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Published: 2015-11-10 02:59:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 4077; Favourites: 266; Downloads: 159
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Description Looking west out of Shinjuku.
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Comments: 15

slomodeux [2015-11-16 07:10:48 +0000 UTC]

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i'm sorry to be so harsh, but you've floored me many times over with your work.

cannot lay my finger on it... maybe the cropping... less sky...
the scenery is impressive as is, so maybe the vignetting isn't needed, or perhaps make it square...

i love the blue city against red sky with sun hidding behind clouds that could be mountains. has a sci-fi feel to it that i find very cool.

all in all, without top blue part of sky, less or no vignette, (and maybe squared) think it would be much stronger. if you want an even more sci-fi effect, then i would sharpen the city scene and make it slightly more metalic.

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slomodeux In reply to slomodeux [2015-11-16 20:23:10 +0000 UTC]

ha, looking at it again with clear eyes. no matter what i said at 5:00 am, it's still a beautiful picture to look at.

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burningmonk In reply to slomodeux [2015-11-16 11:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback! Vignette is an inherent part of all lenses when shooting wide open (in this case f/2.0) so it's not something I could avoid easily in this case. Square crop: maybe, but I'm really not a fan of the square crop. Anyway, your assessment is fair. Thanks!

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traviscbowers [2015-11-10 03:42:03 +0000 UTC]

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As busy as this city looks in this picture I feel a lot of calmness. I feel its due to the sunsetting in the west. It calms my soul. Almost as I too had a really long day and all is well because it's time to settle down...let go the stresses of the day. Love the overpowering color of the sky. The pic is neutral in grays with blue tones to it but there is peace and hope found in the setting of the sun. It brings a reassurance that tomorrow will be a better day. I don't feel the stress or business of the city at all.

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burningmonk In reply to traviscbowers [2015-11-17 12:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your nice feedback!

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VJD-Communication [2016-02-29 05:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Impressive work.  

  

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burningmonk In reply to VJD-Communication [2016-02-29 12:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!

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4thofficial [2015-11-11 05:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice shot

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burningmonk In reply to 4thofficial [2015-11-12 02:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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IrynaFedorovska [2015-11-10 18:38:48 +0000 UTC]

where are all lights?

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burningmonk In reply to IrynaFedorovska [2015-11-11 03:37:19 +0000 UTC]

I think because it's just before nightfall, few people had their lights on yet.

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Yanosik [2015-11-10 10:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Stunning! I want that view!

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burningmonk In reply to Yanosik [2015-11-10 15:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

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KitKatas [2015-11-10 06:04:22 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous view !

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burningmonk In reply to KitKatas [2015-11-10 15:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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