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The Fab Four No. 9 – The Fifth Fab. Over the past month a
strange young woman has traveled the globe and assisted
members of the Fab Four individually. Each time using their
powers to do so, which is apparently her power. She calls
herself Invada, and now she's met the Four together to ask for
membership. Initially, her request is rejected, but somehow
Invada has altered the minds of the entire team, and joined
them as their fifth member. Invada's goal is the eventual
take over of Philadelphia, and the nation. First order of
business is sealing off the city, and counter any resistance from
the police. Ultimate Power and Falcon Heart will deal with the
authorities, Arctic Wolf will act as Invada's personal guard
while Tecnicus uses his powers to erect a shield over the city
until the Fab Five has complete control. Tecnicus explains
his power to create solid working images was not powerful
enough to maintain a city sized shield for very long. Laughing
at his statement, Invavda tells the team she can read and
understand their powers better than they can themselves.
She choose the Fab Four because other hero teams were too
large, and always together. The Four meet only once and a
while, which gave her time to assimilate their abilities. In
addition, Tecnicus was possibly the most powerful than any
of them. It was by tapping into his powers, Invada was ablie
to control the others. His alien-boosted mental gift is able to
do much more than artistically create structures. Tecnicus has
always underestimated his power levels, but with her help
those levels will be realized. The Fab Five sets out to begin
their city wide take over, but unknown to the team, someone's
been listening. Before Invada entered the meeting room of
the Four, Ultimate Power was about to communicate with
other heroes concerning Invada. He never made the call, but
he accidentally left the communications open. On the other
side of the world, Falcon Heart's wife, the humanoid feline,
Tine overheard everything from the Fab Four base in Belgium.
Knowing she had very little time, Tine used her powerful pet
dog, Tamaz, to transport her to Philadelphia after the team had
departed. Tamaz, the hero hound did so, and then returned to
Belgium as instructed. Meanwhile, Ultimate Power and Falcon
Heart make short work of the police near city hall. None are
hurt, but they are being held in the hall's prison cells in the
basement. Tecnicus hovers high over the city and forms a
transparent shield. The effort is draining, but he's surprised to
see Invada was correct about his limits. He returns to the base
for further orders. Arctic Wolf stands guard at the base entrance
when he catches a familiar scent. Invada stands over the
communication station, checking on the progress of her new
obedient team, as Tine enters the room. Tine can 'smell' the
fear in Invada, and is shocked by it, but then remembers Invada's
powers have no affect on females. Before Tine can attack, she
is intercepted by Arctic Wolf, who takes her to the floor. Invada,
feeling confident reveals her story to the team about her origins
were a lie. She is a succubus from the Ultra Realm, the same
dimension Tine is from. She wanted to dominate that world, but
the males there are far too powerful. On Earth, the male heroes
are like clay, and here she will rule. Invada then orders the
boy wolf to kill Tine before the others return. He raises his
massive claws and pounds them at Tine. Invada, who had turned
away, turns back to inspect Tine's lifeless body. To her amazement,
Arctic Wolf merely hit the floor near Tine, leaving her unharmed.
Invada orders Arctic Wolf to dispose of Tine again. He swings at
her, but doesn't connect. Tine then gets up and leaps at Invada,
just as the rest of the team enters. Invada then orders the Four
to hold Tine, they move toward her without hesitation. Tine turns
to Invada and gives her a single knock out punch. Her link to the
team now severed, they return to normal. Tecnicus creates a cell
that shields the Fab members from her affects, Tine then opens a
portal to the Ultra Realm. Before she departs with Invada and
Tecnicus, Arctic Wolf admits he wanted to obey Invada's command
to kill Tine, but couldn't. Falcon Heart explains his wife is a healer,
and her powers must have partially interfered with Invada's influence,
or it could be that the Four's closeness to Tine prevented any of
them from seriously harming her. Tine and Tecnicus takes Invada
through the portal. On the other side, Tecnicus tells Tine about the
limitations on his powers, and that they seemed to have returned
without Invada's assistance. Tine assures the teen marvel, that in
time his powers will grow as he does. Tecnicus then tells Tine he
told Invada there was no openings for new members in the Fab,
but he was now offering it to Tine. Tine smiles, and hugs the boy
hero, but declines the offer. Tine announces she will be there for
the Fab Four when ever they need her, now and forever. They
again smile and continue on their way. A new enemy is stopped,
but danger is always just around the corner. Will the Fab Four
be able to meet the challenge? The only way to know is in the
next exciting issue of the Fab Four!!
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Comments: 30
mariecurie1800 [2014-03-08 09:38:48 +0000 UTC]
Hello, how did you know this is my way to clean house?
Just kidding.
I really needed this.....made the dark day seems brighter......
Nice cover and I'm honored......
I love the background story....you did a great amazing outstanding job.
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Captain86 In reply to mariecurie1800 [2014-03-08 21:43:33 +0000 UTC]
Anything I can do for you, my dear Sister...please just ask! You
deserve more brighter days!
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mariecurie1800 In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-09 07:24:57 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate your kindness.
If I can do anything for you , you just have to ask too..
I'll be a pleasure...
You deserve also more brighter days dear Brother
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Captain86 In reply to mariecurie1800 [2014-03-10 18:26:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks you Sis. I know this is a hard time for you and the family...
We'll talk real soon.
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mariecurie1800 In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-10 21:11:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Dear Bro'. It's a harsh time suppose Dimi told you more on the phone today.
We sure will talk very soon
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Captain86 In reply to mariecurie1800 [2014-03-11 20:49:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm here for you Sis...always!
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mariecurie1800 In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-12 07:38:36 +0000 UTC]
As I'm here for you too Bro'. ..always!
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BlaineDaymon [2014-03-07 23:51:25 +0000 UTC]
Humm good finish but, and this is just me being a writer, would have loved to read this full script with all the dialog and the fight scene would have been great fully written out, but again just me.
I had this consern with the last issue but i wanted to wait to see if it grew on me. I think you could have come up with a better name for Invada, it just does not fit her powers or personality very well, I think "Siphon" would be better
In the future you should probably try to better explain the relationship between Invada and Tine's powers, the "white paladin" healer expatiation just left me wanting.
also Tecnicus powers, i just don't understand how there can be limits that will raise over time, Conjurers (people that make constructs) don't normally have limits on the size of what they can build, only duration, and streght and most of that is controled by focus and emotional control.
the type of limits you talk about are normal for natural heroes like Meta's and Mutants like U.P. and most of my team excluding Armory, but for people that get their powers after they are born it is usually set at limits and their my be a learning curb but they normally don't grow in strength over time Ms, Marvel is a good example of this, but even Static Shock who is said to be the most power hero in the time travel episode is understandable because he is an elemental and that is normal, but not for a Conjurer.
Just seems a little weird, you should probably do a back story on it, go to space and find the race of being that his powers came from or what not.
Just some observations
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Captain86 In reply to BlaineDaymon [2014-03-08 00:46:23 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to sit and write a full story about the 'Four' or any of my OC's, but I haven't the time. The stories are based on things that
happens on the 'real life' individuals. Invada is a person we know who 'invaded' our space on dA...You have to check out Tecnicus
(which is Latin for artist) to know his story, but the real life person wrestles with the same issues. Falcon Heart and Tine are married
in real life, and all of the character's home countries are real...I live in Philly, Tecnicus in Helchteren and so on.
I try to belt these things out as fast as possible, and don't really consider other people as far as entertainment value other than the
people its based on. The story arch with the Horde is much more involved, but the plot (like all the rest) was greatly condensed to
fit on the dA page. The Pyj world project is much more detailed, I'd like for you to read it...not this stuff. I'll post it again someday.
Thanks for the input. Check you out soon!
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BlaineDaymon In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-08 02:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Just different creative styles i guess. when I look at comics I always compare it to everything else in the comic universe, just because their are some precedences of comic books that i feel need to be followed to be a truely great comic book.
You just free hand it, which is good it breaks you from the ties of doing things the way they have been done in the past lets you experiment and innovate.
nothing wrong with either style, I just wanted you to know where i come from in comic book writing so you don't think i am being critical just to be critical.
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58bluemarbles [2014-03-07 22:24:11 +0000 UTC]
Love it......
Looks as amazing as always. Made my day.........
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Captain86 In reply to 58bluemarbles [2014-03-07 22:29:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad. I started this a while ago, but the story took longer. I'm happy it revolved around Tine this time, especially now.
You said she was a strong woman...now I hope her character reflexes that as well!
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58bluemarbles In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-07 22:41:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm aware it's not easy for you..since your computer shut down....
And I see how much details you put in your covers....
How long do you work on one cover?
Tine will be happy with this. And her character is like she is... she is tiny but strong....
I'll read the background story later....
But it's amazing as always Bro'
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Captain86 In reply to 58bluemarbles [2014-03-07 23:03:00 +0000 UTC]
Its hard to calculate with out my old girl, but before she had her nervous break down it took about three to four hours
from drawing to scanning and finally coloring and text. I never work on them straight through (too busy), but I have
some time while I wait for a library computer.
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58bluemarbles In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-08 11:19:11 +0000 UTC]
How long do you have to wait for a library computer?
I'm aware that not having a computer must be tough for you.
Earlier I worked 10 hours at week ends on one manipulation....
But now since I'm retired...I'm too busy....so I don't do them straight through anymore...
Always start from a white sheet and at the beginning it always looks like nothing...just have to select copy and past like a big jig saw...saving is the biggest work and sometimes takes so much time to...do
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Captain86 In reply to 58bluemarbles [2014-03-11 21:16:11 +0000 UTC]
So far the longest I had to wait was 65 minutes at the main branch.
That's my favorite, because you can have an hour...sometimes
more if there's no reservations behind you.
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58bluemarbles In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-11 21:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Waiting more than an hour...You're a very patient person Bro'.....
Is it the library on the pic you made?....Dimi told it was your favorite one...
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Captain86 In reply to 58bluemarbles [2014-03-12 00:23:56 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but the library was behind me as I took the photo. The two
images of me (and Ultimate Power) were photoshopped in. The
structure behind the images is the Franklin Institute. Most of
Philly's finest museums are together on that parkway! Oh and
yes, its my favorite, and its very close to the river Dimi and I
talk so much about!
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58bluemarbles In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-12 10:27:55 +0000 UTC]
Dimi found the library and pictures on Google.....
He showed us....and saved them...in a map.
Glad you've such nice places as the library...
Philly looks great.....
Great Photoshop piece! and the river pics are amazing too
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Captain86 In reply to 58bluemarbles [2014-03-12 21:09:28 +0000 UTC]
It a nice place to grow up. Philly has everything, except a beach. But like all big cities, world wide, it has a lot of
good places and bad.
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58bluemarbles In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-13 07:33:28 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad that you love Philly so much. And you right every big cities have good and bad places.
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Irtimidd [2014-03-07 22:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Just saw the cover.....looks so great......I love it....
You're the best
Did not read the background story yet....
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Captain86 In reply to Irtimidd [2014-03-07 22:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank Son,very glad you like it. The cover pretty much tells the story, but read it when you have the time...no rush!
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Irtimidd In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-07 22:34:39 +0000 UTC]
I always love your covers Dad!......
How long do you work on a cover....and knowing your computer 's problems must be very tough for you.
I'll read the story tomorrow morning and leave a comment.
You're the greatest Dad!
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Captain86 In reply to Irtimidd [2014-03-07 22:53:13 +0000 UTC]
The drawings don't take long. Must of the time I'll work on them while I'm waiting for a free library computer.
My scanner still works fine, and it works wireless with my Son's old laptop. It takes a bit longer to color
because of the lack of memory...its very slow, but when my computer worked the whole process took three
or four hours (total).
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Irtimidd In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-07 22:57:54 +0000 UTC]
You're that fast daddy.... I cant imagine doing this on such a little time..
You're really a super hero........
I wish I could work as fast as you....
You're really the best.....and the greatest....
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Captain86 In reply to Irtimidd [2014-03-08 00:14:59 +0000 UTC]
Unlike the larger Pyj project, the covers are done on standard 8.5 x 11' paper, and I only draw on a portion of that.
The title is pre-made and the text are added later!
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Irtimidd In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-08 10:38:24 +0000 UTC]
So you can draw very little and detailed....
You're a genius. The covers are outstanding.....and they will make great comics......
I read the background story....it's amazing and it's like Tine cleans...house.
And when she is angry she looks cute...but you can better stay out of her way.....
She does everything for her boys.....
Hahahahahaha.
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Captain86 In reply to Irtimidd [2014-03-12 00:27:41 +0000 UTC]
Yes...I imagine she does! I'm glad we're two of her Boys!
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Irtimidd In reply to Captain86 [2014-03-12 07:58:31 +0000 UTC]
Me too stranger glad to be blessing with someone like you in my life...
And that we are two of her boys....
But when she's cleaning you can better stay outside of the house.....hahahahaha
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