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Capt-Exce77ence — Could Use Feedback For OC Redesign, Also Ask Milo
Published: 2013-01-25 04:07:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1267; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 12
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PLEASE READ THE DESCRIPTION AND COMMENT!I must first apologize for the quality of the picture on the right - resizing did a number on him; the original is much cleaner.
So, it has come to my attention that, by coincidence, my OC, Milo, shares a close resemblance to some anime show character or something (I think it's like England or something - I don't watch anime nor like it). I have concluded that this may have partially been the reason for my character getting snubbed from many questions. Therefore, I have decided to redesign him and made him less faithful to the real AT style (as it seems everyone else has anyway).
*I'd just like to know what you guys think on whether I should change my style or which you like more.*
I plan to keep the older more faithful design for the storyboard I'm making.
- It's set during the Great Mushroom War and will focus on Marceline, Simon, Abadeer, the Lich, etc. (just check out the link, OK)
Lastly: I'm Always open for questions and rps - hit me up!
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Cat: Me! I count and you hide ~points the knife at him when she says "You"~
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Milo: Oh, I'll play your game you rogue! *winks and runs away*
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Cat: ~starts counting~
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Milo: *laughing* you won't find me!
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Cat: ~smirks~ it defeats the purpose of hide and seek if you're talking ~walks toward your voice~
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Milo: *jumps out* Surprise! Sorry I got bored sitting there...you win I guess...*blows her a kiss and starts dancing backwards - trips and falls on back*
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Cat: ~laughs at you~
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((really thats it!?!))
Milo: *reaches up, grabs her hand and pulls her down beside him* *in sophisticated accent* Don't the stars look just marvelous darling?
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((sorry, on low bender today))
Cat: ~gasps as she gets pulled down then looks at the stars, then gives a sweet smile~ They do, sweetie
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Milo: *kisses her on the cheek* So...getting annoyed that I'm obviously not afraid of you?
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Cat: ~kisses cheek back~ After getting a cheek kiss......I'm okay now
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Milo: well that was entirely anti-climactic...ha!
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Cat: ~smiles~ oh well
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Milo: I thought I'd be dodging knife blows,..possibly have to deal with stab wounds...took a while to get into this...hmmm...well..now what?
So, is that like just some kind of tick you have? like how many people have been...mmm..less lucky than me?
Oh yea and btw, I think I may have lost Kat while I was running back there...
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Cat: Well one I'm stalking right now, he is practically going insane, I molested a 14 year old boy ([link] ), and some other stuff. and Don't worry, I know. She is chained up to a wall in some basement half naked ~smirks at him~
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Milo: *slight gasp*no..That must have been when you disappeared *rubs back of neck* I had been trying to distract you while she got away from you. You know I'm going to have to go after her, right? You may as well tell me...
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Cat: ~points to the fourth house down from them~ By the way, I wasn't lying about it one bit so have fun with that ~smirks at him~
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((so have we been in a neighborhood this whole time?))
Milo: weren't lying about what?
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Cat: About Kat being half naked, chained to a wall ~smirks even more~
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Milo: I didn't doubt it; you're crazy! *starts running towards the house*
---At the House---
Milo: *shoulders in the door | starts looking for the basement | finds a strangely heavy door that must lead to the basement | he breaks his only lock pick while opening it, yet it opens anyway | in the basement he finds Kat and removes her gag*
Are you alright?
*he then begins to undue her chains but curses himself, knowing what is about to happen next, and looks over his shoulder*
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Cat: ~closes and locks the heavy door, there was a speaker in the room which was turned on so they both can hear her maniacal laugh~ Having fun Milo?
Kat: You......should have just run away......
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Milo: isn't it a bit cliche to have a speaker system set up already Cat? and no, no I am not...
*to Kat* Ya. I should have, but that's just not me.
*back to you* so what do you want?
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Cat: To see you bleed, maybe even hear you scream 
Kat:......I hate it when she gets like this
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Milo: mmhmm...that's nice, you do realize that you're not in the room right?
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Cat: Doesn't mean I can't still see you sweetie
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Milo: oh and you just expect me to willingly take a nap so you can come in and chain me up like Kat or are you thinking I just gonna start cutting myself?
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Cat: Nope, I except you to play the game ~secret door in the room opens~ There is a maze with many traps and dangerous animals in there, lets see if you survive
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Milo: B-but I just want you babe...*innocent look into the camera*
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Cat: I'm on the other side of this maze, if you want me that badly. Let hope you survive, I'll be waiting
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Milo: *to self*I don't think it worked this time; she still seems crazy.
Well, let's do this! *goes in*
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~his foot slightly touches the floor inside and he almost walked into a trap floor with spikes at the bottom as Cat laughs~
Cat: Have fun Baby
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Milo: lucky for me, I'm real adventurer *pulls out a bullwhip and swings across (doesn't lose hat)* next room
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Cat: ~laughs~ You have to fight three vicious animals, with your bare hands if you don't, Kat gets punished from your actions ~Kat has a short but loud scream of pain~
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Milo: *sprinting as fast as he can, slaps a wolf, lion, and bear as he runs by and through the door* You never said I had to defeat them! hehe!!!
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Cat: I said "Fight" didn't I? You only hit them ~Kat screams in pain again~
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Milo: tsk tsk you ought not do that. I got a few nicks on my way through. It counts regardless of the brevity of it
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Cat: Fine, next room is the maze. Watch your step and hope you're not bleeding out by the end of it
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What can I expect in this maze?
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Cat: Lots of traps, wild animals, enemies, Oh and a illusion room.
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Milo wanders through the maze, barely escaping some of the traps and would have almost certainly been killed by the poison he drank, had he not built of a resistance to iocane powder during his time in Australia.
He loses his helmet during a fight, with it saving him from being shot in the head only to be destroyed.
by the time he makes it to the end he has been beaten, maimed, and stabbed. he stumbles and collapses through the door*
((Princess Bride reference anyone?))
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((now that you mention it, I do see it))
Cat watches in amusement as Milo goes through her insane maze, laughing the whole time with Kat screaming at Cat to stop it, crying. Cat keeps smiling as he collapse through the door~ "Having fun Milo?"
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Milo:...you..know.it...babe....
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Cat: Well, have fun in the next room, Fear Room. ~laughs some more~
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Milo: I have...no fears..haha! *limps into room*
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Cat: You sure? ~laughs some more as he goes into a dark room, magic goes into his mind and brings out any fears he may have~
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you come walking out of the shadows with your arms outstretched, and Milo, while terrified, cannot help but be drawn in
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Cat: ~smirking as she watches his fear from the screen~
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Milo: *salutes the camera and with a smile and a wink* Enjoy!
*he raises his gun and shoots her right in the head*
You know..It's a whole lot less frightening when you tell someone that it's in my mind.
*He steps over her body, a pool of red slowly forming around it, and its eyes, wide, staring up into the sky. laughing, he walks into the next room and is much more confident than before*
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Cat: I'm liking you more and more sweetie
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((shall we move this to the notes))
Milo: what else you want from me?
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