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Got stuck after one verse how lame *shudn't write lyrics her brain is too small*Related content
Comments: 12
damarikomu [2003-11-29 20:43:16 +0000 UTC]
Actually. It looks very good with just this one verse.
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squirlruler [2003-11-07 02:04:53 +0000 UTC]
i like it, i think this could turn out to be something really good, if u set your mind to it
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2003-11-07 16:14:01 +0000 UTC]
So did I but when it comes to this one my mind blanks so i just get annoyed at it and give up I've spent hrs on it and my mind is still blocked
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squirlruler In reply to burn-with-me [2003-11-07 21:21:02 +0000 UTC]
when that happens try watching a movie, excerising **spelling** or doing something that relates to wut you are writing, (i find that it always helps me) then try it again in a couple of hours
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burn-with-me In reply to squirlruler [2003-11-07 22:02:36 +0000 UTC]
i'll try that! thx hun!
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adanceinthedark [2003-11-01 16:25:10 +0000 UTC]
i like it...i like the rhyme scheme, cant wait till you finnish it
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burn-with-me In reply to adanceinthedark [2003-11-02 13:28:13 +0000 UTC]
thanks *promises to leave comments on the work when her band stuff calms down a little*
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burn-with-me In reply to adanceinthedark [2003-11-02 20:09:17 +0000 UTC]
if u wanna have a go at adapting it feel free cause i have serious mind block at the mo........ *couldn/'t actually write b4 the mind block thiugh hehee*
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adanceinthedark In reply to burn-with-me [2003-11-05 06:44:29 +0000 UTC]
*thinks and scratches bushy hair* i'd love to, but only under the condition its a calaboration
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