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CandyPiie — [CdR App] Annfrid Hallstroem

Published: 2014-07-28 13:30:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2737; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 4
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Description My application for the glorious I've already created like 3 OCs, but this I SWEAR will be the final at least I hope . I also hope this bs still makes sense. Trying different styles and all

UPDATE 1: Received my app check and tried to rework the app according to the criticism I've received! ;A; 

UPDATE 2: Changed factions and redrew the picture

UPDATE 3: PRAISE THE GODS, I MADE IT IN

A big big hug and thank you to firead , IrissenNii , Sage-Wren and kishi-san For helping me out on this and reading through all this bs!! They helped a lot with content, punctuation and grammar since I'm unable to do this stuff on my own apparently I really can't thank you enough and I appreciate it very much

 

N a m e : Annfrid Hallström

A g e : 21

B i r t h d a y : 25.August [Virgo]

S p e c i e s : Human

F a c t i o n :  Black

J o b : Caretaker



P e r s o n a l i t y : 

+ Sociable
+ Charming
+ Hardworking
+ Devoted
+ Independant
- Conceited
- Jealous
- Selfish
- Materialistic
- Machiavellian

Annfrid is a fairly sociable person, enjoys company and is skilled in the art of making friends. She's open-hearted and outgoing at first glance, which makes her seem quite sympathetic. She's also a ruthless charmer making compliments and even fawning. She knows what others like to hear. Working hard for her goals and dreams doesn't bother her and she puts a lot of effort and time into her career, even if she has to start from the bottom. She is devoted to her job and is the epitome of a diligent worker. What a lot of people appreciate about Annfrid is her independence. She's nobody to bug others about her problems and rather does things on her own, but if asked for help, she'll gladly lend a hand most of the time.

However, appearances can be deceiving. Annfrid is quite arrogant and thinks of herself very highly. She compares everybody to herself and has high standards regarding her surroundings. You notice her arrogance in the way she carries herself, speaks and acts: using big and complicated words or just parading by with her nose up high. She's also quite the jealous type and can be very hostile towards a person she envies. It may just be about insignificant things like clothes or jewelry, but can go as far as her being very possessive of people and being upset about them having closer bonds with others. In general her jealousy is just part of her selfishness. She likes to have the prettiest, nicest things for herself and doesn't like sharing anything. After all Annfrid is also some parts Machiavellian. To achieve whatever she wants, she might use inappropriate methods like lying and is unexpectedly cunning, deceitful and immoral.



H i s t o r y : 

[TL;DR:  

-Born as second child to swedish middle class family
-Normal childhood, until mother suffered from schizophrenia
-Forced to grow up and act mature against her will and take her mother's spot
-Mother sent off into mental institution, Father left them for another woman
-Moved away with her brother, whom she grew emotionally dependant on and possessive of
-Brother announced recent engagement, causing her to try sabotaging his relationship to not lose him
-Got into a fight with him about said engagement, which ended up with her storming out of their apartment
-Found the circus and made the final decision to stay and leave behind the people who abandoned her]

Annfrid was the second child of a Swedish middle class family, which resided in Gothenburg. Her father was a doctor, her mother a simple housewife, but the key character in her life was her brother Arvid, older by 5 years. Her childhood was fairly normal, carefree and spoilt by her parents. However, the family was then confronted with Annfrid's mother suffering from schizophrenia. It was the first time Annfrid wasn't treated like a precious kid anymore, and soon she realized it was already time to grow up and take her mother's spot in the household. She became angry at the situation and how everybody expected her to act mature about it, but was also mad at her mother for abandoning them like that. The young girl didn't want to lose her own teenage years to such a stroke of fate, but had to give in eventually.

Her father distanced himself from his kids and seemingly found a new love long ago. He wouldn't come home for days, and only paid the bills and food. When Annfrid turned 14, he sent their mother off into a mental institution. Since then neither of the siblings heard a word from her, but secretly Annfrid was glad that her mother was gone since she didn't have to take care of her on her own anymore. Arvid, 19 at that time, started working, while Annfrid took care of the household and learnt how to manage her life. Soon their father left them completely, which forced the two of them to move to a smaller apartment and Annfrid to become dependent on her brother. Hearing that her father found a new wife upset her extremely and she felt betrayed, replaced and abandoned again. The loss of both of her parents caused her to be extremely clingy and possessive of her brother. Since he was her rock and emotional support throughout all this time, she didn't plan on giving up on him too.

3 years later her brother revealed his engagement with his boss's daughter, much to Annfrid's distress. She wanted to make sure that no other woman would be able to take another man from her life, even if it meant acting immorally and against her brother's will, but it was all for her own sake. Every time she would meet his soon-to-be wife she was extremely hostile, practically bullying her. She tried to sabotage their relationship many times with different methods, such as writing fake love letters or telling lies about seeing his girlfriend with another man. 

Arvid was faced with two options: Letting his fiancee go or distancing himself from his sister. Eventually he decided that he couldn't stay with Annfrid forever, and both of them needed to have their own lives. He told her that he would move to his fiancee's home, but that he would still provide for Annfrid. She threw an extreme fit and raged all over the place, even hitting him with a feather duster. At the end, in her temper, she bolted out of their apartment.

After a long walk to calm herself down, she caught a glimpse of something, which she went to check out. That was when she found the Cirque des Reves. She was immediately stunned by the looks of it and wandered around the wondrous place. In this place, she felt as if everything would be alright, not only temporarily. After a long night spent in figurative heaven, she made the decision to stay. Maybe it was the best solution. It would certainly take the responsibility her brother had over her away. So with nothing but the clothes she had on and the feather duster she still had in her hand, she decided to start a new life in the circus.



V o i c e : Sarah Howells  with a swedish accent   That's the best I could find, just to give you an idea

L i k e s : 

+ Everything being neat and tidy
+ Long walks
+ Scarfs and hats
+ Eyes
+ Gossiping
+ Fancy events
+ Good books
+ Gambling

D i s l i k e s :

- Extreme goody two-shoes
- Followers
- Ungratefulness
- Being ignored
- Being alone
- Hands and feet
- Smoke

F a m i l y :

- Arvid Hallström [Brother] 
- Simon Hallström [Father]
- Carolina Hallström [Mother]

R e l a t i o n s h i p s : Nothing to see here yet

M I S C/O t h e r  I n f o r m a t i o n: 

- Yes. Yes that is the feather duster she hit her brother with. She somehow is emotionally attached to that old, cheap thing and still uses it for work
- When extremely angry she still likes to "discipline" people with her duster
- Her brother and Annfrid got back in contact, after she wrote a letter explaining the situation. Since then they've been mailing each other regularly. It seems like she has forgiven him, though still a little upset when the subject is brought up
- She decided to be a caretaker, since she didn't really have any qualities, other than being a good housewife and cleaner
- She isn't the smartest and was never exceptionially good at school
- She hates how foreigners pronounce her name with the second part sounding like "Fried" or "Fred", so she keeps telling people to simply call her "Ann"
- She has a thing for gambling, but is extremely bad at it
- She has a common Norwegian name, since her mother originated from Norway
- She hates hands and feet, especially sweaty ones. She usually wears gloves, so she can still shake hands and stuff, but no touching her face, that's a big nono and you might get disciplined




R P  m e t h o d s : 

I'm available anywhere: Chat, Skype, Notes, Docs. Just hit me up with a note or comment. I also don't mind either script or paragraph style, but English isn't my first language, so please bear with me, my mistakes and slowness.
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Comments: 61

CandyPiie In reply to ??? [2014-09-11 23:18:42 +0000 UTC]

no

you are awesome

and pretty, so your OC

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LadyCheck In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-14 00:13:23 +0000 UTC]

plz
you are more awesome
//holds Ann and takes the duster away

she is just so precious okay

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CandyPiie In reply to LadyCheck [2014-09-14 13:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Nonono you are more. Ok then let's trade Ann for Margaret

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LadyCheck In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-16 22:42:41 +0000 UTC]

//gives her
Margaret is derp and can't anything right except for sewing herself to a costume //more like rug// she is trying to make
and stick that needle in her finger

she is derp and you know it

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CandyPiie In reply to LadyCheck [2014-09-23 14:25:09 +0000 UTC]

She is perf and I'd wear anything she'd make, even a rug

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LadyCheck In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-28 12:03:02 +0000 UTC]

it could be a rug full of holes and not much fabric to cover you up
I wouldn't

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SiLvErSOuLsORA [2014-09-07 19:27:29 +0000 UTC]

CONGRATS ON MAKING IT IN

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CandyPiie In reply to SiLvErSOuLsORA [2014-09-08 10:39:43 +0000 UTC]

hdslfsdf THANK YOU

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SiLvErSOuLsORA In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-09 05:56:19 +0000 UTC]

POAISDHFPOHD YOU'RE VERY WELCOME MY DEAR

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CandyPiie In reply to SiLvErSOuLsORA [2014-09-09 10:48:23 +0000 UTC]

AHJDKFKF DID YOU MAKE IT THO

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SiLvErSOuLsORA In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-10 05:16:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm one of the people who got a note asking for minor adjustments so I'm just gonna wait until I know for sure whether I got in or not ; v ; (I fixed those adjustments by the way so I think I'm all good?)

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CandyPiie In reply to SiLvErSOuLsORA [2014-09-10 10:51:51 +0000 UTC]

WELP AWESOME //HIGH FIVES

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SiLvErSOuLsORA In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-11 07:18:39 +0000 UTC]

I got the invite // HIGHFIVES

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CandyPiie In reply to SiLvErSOuLsORA [2014-09-11 10:15:13 +0000 UTC]

//CRAIS

AWESOME, CONGRATTSSSSSS

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SiLvErSOuLsORA In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-12 05:15:36 +0000 UTC]

// YAYYYY ; 7 ;
btw dat doc RP tho o - o

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CandyPiie In reply to SiLvErSOuLsORA [2014-09-12 10:52:42 +0000 UTC]

ikr so long

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SiLvErSOuLsORA In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-12 17:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Mehhhhhhhhhhhh

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TigerBites [2014-09-06 20:29:16 +0000 UTC]

GRATS ON GETTING IN SWEETIE

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CandyPiie In reply to TigerBites [2014-09-06 20:53:39 +0000 UTC]

ASDFGHJKL CONGRATULATIONS TO YOURSELF We'll have to RP sometime //sobs

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magic-bones [2014-08-25 20:12:24 +0000 UTC]

I really like this oc   

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CandyPiie In reply to magic-bones [2014-08-25 21:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Argh, thank you, I'm glad you like her <3

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magic-bones In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-30 20:00:32 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!   

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aukz [2014-08-23 00:42:15 +0000 UTC]

her personality is so fantastic GFHGH I love Machiavellian characters. Annfrid sounds so driven and selfish yet friendly and pleasant most of the time and my heart is just so YASSS
I want to see lots of Annfrid and learn more about her fkghfdg /o\
hhhh her history flows nicely and reads very well, it's a really interesting and enjoyable read!
SHE KEPT THE feATHEr DUSTER. that fact tickles me and i don't know why but i'm glaD SHE HAS IT STILL LMAO

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CandyPiie In reply to aukz [2014-08-23 01:56:47 +0000 UTC]

LGHADSKJFHSDF OH GOD, COME HERE Thank you so much for the kind words, I hope I'll get in and can reveil more of my pleasently silly character! And I also hope your cute brownie gets in, he's too preciousss And that design, seriously. AND I'M GLAD THAT YOU'RE GLAD The feather duster was more like ... Dafuq I need a special item.. And then things just came together lmao

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aukz In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-23 04:52:16 +0000 UTC]

MGNGGHNJFGhj //RUNS aT YOU
I MEaNT ALL THOSE WORDs I'm really looking forward to more Annfrid hHHUFHUFF
thank you omg hhHHHHH
LMFAO IT WAS MEANT TO BE. THAT FEaTHER DUSTER HAS A DESTINy.

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CandyPiie In reply to aukz [2014-08-23 11:02:22 +0000 UTC]

YOU WILL SEE MORE I HOPE. NOW IT'S TIME TO WAIT FOR WHAT SEEMS LIKE AN ETERNITY //UGLY SOBS

AND YES, DESTINY HAS BROUGHT THIS FEATHER DUSTER UPON ME. IT IS A SIGN. I totally want to draw her in a french maid outfit tho honhonhon

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aukz In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-23 16:15:21 +0000 UTC]

LMFAO ikr every day feels like a week omg jittery nerves. gotta dance jigs all day and night to get all the anxious wiggles out--dance with me ey--//smacked

dO IT omg do it hecK YEA

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CandyPiie In reply to aukz [2014-08-23 18:43:46 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW. EACH DAY I'M LIKE //BREATHES HEAVILY INTO PAPER BAG

AND I SHALL LOL. STEWART AND ANN AS BUTLER AND MAID

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aukz In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-27 23:49:09 +0000 UTC]

CLENCHEs FISTs THAt's ADORABLE
tbh i can almost imagine some sort of reality tv show-ish thing where
Annfrid and Stew are hired on as a maid and butler someplace and the competition is to see who lasts longer as an employee while their jobs get increasingly frustrating (i.e. who has higher tolerance for the shenanigans that happen in the manor)
my money is on Ann ngl she's driven and Stew would literally ragequit

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CandyPiie In reply to aukz [2014-08-28 01:28:06 +0000 UTC]

ASDFGHJKL OH MY GOD THAT WOULD BE THE BEST TV-SHOW EVER //PUTS THAT ON LIST OF 'THINGS-I-NEED-TO-DRAW-IN-VERY-VERY-NEAR-FUTURE'

Oh god, just imagine each of them trying to clean a permanent stain and they just dafuq is your problem, just go away

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aukz In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-07 06:18:00 +0000 UTC]

YOU HVE SUCH A PRODUCTIVE IMAGINATION dfghk
BATTLES WITH STAINs. PERMANENT STAINs. YASSSss
meanwhile i imagine Stew and Ann standing on Roomba steeds brandishing brooms/mops like lances and doing that jousting charge thing

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CandyPiie In reply to aukz [2014-09-08 10:41:29 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOD YES. AND AT ONE POINT THEY JUST GIVE UP AND FORK EVERYTHING AROUND THE MANSION UP LIKE I DON'T PLAY BY YOUR DIRTY RULES

AND THE SHOW'S NAME WILL BE... "DESPERATE HOUSEWIVES"

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aukz In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-10 22:50:57 +0000 UTC]

YYYYASSSSSSSSSSSSS
i like this v much

NOT "DESPERATE HOUSEKEEPERS"? LMFAO

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CandyPiie In reply to aukz [2014-09-11 10:16:05 +0000 UTC]

//CRAIS YES I NEED THIS SHOW IN MY LIFE

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aukz In reply to CandyPiie [2014-09-12 03:16:02 +0000 UTC]

sAME

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dreaming-baka [2014-08-22 22:04:20 +0000 UTC]

omgosh she's so cute

LOL I had to google what Machiavellian was. Oh mai..

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CandyPiie In reply to dreaming-baka [2014-08-22 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]

asdfghjk argh thnk you so much  

It's ok, a lot of people had to, but I liked the description :iconmingplz.

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dreaming-baka In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-26 22:17:12 +0000 UTC]

hehe np~

XD It was awesome

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JadenKismet [2014-08-19 19:27:38 +0000 UTC]

FHDISAO;GHROIAHG;R SHE'S SO PRETTY AMG *TOOCHES ALL OVERRRRRRRRRR*

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CandyPiie In reply to JadenKismet [2014-08-19 20:40:59 +0000 UTC]

ASDIHFASLDHFJLSADF THANK YOU dshflaksjdf

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IrissenNii [2014-08-19 18:54:40 +0000 UTC]

You changed colors didn't you xD

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CandyPiie In reply to IrissenNii [2014-08-19 18:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes I did Maybe I'll have a higher chance of getting in then

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IrissenNii In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-19 18:57:35 +0000 UTC]

how desperate x'D

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CandyPiie In reply to IrissenNii [2014-08-19 19:00:03 +0000 UTC]

I truely am, ain't I?

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IrissenNii In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-19 19:01:40 +0000 UTC]

-hugs-

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peanutin [2014-08-03 14:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Foooolds ♥ ! I love her character !

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CandyPiie In reply to peanutin [2014-08-03 17:58:50 +0000 UTC]

FOLDS ON DRESSES ARE SO MUCH EASIER

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h-0 [2014-08-01 06:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Asahi has such a beautiful character <3

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CandyPiie In reply to h-0 [2014-08-01 09:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Another Haikyuu fanatic omg   I know, right? He is such a precious, feeble, giant teddy bear, I love him to pieces

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h-0 In reply to CandyPiie [2014-08-01 09:20:38 +0000 UTC]

LETS GET INTO RED TOGETHER- ASDF

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