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Description Third and final page of the adaptation of COA:ACO chapter 3, scene 13. From the COA rewrite/reload project.

he story itself can be seen on my website archive, or on my FFN page. [link]

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Her eyes rolled, and he could feel her mind opening up. Her legs wrapped around one of his, and he winced at the pressure as she twisted, trying to break his femur. She laughed again, licking her lips. Then another crackle of Chaos Energy shot into her temple, momentarily spiking up her hair.

“Who are you working for, Fiona?’ he asked again, feeling certain that he’d finally gotten through. “Who?”

“J… Jet…” she breathily replied. “Jet hired me. Needed… more men… Nic and I needed money…”

“You betrayed your people… your country…”

“Not my people…” she spat out, and a sob cut in between pained laughs. “Not mine… I… I…”

“They are your people.”

“Not mine.” She chuckled again as she stared up at him, light blue eyes glazed over. “Not yours, either. You don’t know… just how little… people even think about you…”

He steeled his features. He wouldn’t let her mind games get to him, not when he was the one supposed to be invading her thoughts.

“What was Jet after?”

“Jet…” She weakly tried to shake her head. “Jet was… he wanted…they wanted him to get… the… the locations…”

“They’re after the Chaos Emeralds, aren’t they?”

“No. Yes… and something else… an artifact… a scepter…”

“Who is Jet working for?”

“I heard him… listened in… he and that cat…”

Tails eyebrows perked up at this. She had to mean the feline rider from before.

“Order from… Meph… Mephiles…”

“Who is this feline? And who is Mephiles?”

“Only called her ‘B.’ No names. Never… worked with her before… don’t know who Mephiles… is…”

Finally, her breathing heavy, Fiona stopped struggling under him. Still straddling her and holding her down, Tails processed what he’d heard, and what he’d felt. Then, looking down at her, he noticed the wound on her side had reopened. There was blood on the floor, and blood on his knees. Her blushing carmine fur was matted and soaked with sweat, her darker auburn hair disheveled and strewn about beneath her in every direction. Even her seemingly out of place hair tie, her yellow ribbon, lay in a tangled mess.

Releasing her handcuffs, he reeled back slightly, breaking his hand’s contact with her forehead. He’d gotten what he’d wanted out of her; so why was he struck by this sudden regret for what he’d done? They’d have wrung the information out of her somehow anyway. But this… was…

Beneath him, Fiona reached up, and gently probed the bullet wound in his left arm. It stung just enough to bring him back from his thoughts.

“Mine…” she whispered, a beautiful smile on her face. She poked the wound harder, drawing blood. “Mine.”

“You were aiming for my chest,” he remembered the shot. And that he had moved at the last possible second.

“I was aiming for your heart…” she seemed to come back to herself, and despite her exhaustion, she managed a small laugh. “I’m so glad… I could leave you with this scar…”

For just a moment, grief crossed her features.

“You never left me with anything… until now…”

He grabbed her hand before she jabbed her finger deeper into his flesh. “Why do you do this, Fiona?”

“Because I like it…” she admitted, totally honest. “Because I don’t care, and neither should you.”

It was just the sort of thing he’d expected to hear; she never changed. “Where are they going? The Rogues, and those two others?”

Fiona pulled his hand to her face, and nuzzled it. “I’ll tell you. Just this once... Because you’ve been so much fun… Because it felt like I was with him again.”
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Comments: 28

Casirethedragon11 [2017-09-02 06:04:33 +0000 UTC]

shut up Fiona xD

also , is this discontinued? :C

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jeremy1555 [2016-10-11 05:21:20 +0000 UTC]

MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!

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MasterPerryMartin [2014-06-23 18:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Fuck this. (stabs Fiona in the neck and she drops dead) There. Wasn't so hard, was it?

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GothicFear836 [2014-06-03 22:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Let me specify something. When I say my character "Likes getting rough." i don't mean sexually. She's 13. I'm sick but I'm not THAT sick.

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GothicFear836 [2014-06-03 20:56:28 +0000 UTC]

The weird part is my OC's only 13. But then again, Fiona's only 16.

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GothicFear836 [2014-06-03 20:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Dude I like Fiona and all.... but even i have to admit that she was a bitch to tails. I mean seriously. He was an eleven year old with a crush on her. The least she could've done was be sensitive to his feelings when telling him the cold reality of the situation. But no. She was a complete and total bitch about it. And I think this could be considered Tails' revenge. One thing that confuses/intrigues me is the fact that she's enjoying the rough interrogation. The first thing that pops in my head is that she not only likes it rough but alßo has hidden feelings for Tails. Why else would she like it when he's rough. And I know everyone's going to say I'm wrong cuz she says that it reminds her of Scourge. But in case no one actually read the comics. Scourge never actually cared for Fiona. He was using her for her talents and kept her around for her looks. That's it. He was rude, mean, and selfish towards her and the only time he ever called her babe was when he needed something. At least that was the case a majority of the time. Either way, I think she harbors hidden feelings for the kid. But doesn't want to show them cuz she thinks they're both ridiculous and could get her hurt more than she already is. Cuz if you remember, she thought herself abandoned by sonic and the freedom fighters. But I like the scene. My OC's kinda like this. She loves getting rough, and she loves it when she gets hit. She's sort of an adrenaline junkie. Her back story is similar to Fiona's only she can't remember any of it. She has amnesia.

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CapnChryssalid In reply to GothicFear836 [2014-06-05 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Fiona has some pretty serious mental issues in Cycle of Ages. Well, this scene alone should make that pretty evident.

She certainly does enjoy it, just like she enjoyed the fight that ended with her capture. Hurting others and being hurt in return is not just exciting, but how she pursuits relationships with others. She expresses interest in others not by trying to help them but by making them into an enemy - she sees that sort of bond as deeper, more satisfying and more meaningful. She remarks in this scene that she wounded him, and lovingly calls the wound "hers," only to complain that - until this moment - Tails never reciprocated her feelings by hurting her back. This, of course, disgusts himself, both because he let his emotions cloud his judgment, and because he gave her essentially what she wanted. He tried to keep the interrogation clinical and impersonal, but that's a lie, since, as you guessed, he does want her to feel something from the experience ("those were your words; regret them.")

Half the main cast in COA are really screwed up in the "unable to form healthy relationships" sort of way.
It is worth adding that, as described in another scene-interpretation comic I did forever-ago, Anti-Tails revealed that he lured Fiona to Scourge specifically as a means of exploiting Scourge's one weakness (women). The fact that Fiona was then responsible for Scourge's death (the Anti-Tails used her to find the Anarchy Beryls, hexxed them, and then waited until Scourge used them, poisoning himself at the moment when he needed the power the most) drove her even further over the edge, making her into what she is by the time of COA (and this scene). Hence why she's still in denial about him being dead. She is very much not sane.

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GothicFear836 In reply to CapnChryssalid [2014-06-05 02:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh and another thing that differentiates the two Maria's is in the backstory of my version of her anti, Shadow's anti didn't care for her and left her to die on Moebius's version of the arc. Which fed to her mental instability. And the hostility he showed towards her over the years fed it even more.

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GothicFear836 In reply to CapnChryssalid [2014-06-05 02:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Sounds interesting. My Character is my version of Maria Robotnik's Anti. Instead of being sweet and innocent, she's brutal and uncaring. Though, she doesn't remember her life in Moebius (or that she's Maria Robotnik's anti.) when she first meets the freedom fighters, she's mentally stable. But as she gains her memories back, the insane side of her slowly returns. The only one who even recognizes her at the beginning is Shadow. He thinks she's Maria at first, but quickly catches on to the fact that she's an anti. (the scar over her right eye, and her completely different personality tips him off). But she's human at the beginning of the story. And until she lost her memory in a massive explosion caused by doctor eggman, she went by the name Luna, to further differentiate herself from her prime. Maria Robotnik (the hedgehog) exists in my story. Shadow just hasn't allowed Luna to meet her yet.

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TeamNazo [2014-01-22 20:52:18 +0000 UTC]

next part!

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Vector9000 [2013-06-17 22:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Mephiles? First off all he makes his own army by cloning himself and he is a Demi god. Who needs men if you got the power to control darkness?

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keybladeaprentice [2011-09-11 01:36:57 +0000 UTC]

bitch needs to die

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RadKoopa [2011-05-02 01:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Scourge: -shoots tails int h ehead and teleports fiona away-

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chaosfreak11 In reply to RadKoopa [2014-01-05 13:18:03 +0000 UTC]

He is dead smart one.

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susan-the-hedgehog1 In reply to RadKoopa [2012-04-09 14:40:28 +0000 UTC]

i thought h died

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roxanne14 [2010-08-02 19:39:28 +0000 UTC]

wow cool! I read the story and now I'm hooked!

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JaxxSentinel [2010-07-08 05:52:21 +0000 UTC]

had to read it after seeing this and now im hooked o.o

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Bobo1806able [2009-09-06 21:22:13 +0000 UTC]

awesome story you got here

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tiakl4ever [2009-07-24 10:25:51 +0000 UTC]

not bad not bad at all

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Oberst-Von-Grobel [2009-06-28 08:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Sniff Sniff... I smell a Geneva Conventions Violation...

Wait, was there a Geneva Conventions or equivalent on Mobius, or can you do whatever to your prisoners?

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CapnChryssalid In reply to Oberst-Von-Grobel [2009-06-30 14:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Doubt it.

The Geneva Conventions were an international agreement that evolved out of the pre-existing system of Balance of Power and the treaty system forged at Westphalia. Without a balance of power between states, and an attempt to seriously recreate a "rules of war" approach, there would be no Conventions regarding the legality or illegality of actions involving POWs.

Of course, Fiona is more of a terrorist than an enemy soldier, anyway.

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Oberst-Von-Grobel In reply to CapnChryssalid [2009-07-04 05:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Really? I thought she was something like a regular soldier or something. If she's a Terrorist, whatever Tails does, she has coming.

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CapnChryssalid In reply to Oberst-Von-Grobel [2009-07-04 23:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you consider Scourge to be a legitimate authority or representative of Moebius, and Fiona his soldier, then that is a line of argument. However, as there is no official relationship (politically) between Mobius and Moebius, her actions do not have state sponsored patronage and she is not recognized as a uniformed soldier. If she actually had access to a lawyer, he could well argue the above (since Scourge called himself "king" of Moebius), but the Kingdom of Acorn is far from a democracy in COA and there is no document guaranteeing Mobians what we would call "fundamental and inalienable" rights to a trial of any sort.

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371312 [2008-08-27 02:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Holy Crap! Tails used Shining Finger from G Gundam!??

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CapnChryssalid In reply to 371312 [2008-08-28 08:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Ha! Mentioning that old show with its windmill and giant mackerel mecha...

From what I recall, the use of an actual "Shining Finger" would have left Fiona splattered over half the room. Nothing quite so dramatic.

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371312 In reply to CapnChryssalid [2008-08-28 17:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! xD
The Tequilla Gundam! xDD Holy crap, that was the oddball of all oddballs! But I loved that show!

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CapnChryssalid In reply to 371312 [2008-08-28 21:57:01 +0000 UTC]

It certainly was very... hot blooded.
A little over the top for me, though. I lean towards the UC Gundam verse; I loved 8th MS Team.

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Ape32 [2008-08-20 01:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Oke doke, just read the previous two pages, and as per usual your stuff is excellent, both in terms of writing and visuals. Curious as to where you'll be going with Blaze and the Riders crew, but I'm sure I'll find out more upon reading the actual story, eh heh. But hey, least I got stuff to look forward to in the future, given your one of my favorite fanfic authors and stuffs.

Fiona....has some severe issues it would seem.

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