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the tide loved me more than you ever did;coaxed me in with her siren's song,
the taste of her sweet salt on the back of my tongue.
i've filled my empty lungs with the oceanβ
at least she wasn't afraid to fucking touch me.
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Comments: 11
ohanthem [2015-02-06 16:28:08 +0000 UTC]
So sharp, so beautiful, creates such an impact. I love it.
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brokenfragilethings In reply to ohanthem [2015-07-11 04:08:13 +0000 UTC]
oh gosh; i really appreciate this. i've said before, i believe, that you are a wonderful writer. so hearing this from you is so wonderful! thank you.
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brokenfragilethings In reply to half-pixieman [2015-07-11 04:07:44 +0000 UTC]
oh my goodness! this is so, so lovely. thank you so much Β
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Hades-Flower [2014-11-14 03:25:20 +0000 UTC]
Sharp and pointy imagery - love this. I also use pain and sadness to write, so I can relate.
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brokenfragilethings In reply to Hades-Flower [2014-11-14 13:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! i appreciate that.
Sometimes, that's just the easiest thing to write from. Experiences, and whatnot.
I hope you hang in there!Β
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brokenfragilethings In reply to RadiantGloom [2014-09-17 12:11:53 +0000 UTC]
HHAHAHHAH a lot of sadness tbh
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RadiantGloom In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-09-18 03:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Yah, I get it
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