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Published: 2012-12-27 01:21:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 4647; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 6
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EDIT: Just so you know, the reddish cat is Colors sister, not his mom!AHHHHH. I finally finished ;w; I hope you likeeee! I'm so happy right now like you don't understand. I really hope you enjoy this first page, and just know there's more to come
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First Frame: *Paris* "Pssst.. Colors! Wake Up!"
Second Frame: *Colors* ...
Third Frame: *Paris* "Momma said she was taking us outside! Finally!"
Fourth Frame: *Reed* Yeah, let's go you orange faced freak. I'm not waiting here all day.
Fifth Frame: *Colors* Uh.
Sixth Frame: *Colors* Okay!
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Comments: 41
I'm very enthralled to how you thought of starting a story like this. It's original and classic at the same time. The younger runt with an older brother and sister (Scourge's past). Let's hope he doesn't grow up to be like him...
Anyways, love the way you draw. It's stylish, yet subtle. Outstanding, but ordinary. The way you'll progress the comic does interest me. The reason why I gave a four star on technique is just the drawings. It's good for a comic, but not perfect, which it doesn't need to be. The reactions and feelings you put into this is great.
Keep drawing. Keep creating. Keep up the good work and it'll pay off... heck, this comic already got over a thousand views... lucky... Just think of how many people will be swayed by this new twist your putting on the warriors series. Even I, right now, have been given inspiration to put into my own story from your drawings. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you so much. You really keep me motivated to do more ^.^
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Great comic! i love the backround but are they pets or are they warriors? the middle section of the comic i see some square thing i can't identify what it is. i don't really like the brown cat because of her hair style what is anyway? the rest of the cats do have that style of hair? but please don't think of me as to harsh.i love the coloring you did,i am not really go with digital art myself.but there mouths seem more like a triangle . the drawing of the purple stuff is poor.
i hope i am not being to harsh!
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In this story, the main character, Colors is first a house pet. He then becomes a warrior later on in the story ^.^ The square thing is a window, yeah, it's really bad D: Thank you so much for the critique!
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Outstanding skill and a real sense of catness
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OMG Why haven't I seen this sooner! Absolutely amazing Brook! Can't wait for the next page!
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"Orange little freak."
And the little guy doesn't seem to give any darns. xD That's a good boy.
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omg. :'D I can't even. Why. ;u;
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Aw, cute kittens! Great work, I love the layout. Very creative!
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"Come on orange freak!"
"umm, okay"
I found that to be pretty funny.
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This story seems intriguing.~ And the art is so cute! ; w ;
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Very nice style. Like the colours used in this. It also looks very interesting. I'll be sure to have a look through the rest of this when I can. :3
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Wow, nice. I think i might watch you, just for your stories...ya know!!!
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thank you! (:
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Very cute style; I like the colouring and lineart.
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This is simply brilliant! I love the shading you used and the soft lines in your technique, your style is very unique, well done!^^
I hope to see more.
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Thank you so much! ^.^
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no prob^^ Keep up the awesome art!
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Nice job XD
At least u got replies unlike me ;^;
Oh well...
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I love it, Brookieeeee. <3
Is his mother abusive or something or if she teasing him? x3
Nice job on the shading, btw. c;
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That's his sister, surprisingly :'D
ANd thank you boopadoop<3
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Ohhhhh x3 I was confused because he said "Momma".
You're welcome honeybuns <3
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Your very welcome ;u;
I wish I could draw comics like you >///<
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