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Published: 2014-10-23 21:51:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 664; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description please. i want to kiss
the rain from your mouth; but i
am a hurricane.
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Comments: 7

hannatool [2018-08-16 07:58:42 +0000 UTC]

I like the juxtaposition of the imagery in this poem.  I picture a hurricane trying to be gentle, but ending up blowing everything away.  Sad, but it speaks volumes about the grandness of your spirit.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to hannatool [2018-08-16 18:29:11 +0000 UTC]

ahh, what an interesting perspective ! that hadn't quite been my take on writing it, (really close to what i was thinking when writing, though!) but i'm so happy my work can be a bit open ended and that people can interpret and feel different things from it : ) 
overall, it definitely is sad, so i'm so happy that came across. i really like your perception of it !

thank you so much for the comment !

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RadiantGloom [2014-10-29 03:22:20 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool

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brokenfragilethings In reply to RadiantGloom [2014-10-29 14:06:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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RadiantGloom In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-10-29 23:53:12 +0000 UTC]

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MapleGravy [2014-10-24 03:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesome--it feels so quietly powerful.  

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brokenfragilethings In reply to MapleGravy [2014-10-26 17:37:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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