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Calvariae — Correction for unkown-emoidiot
Published: 2010-12-21 23:48:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 7228; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 65
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Original can be found here: [link] , uploaded forI actually don't think I'm in much of a position to correct anyone but #Improvement-Club asked me to, so I thought I should give it a shot. I'm not perfect, either, and most of the things I've "corrected," I'm not entirely sure if I'm right, either. Especially for the wings, sorry! I'm not very good at them. And the arms, I think I folded them back a bit akwardly. Sorry about my own mistakes -bows-
Some important things to remember (courtesy of ~violet-kitsune ): shoulders are not straight lines and are slopped. Arms connect to the shoulder through a joint and are not just straight extensions.
Your art was very cute, keep up the good work and continue to do your best!
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I always thought it depends on the height of the person, but I've heard that an adult is around 7-8?
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yeah you don't quite have the wings right. Try checking out a tutorial on wings and making note of the major structures under a wing and the directions feathers pan out in.
the other issue is that you seem to have some trouble with where the torso connects to the hip, so look into that. The legs are very well drawn here but they seem to be in a different perspective from the upper body. and the waist is the breaking point.
what i would have pointed out as well is that shoulders are slopes, not straight lines, and arms connect to the shoulder through a joint and are not just straight extensions. you did all that right in your better version but I would have emphasized those points.
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The wings, admittly, I was too lazy to look for any reference so that's probabaly why xD.
I'll add that to my description : D
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