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FIRST BOOKMax: Hey! We’re a bunch of super mutants from a science lab who can fly, and are being chased by a group of were-wolves!
(Were-wolves take Angel)
Max: Because I am the bossy parent figure, we shall go rescue her! But you can’t come cause you’re blind, and you can’t because you’re eight. However, I will allow the loud mouthed nine year old to come and the dashingly handsome stereotypical dark-brooding-emo boy because I have an enormous crush on him, but I won’t admit it.
Fang: Um, you do?
Max: Moving on now.
Fang: O.o
(They fly to California. Various mishaps along the way delay them slightly. Like Max being shot.)
Max: Now we are at the lab rescuing Angel using a convenient flock of predatory birds. Oh, and I found out that a man who I thought was dead isn’t. Weird, huh?
Fang: Quite…
(They fly to New York in a relatively short period of time.)
Max: Now that we are in New York, we will go straight into the psycho scientists hands by showing up at their doorstep a second time because we are obsessed with our pasts.
Fang: Is that a good idea?
Max: Of course it is. I’m the bossy parent figure, remember?
Fang: Ah, yes.
(They wander around New York. Mysterious things happen.)
Voice: Hello Max. I am an annoying personification of your conscience.
Max: Oh Em Gee!
Fang: Are you okay?
Max: If you hear a voice in your head that no one else can hear, is that a bad thing?
Fang: Yes.
Max: Uh-oh.
(They go to the ocean for no apparent reason and are attacked by more were-wolves.)
Max: Oh god, Fang’s hurt! I must reveal my love for him while he’s critically injured!
(Kisses Fang.)
Fang: Ow. WTF was that about?
Max: *blushes* Um, nothing?
Fang: Riiiight.
(They go back to New York and into a lab and find assorted other mutants. Ari, a were-wolf somehow linked to their past, shows up. He and Max fight. Max wins.)
Max: Darn, I think I killed my mortal enemy because he’s a giant wolf-man and has no sense of balance and/or bad traction on his boots.
Jeb: You just killed your brother! *wails*
Max: I did? Wait, that means-
Flock: Ew, gross.
Fang: Uh, yeah.
Max: Now we will go to Washington DC to look for our pasts once again (because I am still the bossy parental figure.)
Fang: *rolls eyes*
THE END
BOOK TWO
Max: We are still on our way to Washington DC, because last time you checked in with us it was only 24 hours ago. Oh, and we have a dog now.
(Were-wolves appear. They have wings now. Ari [the wolf-guy that “died”] shows up. They fight. The flock wins. Fang is mortally wounded. [again])
Max: Oh god! Ari is alive! And Fang is hurt! Again!
(They take Fang to the hospital. FBI gets involved. That is not a good thing.)
FBI: So, um, you guys are super-mutants who can fly?
Flock: Yup.
FBI: Okay…
(They get shipped off to a farm to live with some random woman. Fang [or Fnick] is better now.)
Woman: You guys can do whatever, you just have to go to school.
Flock: NOOOOOO!!!!
(They go to school.)
Max: This is easy because the Voice helps me cheat in all my subjects. Then raging teenage hormones kicked in (along with bird pheromones) and Fang and I became walking targets for teen lust. This was okay until I saw Fang making out with a certain NON-AVIAN school peer. That was not okay.
(Confusing things happened at the school that appear to have nothing to do with the story. Then the were-wolves attacked. The flock runs away.)
Max Clone: Sad, sad real Max. Too bad I have to stalk you.
(Assorted plot altering things happen that I don’t remember because I can’t find my copy of the book. WAAHHH!!!)
Voice: (for the four millionth time) Save the world Max! W00t!
Max: And how am I supposed to do that?
Voice: I dunno. Go hang out at Disney World for a while.
Max: Okay.
(They go to Disney World.)
Max: I know! We have to go stop some major corporation from taking over the planet! Oh, and I can fly super-fast now. Yippy!
(They go to lab but Max gets kidnapped. [Or would that be “bird”kidnapped?])
Max: Darn. Now I am stuck in an isolation tank for no real reason. Oh Voice, what should I dooooo?
Voice: Um, play dead?
Max: Okay. *pretends to die*
(Meanwhile, back at the ranch….)
Max Clone: Hiya everybody! I am so the real Max. You have absolutely no reason to believe that I am not Max! Because I am Max, I will do a Max-like thing – like cook breakfast!
Fang: *whispers to flock* She’s not Max.
(Flock nods in agreement.)
Max: I have escaped now because I am such a good actor! Now to save the world!
Max Clone: No you won’t!
(A fight scene occurs with very confusing point of view changes with each chapter. I got lost. A lot.)
(real) Max: Yes! I have won because I am the original flavor of mutant bird-girl!
Max Clone: I have no purpose in life. Kill me now.
Jeb: But there can’t be two Maxs!
Max: Should have thought of that before.
(They fly off. That’s all I can remember. Whoops
THE END (or is it?)
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Comments: 270
PuppyFun2 [2017-03-01 15:10:49 +0000 UTC]
Nudge is eleven in the first four books, but turns twelve in the fifth one...
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PuppyFun2 In reply to PuppyFun2 [2017-03-01 15:20:22 +0000 UTC]
I mean, she's eleven in the first FIVE books, and turns twelve in the SIXTH one.
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The24thDoctor [2015-06-01 00:27:01 +0000 UTC]
nice
i think that Nudge is 11 in the first 2 books
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Littlecreater99 [2015-03-09 23:25:34 +0000 UTC]
hahahahahaha hysterical! But completely 100% to everything what goes on in the books Will you do the other books as well??
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pktcat [2013-06-09 10:14:20 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME! Except, here's the thing u should add:
I'm not going to kill my clone because-
Jeb: There can only be one.
I NO KILL HER BECAUSE I TEH HERO-EY TYPE IN THIS STORY!
Jeb: Oh. That explains it.
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ares12 [2013-06-05 04:01:18 +0000 UTC]
This is like one of those Chester A. Bum reviews.
OMG THIS IS THE GREATEST BOOK I"VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!
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ZephyrMaximum [2013-03-16 11:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Um... note to you... the kids arent at a ranch. *.* they're at a hotel/motel/apartment/just anything but the ranch... JUST the get that out there...
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PuppyFun2 In reply to ZephyrMaximum [2017-03-01 15:12:23 +0000 UTC]
Ya, they were at a ranch with Anne, and were at a motel when Max got kidnapped.
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xOptikG4M3R In reply to ZephyrMaximum [2016-09-04 15:09:11 +0000 UTC]
They were. The FBI agent owns one, then invites the Flock to stay there.
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xOptikG4M3R In reply to xOptikG4M3R [2016-09-04 23:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Don't listen to that Optik, you are correct. I think he meant that they were in an hotel/motel/apartment when Max got kidnapped.
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katnisseverdeen4life [2013-01-31 01:59:28 +0000 UTC]
gosh, i just laughed till i couldn't breathe.
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MaximWolf [2012-09-10 20:41:39 +0000 UTC]
BWAHAHAHAHA!! so funny! you should do book three trough 6 now! or was there 7? i can't remember......
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SansTheSkeleton77 In reply to MaximWolf [2012-10-17 21:29:37 +0000 UTC]
there are 8 books total.
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MaximWolf In reply to SansTheSkeleton77 [2012-10-18 17:25:16 +0000 UTC]
yup and i love em all
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SergeantLeBomb [2012-05-22 01:20:28 +0000 UTC]
I honestly LOVE maximum ride...But this was fucking hilarious.
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Strangewarriorcat [2012-05-17 18:35:36 +0000 UTC]
that made me laugh so👍: 0 ⏩: 0
swift-song [2011-11-16 01:07:39 +0000 UTC]
Cracked up so hard reading this!! (My sister just walked in and she's staring at me like Ima lunitic....) *Awkward* 0_o
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souleevee67 [2011-10-07 15:30:09 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHAHAHa! LOOOOOOL soooooooooo funneh! MAKE MORE PLZ
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Shadowdragon5000 [2011-09-26 17:51:53 +0000 UTC]
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I was bored....
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Aspie314 [2011-07-13 15:54:41 +0000 UTC]
I was cracking up the entire time. It's so sad that this is the reality of that series. You should do the rest of the books. Or have you already done them? *goes to check your page*
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iampyrocelia [2011-05-17 23:13:34 +0000 UTC]
hahahahahaahhahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahaahaahahahahahahahahaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AppledPie [2011-02-28 05:07:24 +0000 UTC]
'loud mouthed nine year old'
... You mean 11?
And omg this is good ^^ It made me giggle.
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larak333 [2011-02-18 18:03:05 +0000 UTC]
errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...................
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caliwings In reply to larak333 [2011-02-20 11:40:19 +0000 UTC]
Does this not please you? :'C
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larak333 In reply to caliwings [2011-02-20 23:30:22 +0000 UTC]
no- no dont cry.... i just think its cute-strange thatse all
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vampireknightgirl100 [2011-02-01 21:21:37 +0000 UTC]
OMG! Thatsfreaking hilarious!!! Love it!
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BucketListMod [2011-01-11 01:10:34 +0000 UTC]
This is like cliffnotes for the cliffnotes! XD Great job!
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iCookiePanda [2011-01-04 21:20:06 +0000 UTC]
ROFL. This is actually the funniest thing of life. <3
This made my day. XDD Max can be quite annoying at times,
but at least she sets things straight. [mostly].
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caliwings In reply to iCookiePanda [2011-01-05 07:36:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you found it amusing. :]
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December-Flight [2011-01-04 21:06:38 +0000 UTC]
UUUUUUURRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGH!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, I have to admit this was funny, but you're making fun of the books and that is like, not okay. Any way, funny but insulting.
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