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Description                                                               she takes
                                                             your wrist,
                                                            presses the
                                                             pad of her
                                                                thumb
                                                               to your
                                                             pulse and
                                                               nothing
                                                           has ever felt
                                                             more like
                                                                home.
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Comments: 21

Fae-Oaksdaughter [2017-04-16 23:25:10 +0000 UTC]

~anime eyes fill and spill~  *sniff*  Thou pierce wee Fae's heart with such simple beautiful truth.   

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Fae-Oaksdaughter [2017-05-04 03:04:30 +0000 UTC]

i'm happy it moved you. :')

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capricecake [2014-07-11 05:19:05 +0000 UTC]

perfect.
it's things like these that you remember forever.

ps:

nice work... you've inspired me.
you pushed out an idea that i've had but didn't realize i could turn into a poem. c:
i linked to you in the comments: capricecake.deviantart.com/art…

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brokenfragilethings In reply to capricecake [2014-08-01 02:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm going to take a read. (:

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capricecake In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-10-02 20:13:04 +0000 UTC]

just found this in my 'random favorites.'

golly, i wish i could re-favorite this! :b

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DarkFaerieNyroc13 [2014-07-10 18:21:24 +0000 UTC]

This is just so delicate and true. I love it!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to DarkFaerieNyroc13 [2014-07-11 00:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! C:

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DarkFaerieNyroc13 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-07-13 02:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Of course c:

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RadiantGloom [2014-07-09 08:59:38 +0000 UTC]

This is really cute and awesome

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brokenfragilethings In reply to RadiantGloom [2014-07-10 00:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much<3

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HatterShadow [2014-07-09 05:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Perfectly profound and romantic.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to HatterShadow [2014-07-10 00:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Thank you so much. 
Different, content wise, than usual, but. (:

I appreciate this!

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HatterShadow In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-07-10 00:48:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem.
I'm a romantic at heart, so romantic and sweet writing like this always enjoyable for me. (:

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brokenfragilethings In reply to HatterShadow [2014-08-01 02:45:55 +0000 UTC]

haha, i don't really ever, ever write ~cute things.
This is just me thinking about some things, haha.

glad you like it, though!

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HatterShadow In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-08-01 11:55:09 +0000 UTC]

It just gives me that romantic lovey-dovey feeling, you know? And I like that feeling.
So, thanks.

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RubensLilium [2014-07-09 05:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Simply amazing  

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brokenfragilethings In reply to RubensLilium [2014-07-10 00:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, I appreciate this. Thank you!

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RubensLilium In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-07-10 01:12:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! ^^

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SpriteBlayde [2014-07-09 05:16:15 +0000 UTC]

I love this... simple but beautifully put.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to SpriteBlayde [2014-07-10 00:04:35 +0000 UTC]

eep! thank you so much. <3

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SpriteBlayde In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-07-10 01:11:36 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome!

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