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camelopardalisinblue — Oceans by-nc-sa
Published: 2014-08-22 01:52:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 617; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description There are oceans that know
your name: they flow fierce and heavy
with the swell of grief.
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Comments: 27

TryToDefineMe [2014-09-21 18:08:03 +0000 UTC]

It needs insight and courage to shape this.

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to TryToDefineMe [2014-10-15 07:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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ourage [2014-09-17 00:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to ourage [2014-10-15 07:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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000SkyArrow000 [2014-08-31 12:36:52 +0000 UTC]

simple and pretty.....good job

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to 000SkyArrow000 [2014-10-15 07:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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000SkyArrow000 In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2015-03-08 16:21:15 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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hopeburnsblue [2014-08-29 21:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Featured 8-29-14 on Multhaiku 's Twitter page at @GenreHaiku .

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to hopeburnsblue [2014-10-15 07:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Eee, thank you so much!

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hopeburnsblue In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2014-10-16 00:26:52 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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haphazardmelody [2014-08-25 08:53:09 +0000 UTC]

So sad and so beautiful.

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to haphazardmelody [2014-08-26 09:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TristanCody [2014-08-24 02:42:25 +0000 UTC]

This ku is a solid punch to the guts of life. I. love. it. 

Those heavy swells ebb back to foam when we realize that those oceans know us and that we know them. . . because, we had to survive in order to know and knowing is half of the battle. 

Beautiful haiku.

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to TristanCody [2014-08-26 09:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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PeanutbutterSandman [2014-08-22 23:01:56 +0000 UTC]

you need many words to create meaning here; it's a wonderful poem

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to PeanutbutterSandman [2014-08-26 09:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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PeanutbutterSandman In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2014-08-26 17:51:02 +0000 UTC]

i just realized i forgot a word, i meant you don't need a lot of words, sorry! but it's a beautiful haiku, very welcome! 

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to PeanutbutterSandman [2014-10-16 09:22:00 +0000 UTC]

It's okay, I figured!

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Milk-and-Pie [2014-08-22 16:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Stunning job! 

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to Milk-and-Pie [2014-08-26 09:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Milk-and-Pie In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2014-08-28 14:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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SpriteBlayde [2014-08-22 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]

I really love this! And what about "Swelling Tides" or something like that for the title?

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to SpriteBlayde [2014-08-26 09:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Ahh, the main reason I didn't want to title it wasn't so much that I was unhappy with this particular title, it's just that some haiku stand better untitled, and this is one that I feel that applies to. Thank you for the suggestion, though!

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SpriteBlayde In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2014-08-27 03:34:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

You're welcome!

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shep4life [2014-08-22 02:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!

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camelopardalisinblue In reply to shep4life [2014-08-26 09:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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shep4life In reply to camelopardalisinblue [2014-08-26 16:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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