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War is an imposture.ruminant animals whose horns are meaningless.
War is a internal affair.
Destructive fight,
Victor plundered, vanquished.
The structure of society has become misleading.
Ceased to exist
The human being has disappeared
Perpetual peace, its boundaries
Still a contained universe...external danger...
Majority shallows the inner meaning
A moment
blissful forbidden
a room of solitude
One of my favorites of the found poems I uploaded
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Comments: 25
littlemoonboots In reply to CaptivationRequired [2013-03-25 12:38:29 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome ^-^
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y-f-s [2013-01-13 14:43:42 +0000 UTC]
This work is featured in my journal : [link]
Thank you so much. -y.
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Adagiobunny In reply to CaptivationRequired [2012-03-27 02:31:05 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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ninquetari [2012-03-20 09:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
I like the way you marked over anything else and left it this way. Raw feelings.
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CaptivationRequired In reply to ninquetari [2012-03-20 16:43:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, on some of them I did designs but this one just fell together so well with the charcoal
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CaptivationRequired In reply to HourglassOfLostTime [2012-03-20 16:42:21 +0000 UTC]
:'') Thank you
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Poison-Root [2012-03-11 13:27:09 +0000 UTC]
I looooooooove, but I have no idea what a found poem is D:
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CaptivationRequired In reply to Poison-Root [2012-03-11 17:52:24 +0000 UTC]
A found poem is when you take a page of literature; fiction, non-fiction, article, play or whatever and look through it, scratch out words in between words that stand out and form a poem from what was there. It can be hard but in the end very rewarding. it's also a fun way to get through school literature that you are bored with. I loved 1984 but sometimes... sometimes it was hard... so instead I made it into poetry
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Poison-Root In reply to CaptivationRequired [2012-03-11 18:04:14 +0000 UTC]
I'll remember that next time I do something incredibly boring in English c: thank you!
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juniorel [2012-03-11 03:45:11 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful. I just recently found out this kind of poem exists. There's something sad and haunting about the way these poems are born.
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CaptivationRequired In reply to juniorel [2012-03-11 03:48:26 +0000 UTC]
Exactly.
It is like picking a skeleton as a carrion bird might :3
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juniorel In reply to CaptivationRequired [2012-03-11 04:01:51 +0000 UTC]
Perfect! I was trying to think of a way to describe it, but that is exactly it.
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xSatansxRagdollx [2012-03-10 19:58:20 +0000 UTC]
i really like this, the poem itself is well written and the way it's done is so interesting
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CaptivationRequired In reply to xSatansxRagdollx [2012-03-11 03:32:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I love Found Poetry. There's something beautiful about making art out of art. You know?
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HelixHartgrove [2012-03-10 18:00:58 +0000 UTC]
Very inspiring poem here. Thanks for the upload.
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