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Casey333 — Fakemon-Jormusen and Midsormen
Published: 2010-11-23 00:17:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 916; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 14
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Back in July, we put our first dragon type on DeviantArt! That pokemon was Midsormen. Now we have it colored and added alongside it, its preevolution!Jormusen, The Wanderer Pokemon
Water/Dragon Type
Ht- 4'2
Wt- 42 lbs.
Evolves into Midsormen @ lv. 48
Dex- After hatching, Jormusen search the open seas for their mother. This often leads to following ships.
Midsormen, The Sea Serpent Pokemon
Water/Dragon Type
Ht- 11'6
Wt- 102.9 lbs.
Evolves from Jormusen @ lv.48
Dex- Midsormen travel the seas looking for ships to follow. Once the ship stops, Midsormen swims back out to sea to follow another.
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~Casey
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Comments: 8
keep it as is. I don't think this fakemon has any room for anymore awesome.
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lol I liked the idea I was going for but the head shape of the evolutions abit off. And the feet are abit pointy. Otherwise, its still ok.
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Make it a 2-chain. 3-chain and 1-stage dragons are extremely common.
I love Jormusen's design, with the small legs and fan-like spreading of fins on its tail. I also like the simplicity of Midsormen, and the change of a small, eager dragon to a calm, simple sea serpent that has no unnecesary adornments, or 'earthly attachments', implying that it has become monk-like, keeping peace.
I see that you are putting shading underneath fins and heads, but also around the outlines. The first two types are fine, but you shouldn't shade around outlines, so that's just a little tip.
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Thank you. I consider this a good critique for our work in the future. ^^ My brother and I appreciate our input and the shading tip will definitly be taken into consideration. 
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Your welcomed. The thing that is so ironic, however, is that I know where and where not to put shading, but I can't pull it off myself.
Hmm.
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lol that is. Im pretty sure you could pull it off though.
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Possibly. Yes, I am a mound of irony.
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