried everytime

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Cannabiscuits [2014-04-14 15:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh! I'm glad it had power.

Sorry for the tears! However, I do appreciate them.

Thank you so much!

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