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Published: 2013-04-04 07:09:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 275; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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i'm trying toact the same as usual, but
you're beautiful and
i'm broken, and
it's not easy being okay when
i'm the only one who
came out of this
in pieces.
Comments: 3
SilverInkblot [2013-04-20 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my journal
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beautifulwomenxo [2013-04-04 07:16:25 +0000 UTC]
I really, for some reason, love the way you break up your lines. You stop in the middle of a thought,
βIβm the only one who
came out of thisβ
It gives it a startling stop, which is something I found enjoyable.
Great work!
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brokenfragilethings In reply to beautifulwomenxo [2013-04-04 07:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Aw, wow! I'm really big on formatting, so the fact that someone likes mine means a lot.
Thank you so much, dear! I appreciate it. x
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