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This story has haunted me for years. Β I am glad I have found you again.
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found me again? how interesting! i am happy to see you found me, as well.
this really makes me feel something; i'm happy my words stuck.
thank you.Β
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Thank you so much.
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Wow. I have no words.
"Remember not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult still, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment." - Benjamin Franklin (1706-1790)
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Oh, I'm so honored!
Thank you, honestly. Something like this means so much to me. (:
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But it is I who should be honoured m'lady, and who should thank you for sharing your soul with us.
I have always been haunted by Hemingway's six-word story and am greatly impressed by anyone who can write flash poetry.Β
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Oh goodness! That's so kind of you, really.
I appreciate it so much. (':
I adore six-word stories.
The ones that can convey emotion are favorites, so I'm so glad I was able to do that, too.
Thank you again darling!<3
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And thank you again for sharing
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It's amazing how utterly impactful these six, simple words are; speaking leagues more so than a page of sentences ever could. Beautifully done, good sir/madam, you've brought tears to my eyes.
And I truly hope you are okay and that this is not happening to you, abuse is a painful thing, both mentally and physically. No one should ever have to bear it's scars. If you ever need someone to talk to, regardless of if this is the situation you're in or not, feel free to drop me a note. I'll always be available to talk.
Lots of virtual hugs,
BUzzOFF15x
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Oh goodness. I'm sort of glad that it brought tears, because that means my intent came across, but I am deeply sorry to have brought those tears. Perhaps I'm not cut out to be a writer.
But your words made me incredibly happy, honestly. I'm honestly glad you considered it beautiful, especially for the sparsity of the words.
I am...hanging in there, it seems.
Thank you kindly for the offer. I'm not much a speaker, my vulnerabilities go into my writing.
But I genuinely appreciate your words.
You're quite lovely, dear.
Thank you again (:
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No, be happyΒ it brought tears to my eyes. A talented author is one that, through their works, can inspire emotion of any kind within their reader, and this is something that struck a chord in my heart like few things have done.Β You should beΒ proud, because, my friend, Β you are an amazing writer. Never stop doing what you do, and never quit being who you are because DA is a better place with your works in its archives.
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I'm truly sorry that you are dealing with a tough situation, and please keep in mind that the offer still stands. Even if you don't feel like verbalizing much, as I know many feel uncomfortable with talking about the problems they deal with, just realize that there is someone here if you ever need it.Β
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As for putting a bit of yourself into your works, I can relate. The things you write, the pieces you make, are things that come from the heart. They are a way to vent, to show the real you when it feels like no one sees. Know that, as much as I can, I'll always try to comment. Because, looking through the things you have written, you deserve every kind word telling you how beautiful both you and your works of art are.
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You are very welcome, thank you for making such a wonderful piece and being an amazing person.
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Lot's of virtual hugs,
BUzzOFF15x
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It sounds like someone's desperate cry for help...
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It could be.
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This is such a stunning six word story. A lot of impact.
With the "please" written like that it definitely adds more depth, more pain. And then the remaining five words sound defeated, still, but with a sort of dignity...I love this so much, you! >.<
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VIFGYEUOWHLEJKNS
YOU!
Thank you so much. I'm really, ridiculously glad you liked it, and that there was impact! I was hoping the format for the 'please' would add something, too.
Thank you lovebug<3
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Haha!!
You're so welcome!! Yes, of course there was impact! That's how it was written to be. <3 I'm glad I liked it too, ha! I'm super-glad I read it!
It did. (:
Welcome!! <3
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It's strange, how sometimes less than ten words speaks more loudly than an entire page of them. Powerful. I hope you're doing alrightΒ
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I'm okay, dearie.
Thank you so, so much for your words! x
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I simply adore this! If you are interested I have an "interesting" idea for this piece! I'll note you if youΒ
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If I? O:
But yes! You can note me O: I'm curious! I'm not sure what the idea is, but yeah! Note me. We'll figure something out! O:
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I love this... it has few words but those words speak louder than a paragraph or stanza. So emotional. Fantastic job!
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I really appreciate this. Thank you so much!
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Not a problem at all.
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