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Newest update + changes:07 . 28 . 2016 | So, I'm not sure what will happen to Smoke at this point in time. I believe the reason he switched ShadowClan no longer exists in the group, but I will most likely be keeping Snowkit & him in regardless. I'm working out character stuff right now. Anyway--App transfer, gave him the new stat format & touched some things up!
Previous update + changes:
04 . 04 . 2016 | HE IS NOW A PART OF SHADOWCLAN. An RP prompt picture will be put up of him soon where you can do goodbye RPs either set before/while he is leaving the camp (By before, I mean a few days before or something). New app art + MAJOR updates to his description! History cannot be updated yet until a few RPs are wrapped up, which will allow me to update his history to the point where he joined ShadowClan.
03 . 27 . 2016 | Some minor updates! Not much can be done for now, but I will be updating his history after a few key RPs occur. Also--He's gonna be a dad! :'D
12 . 22 . 2015 | Big tol puff now has an apprentice (Silverpaw)! I tried to work on his relationships, but I failed miserably when I lost motivation. I'll update his relations later.
11 . 26 . 2015 | App uploaded + Description uploaded! May be sketchy in some places. He is still under development. I will fully update his history / etc later on! (Awaiting acceptance into the group.)
. I d e n t i t y .
Name . Smokekit / Smokepaw / Smokemask / Smokepaw
Name Breakdown .
{Smoke} - Referencing his pelt coloration, and the smoky look his fur has when water flows through it.
TEMP {Paw} - The standard suffix for an apprentice.
{Mask} - For his camouflaging abilities that helped his assessment + his facial markings.
Previous names .
Smokekit, Smokepaw, Smokemask
Nickname(s) . Smoke
Age . 37+ Moons
Birth Season . Leaf-fall
Sex . Male
Gender (Pronouns) . Male (He/Him)
Clan . ShadowClan
Formerly RiverClan
Rank . Temp. Apprentice
. Physical Health Status .
10/10
"He is currently in perfect physical condition!"
. Mental Health Status .
5/10
"The move has damaged him greatly. While he acts brave and calm, he's emotionally combusting on the inside. It'll be hard to notice."
. Stats . [ ★ / ✩ ]
Leadership .
★★★✩✩
Endurance .
★★★★✩
Intelligence .
★★★✩✩
Strength .
★★★★★
Agility .
★★✩✩✩
Loyalty .
★★★★✩
. Physical Appearance & Stats .
Size . Large. Picture a full grown Maine coon.
Build . Stocky, strong
Height . Tall
Weight . 22 lbs
- Eyes . Bright amber
- Nose . Dusty rose
- Tongue . Dusty rose
Fur texture . Silky in some areas, oily in others. Springy around his rear.
Tail length . Long (mainly fur)
Leg length . Normal
Ear shape . Semi-sharp tips, medium-large
Ear texture . Prickly in some areas, soft in others
. Breed(s) .
{50%} . Maine Coon
{20%} . Norwegian Forest Cat
{10%} . Siberian
{11} . Chantilly-Tiffany
{9%} . Birman
Scars / Disabilities .
- Shoulder scar (Border Skirmish.)
- Two scars on his bottom lip (Hidden by his longer fangs. Caused by them, as he bites his lip unknowingly.)
Scent(s) . River, Dandelions
. H i s t o r y .
. Kithood . "The Outsider's call."
(0-6 Moons)
- Left at the border, the mysterious little kit was discovered by a RiverClan patrol probably half of a day after being discarded. He was quite the strong kit to survive in the bitter cold of Leaf-fall's near end, but was quite sick and had to immediately be taken to the clan's medicine cat for treatment. His recovery was smooth. Once he was out of the den and accepted fully into the clan as one of their own, he was named "Smokekit" for the patterns in his fur.
- Smokekit was adopted by two kind cats, Yarrowfoot (father) and Fallenheart (mother). Yarrowfoot was very confident and head-strong, always finding ways to do things. Fallenheart was calm and collected, usually sighing at his fathers' antics. Their relationship together overall was very nice. The clan apparently envied their love.
- Sometimes, Smokekit would notice Fallenheart leaving the den at night without an explanation. He spent quite a few nights in the nursery alone. It began to happen more frequently throughout his moons as a kit, and he heard word of why. Fallenheart and Yarrowfoot had tried to have kits previous to his adoption. Three kits came out as still-borns, and the fourth passed soon after from a vicious round of greencough. He did not understand what this meant at the time. Soon, Yarrowfoot and Fallenheart had been seen discussing things in hushed voices near the entrance of the camp on multiple occasions. It all led to their mysterious disappearance when he reached his 6th moon. They could not look at him without sorrow, he had realized at a later date. His apprentice ceremony felt empty without his adoptive family beside him. He took after his father's personality a lot.
. Apprenticeship . "The Eye of the Raven."
(6-12 Moons)
- Smokekit, now Smokepaw, was mentored by one of the fiercest warriors he had met; Raveneye. She was not a she-cat to be meddled with. Cold and hard-working. Her eyes saw all. If you did something behind her back, she would find out. Sneaking up on her was near impossible (he tried many times). Just when you thought you would pin her, she would whisk herself away with grace. He desired to take after her so much, but she said something that made him change his mind. "You and I are different; while I value speed and evasion, you value strength and power. Do not expect to become like me when your views are different from mine. Do you want the power to defeat your enemies, or do you want the speed to escape their claws?"
- From there on out, he kept devising strategies to work against her. It took quite a while before he ever won a match against her, and then she really started the training. He became a powerhouse shortly after, focusing on his strength more than his agility. He grew stronger and stronger, using sneaky maneuvers to outwit faster opponents.
- His training ended with Raveneye being almost like a mother to him; while still coarse and distrusting, she would occasionally be warmer to him.
- His final assessment was astounding! His mentor was absolutely shocked to see that he had picked up such a tactic at his age. While hunting a massive river pike, his pelt had been giving him away. He covered himself in reeds, mud, and other assorted natural materials. Once under the water, he stuck to the river's bed so his cover would blend him in with the floor. That is the spawn of his suffix--"mask".
- During his ceremony, his mentor disappeared into the leaf-bare cold. The snow covered whatever tracks she would have left behind. Now without his former mentor, he was distraught, but vowed to make the clan proud of the warrior she had raised.
. Warriorhood . "Times Are Changing."
- His first moons as a warrior were simplistic. Nothing very large happened--a few border skirmishes, spending all day by the water to catch fish, things such as that. His life was as simple as a warrior's life could be. He had some friends, but mostly tried his best to be an amazing warrior. His size and strength was a proven asset to the clan, and despite his thick coat of fur, he is one of the best swimmers in his clan.
- During a particular border skirmish against a WindClan warrior, his shoulder was torn while he defended another clanmate. If he hadn't done so, the other cat would have bled out through the multiple wounds they had been given.
- Not that long into his warrior moons, Echostar fitted him with an apprentice. His name was Silverpaw: a small tom-cat that was very eager to train. This was very pleasing for Smoke.
- Shortly into his 25th moon, Echostar went missing. As all cats did, he mourned the loss of his leader, completely confused and distraught. He kept it under wraps for the sake of his younger clanmates; most of which were already freaking out. Distressed and concerned, he grabbed a warrior and went out on a small scouting patrol. This she-cat was named Aspenbranch. During their search through the harsh blizzard, Aspenbranch accidentally slipped into an old rabbit's burrow, and Smoke fell in with her when he tried to get her out. They became enclosed in the space when the entrance filled up.
- Eventually he gained a close friendship with Aspen, as well as his apprentice, now named Silverthorn. All was quite well in his little world--up until he met a beautiful she-cat named Whitewhisker. Everything seemed so dull in comparison to him after he saw her, for he thought she was the most extravagant cat he'd ever met. And so, their relationship flourished, though not exactly in a mateship way--it was a fling.
- Soon Whitewhisker was mothering his kits, and Smokemask was ecstatic. He honestly had a massive choice to make in response, though... Leave RiverClan to be with them, or stay and watch them from afar?
- [Will continue later!]
. Personality & Persona .
Theme Song(s) . (Songs here)
. Previous Traits .
(Time traits were applicable)
(Traits here)
. Current Traits .
{Goofy, Flirtatious, Benevolent, Clever, Confident, Fatherly}
{Competitive, Proud, Determined, Protective}
{Blunt, Envious, Forgetful, Quirky, Strong-willed, Wishful}
Brief Overview .
Coming soon!
. Disorders / Mental Illnesses .
No known disorders/mental illnesses!
. Fears .
Minor . Floods, tyrants, Betrayal, Aspen + His other RiverClan friends hating him
Phobias . Death, confined spaces, Meeting RiverClan in battle
. Goals .
- KITS
- Gain lots of friends
- Kill someone accidentally
- Become a great warrior
. P e r s o n a l .
Current Mate .
Previous Mate(s) .
Ex-Mates .
Kits . Snowkit, Wolfkit, Owlkit
Romantic Interests . Whitewhisker (Strong), Aspenbranch (Unknown)
Past Romantic Interests . Mintheart (small, brief)
. Orientations .
- Sexual Orientation . Heterosexual
- Romantic Orientation . Panromantic
- Gender Preference . She/her, He/Him, They/Them, etc
|X| = Really Want
|x| = Wouldn't Mind
|| = Ignored/Low Interest in
|X| { Long-Lasting Relationship }
|X| { Quick Fling }
|| { One Night Stand }
|x| { Crush/Puppy Love }
|x| { Cross-Clan }
|| { Too Young }
|| { Not Interested }
|| { Taken }
Preferences / Desirable Traits .
✓:
- Bright eyes
- Playful, adventurous cats
- Fascinating markings
- Scarring
- Sweet talkers
✕:
- Brash, hateful personalities
- Arrogance, egotism, narcissism
- Hostile cats
- Liars
- Fully black cats (Reminds him of Raven)
. E d u c a t i o n .
Past/Current Mentor(s) . Raveneye (Past), Ferretcall ( Current, StruggleMatch )
Current Apprentice . N/A
Past Apprentice . Silverthorn
. Teaching Style . Relaxed & fatherly, but hard-working.
Description - When training an apprentice, he would act similarly to a father-like figure to the smaller cat. He's generally relaxed and rarely frets over spilt milk, and even encourages failure so that they can be motivated to try harder. He does not allow slacking though, so don't think you'll sneak out of training on him!
Forest Hunting .
5/10 - "He's been an observer of ThunderClan's warriors while on the border, so he has picked up a few miscellaneous tricks to pull out of his bag."
Moor Hunting .
2/10 - "Hunting out in the open? Definitely not something he's good at with his size. He is too obvious."
Fishing .
8/10 - "Did you ever doubt that he would be a good fisher? His snaggle tooth makes giving killing bites easier, and sometimes fish even get tangled in his fur. He's like a cat fishing net!"
Swimming .
9/10 - "Sometimes his fur gets caught on things, but overall, he's like a fish when in water."
Patrolling Borders .
7/10 - "The occasional mishap happens when he is on the job, but he does pretty good at keeping the borders safe."
Fighting .
9/10 - "His size & strength makes up for his lack of speed. He is efficient at fighting, and his fur helps shelter most of his enemy's blows!
Thinking .
7/10 - "He may not seem like the sharpest tool in the shed, but most of his thinking is at the back of his mind."
Running .
6/10 - "Most of his running looks like jogging, but if he's trying, he's probably terrifyingly fast from the momentum he can give himself."
Stalking .
6.5/10 - "He's not exactly a small & silent stalker, but he isn't terrible at stalking, either. In fact, he is decent."
Leading .
6/10 - "Not much of a leader, but he can be if he needs to be."
Mentoring .
8/10 - "Training Silverpaw(Thorn) has given him a lot of insight into being a mentor."
Medicine .
1/10 - "If you get a cut, he can help keep it from bleeding too badly with cobwebs and leaves... That's about it."
Strength .
8/10 - "He has trained long and hard with his strength, building it up so that he can protect his clan."
Adaptability .
6/10 - "He does not like change, but his switch to ShadowClan has opened his eyes. He's slowly getting better at adapting."
Speed .
5/10 - "Not the fastest, but can launch himself off of things to pick up speed."
Night Vision .
9/10 - "He's used to not being able to see correctly, so his eyes have adjusted so said things."
Climbing .
3/10 - "Not the best and usually falls out, but it's something."
Stalking .
4/10 - "He's big and noisy sometimes, so he doesn't exactly do too well. That will have to change if he is to survive in ShadowClan."
Hunting .
8/10 - "He's worse off in ShadowClan territory, but when fishing, he's excellent."
Strengths .
- His size makes it harder to be toppled by smaller cats.
- Strong jaws make for efficient killing bites.
- Large paws make it easy for him to deliver hard blows.
- His fur makes it harder to wound him, and his attackers will most likely just yank off fur.
- He is great at masking himself with camouflage.
- He's not very great at hiding without camouflage nearby.
- He is not extremely fast when you take his size into consideration. If he was speeding up, he would be launching himself off of things to gain momentum.
- Often forgets about what's behind him while fighting what's in front of him.
- Striking blows
- Balancing
- Being a flirting master (lmao)
- Fishing
- Jumping, climbing
- Smothering cats in his fluff (WHOOPS)
- Camouflaging, cleaning up trails, covering tracks
- Fucking up
. T r i v i a .
Quote . "..." - Char name
Voice . Dean Winchester ( Jensen Ackles in Supernatural )
Likes .
- Adventure
- Moon-high patrolling
- Socializing
- Collecting leaves
- Startling others
- Giving comfort & advice
- RiverClan
- Anything that smells of his old home
- Isolation
- Wide-spread fires
- Rogues (ex-rogues are fine)
- Humidity
- Prey . River Bass
- Season . New-leaf
- Scent . Water lilies, Honey, Fresh air
- Pastime . Socializing
- Time of Day . Early evening
Facts .
- Sometimes, he's overly flirty. If a cat shows disinterest in him, he will apologize for not taking their thoughts into consideration before hand.
- He doesn't like fighting very much, unless it's simply a playful banter, or simple training.
- The smell of fresh rain sickens him.
- He bites his lip because of his tooth quite a bit. He doesn't seem to notice his mouth randomly bleeding anymore.
- He is fatherly to younger clan mates (mainly apprentices & kits).
- He sometimes catches fish in his tail as a small trick for younger cats. He enjoys their amusement.
- Sometimes, he wonders what it would be like to be in another clan.
- Smokemask doesn't know that he was adopted and technically not a clan cat! He was taken into the clan on the day of his birth, so he is basically a clan cat. No one that knew is around to tell him anymore, but some may speculate.
. R e l a t i o n s .
. Family .
- Parents . Celes (Mother, MIA Rogue), Jaques (Father, MIA Rogue)
- Siblings . Unknown
- Adopted Relatives . Fallenheart (Adoptive Mother, MIA), Yarrowfoot (Adoptive Father, MIA)
- Other Relatives .
// Annoyed
// Disliked
// Hated
// Like
// Respected
// Very respected/Admires
// Wary
// Cautious
// Avoided
// Crush/Small feelings
// Strong feelings
// Love
// Friend
// Good friend
// Close friend
// Wants to get to know them
// Misses
// Can't bear without
// Relatives
// Like family
// Family
// Not trusted
// Slightly suspicious
// Very suspicious
// Shy
// Jumpy/Nervous
// Fearful
// Dead
// Mates
:bademoticon: // MIA/Status unknown
// Mentor
// Like Kin / Very close to
. R i v e r C l a n .{Echostar} . Roleplayed by Eeveelutions95 . | :bademoticon: | | | |
"Our leader! I don't know where our clan would be without her guidance... She makes very pleasant company. I would talk to her more, had I been offered the chance."
"Where did you go...? Please return. RiverClan is lost without you."
{Silverpaw} . Roleplayed by VentiusX . | Bullets |
"My apprentice. I have not trained with him much, but I think he shows potential. I'm going to make sure to make him the finest warrior in RiverClan!"
{Aspenbranch} . Roleplayed by lord-timey . | | | | |
"Thoughts."
{Character name} . Roleplayed by/Npc . Bullets
"Thoughts."
. T h u n d e r C l a n .{Mintheart} . Roleplayed by milotlc / Iychee . | | | | |
"Uh... I still feel bad about the whole 'you're scaring away the fish' thing. I didn't notice she was blind until she glared directly at me. Actually, a little to the left of my head. She's pretty nice otherwise, though. ThunderClan has a reliable Medicine cat."
. S h a d o w C l a n .{Character name} . Roleplayed by/Npc . Bullets
"Thoughts."
{Whitewhisker} . Roleplayed by hyrulebitch . | | | | |
"She's pretty witty, and quite nice company. I wouldn't mind being her friend, even if she is from another clan."
"She's been exiled from ThunderClan... I hope she's okay. I'm going to try to really be her friend now."
"I... I have this strange feeling when I'm near her, but I wouldn't tell her that. We're from different clans... Even if she isn't really a part of any clan right now. But... I can't help but to think about her..."
"I'm glad you found a home in ShadowClan, even if I secretly may have wanted you to join RiverClan... I feel this strange warmth when I look at you. You've helped me a lot, and now... It's possible you're going to have my kits. It's still processing. I wonder if I'll ever tell you how I feel..."
. W i n d C l a n .{Character name} . Roleplayed by/Npc . Bullets
"Thoughts."
***RELATIONSHIPS WILL BE UPDATED SOMETIME AFTER TODAY (April 4th, 2015)! I AM PRETTY BUSY SO R IP
. C r e d i t s & L i n k s .Art (c) captain-stream
App (c) DarkWater-Warriors / sunfields
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