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brokenfragilethings β€” twenty-seven
Published: 2014-09-16 17:38:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 712; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description the tide loved me more than you ever did;
coaxed me in with her siren's song,
the taste of her sweet salt on the back of my tongue.

i've filled my empty lungs with the oceanβ€”
at least she wasn't afraid to fucking touch me.
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Comments: 11

ohanthem [2015-02-06 16:28:08 +0000 UTC]

So sharp, so beautiful, creates such an impact. I love it.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ohanthem [2015-07-11 04:08:13 +0000 UTC]

oh gosh; i really appreciate this. i've said before, i believe, that you are a wonderful writer. so hearing this from you is so wonderful! thank you.

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half-pixieman [2015-01-29 10:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely brilliant, wow.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to half-pixieman [2015-07-11 04:07:44 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness! this is so, so lovely. thank you so much Β 

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Hades-Flower [2014-11-14 03:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Sharp and pointy imagery - love this. I also use pain and sadness to write, so I can relate.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Hades-Flower [2014-11-14 13:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! i appreciate that.

Sometimes, that's just the easiest thing to write from. Experiences, and whatnot.

I hope you hang in there!Β 

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RadiantGloom [2014-09-17 01:01:07 +0000 UTC]

How
How does this magic always happen

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brokenfragilethings In reply to RadiantGloom [2014-09-17 12:11:53 +0000 UTC]

HHAHAHHAH a lot of sadness tbh

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RadiantGloom In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-09-18 03:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Yah, I get it

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tesvarb [2014-09-16 20:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.Β Β 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to tesvarb [2014-09-17 12:11:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you!Β 

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