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You never know how much it means until you loose it.Related content
Comments: 32
damarikomu [2004-04-27 10:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Too bad it's unfinished... On the other hand, it's a perfect open ending. *lol*
Me likes it a lot.
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xsilentxscreamsx [2004-04-15 12:48:53 +0000 UTC]
..... ....... .....
She collapsed on the floor,
Never got to the door?
.... ...... ......
She collapsed on the floor,
She couldn't move anymore?
.... .... ....
She collapsed on the floor,
Wanting what she had 10 minutes before?
... .... ...
She collapsed on the floor,
WHAT?!?!?!
What happened after she collapsed?!?!?
It's unfinished, but I liek it so much, that even though it's not finished, I'm going to it!
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burn-with-me In reply to xsilentxscreamsx [2004-04-15 13:37:38 +0000 UTC]
Great suggestions needs to ryhme with strength though and the only thing i cud think o was legnth and it won't in too well I'll figure it sumhow though don't worry i shud be posting the finished one tomorrow and then you'll know what happens ^-^
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burn-with-me In reply to xsilentxscreamsx [2004-04-15 13:37:04 +0000 UTC]
Great suggestions needs to ryhme with strength though and the only thing i cud think o was legnth and it won't in too well I'll figure it sumhow though don't worry i shud be posting the finished one tomorrow and then you'll know what happens ^-^
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xsilentxscreamsx In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-15 16:00:08 +0000 UTC]
Mwa haha, I know it needs to rhyme with strength. Those were bad suggestions on purpose. I don't like helping people with rhymes and poems and stuff because then it's not from them. It had to come from YOU, so I put stupid things to get your mind working, knowing that you wouldn't/shouldn't/couldn't use them
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burn-with-me In reply to xsilentxscreamsx [2004-04-19 21:14:02 +0000 UTC]
Lol thanks.................... I think well yea I give up on this so if you want to carry on and call it a calloberation (spellcheck on that) you may cause I'm stuck!
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xsilentxscreamsx In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-20 01:33:37 +0000 UTC]
Haha, perhaps I'll look into that later. :-p
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burn-with-me In reply to xsilentxscreamsx [2004-04-21 15:16:27 +0000 UTC]
Lol well i give up looking up stuff for it it sucks................................
the kids dies,
the mom cries.
End!
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burn-with-me In reply to xsilentxscreamsx [2004-05-06 20:12:27 +0000 UTC]
like the end then?
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squirlruler [2004-04-15 12:16:15 +0000 UTC]
yay!!! you posted! crap! thats 10 more i need to post
the poems unfinished, to me anyways, when (if at all) will you finish it? **would like to know** i enjoyed the rhyming, very good
but i want to know what happens! arg!!!! leaving me in suspence...
good job
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-15 12:30:16 +0000 UTC]
I'll finish it when I get a decent ryhme that'll work okishly........................ any ideas?
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-16 03:00:59 +0000 UTC]
my? ideas? IDEAS? me? **laughs** hmm give me a night or two and ill try to get my hampster up and running
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-18 20:22:44 +0000 UTC]
Lol meh.............................. hampster the one in your head?? that wasn't food?
shit I'm sorry dude!
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-19 01:09:23 +0000 UTC]
YOU ATE MY HAMPSTER?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?! WHY DID YOU DO THAT? YOU JUST HAD TO TAKE MY HAMPSTER, DIDNT YOU? WHATS WRONG YOU WITH YOU!? WHAT DID THAT HAMPSTER EVER DO TO YOU?
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-19 17:39:14 +0000 UTC]
He was fat and ya know looked tasty i replaced him with a rat
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-20 03:54:11 +0000 UTC]
well, hes fat cuz im lazy, and is that why i have had a sudden crazing for cheese?
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-21 15:13:30 +0000 UTC]
no that would just be me replacing your dairy products with sperm after a while u start to crave stuff u havn't had in ages........
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-21 22:46:30 +0000 UTC]
that totally caught me off gaurd. i was like, chillin and then i read that and i was like
!!!!!! anyway, why, in the hell, did you have to compare it with that....**sighs** **will never understand some ppl** i guess thats a good thing
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-22 10:37:51 +0000 UTC]
........................................ ..........*shrugs*...................... .................. You eat sperm!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-23 01:30:44 +0000 UTC]
SHUT UP!!!!!
jk jk jk!!!!
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-25 20:04:54 +0000 UTC]
I nearly shouted that at a load of guys who can't keep there car horns under fooking control I swear to god they beep me once more and I'll cry!
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-04-26 01:05:00 +0000 UTC]
OMG i know what you mean. when i first started to drive, i went the speedlimit **laughs** and i would get honked at, but no i think its the other way around, 'cept i just pass
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-05-06 20:10:28 +0000 UTC]
Lol *points to her age* I'm 15 i'm not even allowed to get in a car near other cars I just get beeped at and then lame ass "wanna fuck" comments shouted at me. It's a bitch!
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-05-07 01:21:24 +0000 UTC]
that sucks, i dont get those rude comments, prolly cuz im a guy anyway, i wouldnt hear them on account of my music
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-05-07 11:49:17 +0000 UTC]
Yea it does suck one day I'm gonna punch them they only shout it after I've been running and I'm in sports clothes they wouldn't even try shouting it at a "grunger" assholes
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-05-07 11:51:53 +0000 UTC]
yea. my step dad ran track and field **is totally off topic **
would you like me to hold them while you hit them? that way they cant block
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2004-05-08 10:32:26 +0000 UTC]
That would be great! Thankies! Cross countrys a bitch to run so's long grassed fields! Track can be a pain aswell!!!!!! I hate sport!
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2004-05-09 02:44:51 +0000 UTC]
yea, i never could see what was fun about running in a cirlceish trackish thing..
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squirlruler In reply to squirlruler [2004-04-19 01:09:49 +0000 UTC]
oh well, i didnt want him anyways
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