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Published: 2011-10-01 13:08:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2284; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 31
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Description I'm soooooooo rusty ;_________; Soooooooooooooooo rusty!!

Anyway... I was bored... and used PK as a guinea pig because she's very animation friendly. I hope Purplekecleon doesn't mind If she does I'll remove it.

Looooots of issues here. I'm aware of most of them.

I should do more to polish my skills which have taken a serious hit it seems. *sad face*

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Honey4514 [2014-03-08 00:49:59 +0000 UTC]

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I really thought it would have the chameleon pooping, judging by the name, but it was really good! I really hope it doesn't hurt your feelings that I was a little disappointed about the pooping. But anyway, back to the animation itself. I've never made an animation, but I know for sure it's WAAAAAAAAAAY better than anything I'd ever make. Nonetheless, I might be able to make a flipbook animation, for example a dragon freezing water as it walks across it. I would love it if you made that, and I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings during this critique.

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glitchedpuppet [2011-10-04 11:09:25 +0000 UTC]

best

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C-Puff In reply to glitchedpuppet [2011-10-04 12:03:28 +0000 UTC]

*is so happy* 8'D

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Kitty-Cat-Angel [2011-10-04 08:14:04 +0000 UTC]

I think it's cute! I wouldn't really know how a chameleon would run... >_>

How do you submit flash animations?

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C-Puff In reply to Kitty-Cat-Angel [2011-10-04 12:25:50 +0000 UTC]

XD haha! I doubt Chameleon's can. They walk so strangely already.

if you save a flash file as an .swf you should be able to upload it

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Kitty-Cat-Angel In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-04 12:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Only thing is Toon Boom doesn't exactly love Flash, or do you just have to export it from the write module?

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C-Puff In reply to Kitty-Cat-Angel [2011-10-04 12:43:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't actually know. I animated this in flash itself. sorry.

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Kitty-Cat-Angel In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-04 12:44:15 +0000 UTC]

That's ok, I'll figure it out XD

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lnfection [2011-10-02 00:15:57 +0000 UTC]

This isnt too bad, its just (maybe just for me) the background makes it seem like he's not moving.

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C-Puff In reply to lnfection [2011-10-02 11:42:56 +0000 UTC]

XDD haha yeah. But I didn't want to leave it a blank white.

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MistahRadny [2011-10-01 20:12:03 +0000 UTC]

This doesn't seem rusty to me.
Good work ^^

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C-Puff In reply to MistahRadny [2011-10-01 21:48:50 +0000 UTC]

XD it is for what I should be able to do @___@ But I haven't animated in a long while.

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Samurai-Poet [2011-10-01 17:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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C-Puff In reply to Samurai-Poet [2011-10-01 21:48:00 +0000 UTC]

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Samurai-Poet In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-01 21:51:23 +0000 UTC]

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TwiliShewolf [2011-10-01 15:10:21 +0000 UTC]

I love how she runs, yet goes nowhere o3o I like it tho!

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C-Puff In reply to TwiliShewolf [2011-10-01 21:42:12 +0000 UTC]

XDD I find it harder to make characters run in place then to actually animate them running towards something for some reason.

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lonemaximal [2011-10-01 15:00:22 +0000 UTC]

This is a really cute little loop.

Her tail just needs to flick up more and maybe unwind a little as it comes up, just to give it that real galloping feel.
Also, you should make a key frame where, as her front paws go right back, her back ones go just in front of them, like this.
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Hope that helps.

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C-Puff In reply to lonemaximal [2011-10-01 21:43:34 +0000 UTC]

*nods* I think that's a good idea yeah (with her tail I mean) And I definitely agree with you on adding that frame. I wasn't using any reference with this and usually my quadruped run cycles always end up looking like bunnies XDDD maybe that's why.

And thanks!

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lonemaximal In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-01 21:52:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem. It's very impressive for unreferenced, but loops like this are always smoother when referenced.

And there's nothing wrong with bunnies! XD

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C-Puff In reply to lonemaximal [2011-10-01 21:58:30 +0000 UTC]

XD I am ashamed of my own skills *is a professional animator... for like money and shit* But yeah! I must do more and get better once again! Loops have always been my weak point though @_____@

XDD Except when they're not bunnies.

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lonemaximal In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-01 22:09:02 +0000 UTC]

Practice dem loops! Become the Loop King!

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C-Puff In reply to lonemaximal [2011-10-01 22:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Wut wut!

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Jenca [2011-10-01 14:52:20 +0000 UTC]

O_O
SO. CUUUUUUUTE~ . . . .

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C-Puff In reply to Jenca [2011-10-01 21:41:02 +0000 UTC]

XDDD thanks!

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jokergirl129 [2011-10-01 14:44:52 +0000 UTC]

I think what you have here is very nice. I'm sure with more practice you'll make all sorts of animations that you'll be proud of.

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C-Puff In reply to jokergirl129 [2011-10-01 21:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I should be better at this but I agree, if I practice I'll get better again.

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jokergirl129 In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-02 01:40:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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0okami-Rei [2011-10-01 14:19:49 +0000 UTC]

This was really well done.

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C-Puff In reply to 0okami-Rei [2011-10-01 21:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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NekoHimi [2011-10-01 13:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Round and round and round she goes, where she stops nobody knows

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C-Puff In reply to NekoHimi [2011-10-01 13:23:44 +0000 UTC]

She obviously has some srs business somewhere

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Iamffy In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-01 14:34:22 +0000 UTC]

She's on the search for unguarded cake.

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C-Puff In reply to Iamffy [2011-10-01 21:49:17 +0000 UTC]

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NekoHimi In reply to C-Puff [2011-10-01 13:27:07 +0000 UTC]

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Courrt-The-Cabbage In reply to NekoHimi [2011-10-01 13:19:17 +0000 UTC]

i know when she stops, she stops when i right click and deselect play c:

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NekoHimi In reply to Courrt-The-Cabbage [2011-10-01 13:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Or when your laptop goes died from power or when they take the power from the house

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Courrt-The-Cabbage In reply to NekoHimi [2011-10-01 13:28:05 +0000 UTC]

good point,same with if your moving houses, and stuck in a horrid thunderstorm sometimes, and your icon is adorable!

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