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Published: 2001-02-10 08:33:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2086; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 201
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This is a pic I did of Deedlit an elf chick from record of lodoss war. "Some may be aware of my unhealthy infatuation with elven womenz" If it looks familiar yes i did get the idea from a painting but it is all done in freehand pencil on invoice paper while i was at work.Hey Matteo hey Jark long time no see eh?
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Damn. I was about to say the same thing but =Iselen beat me to it.
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Wow. So this is the first pencil-drawn, anime Daily Deviation.
I'm feeling quite nostalgic now. A piece of deviantART's early roots.
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heh ya was awhile ago.
Devart has changed alot.
Thanks for the comment... 4 years late but still eheh.
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Nah I'm not ripping into, merely critiquing. Your piece on Ebay is what brought me here actually. And I'm notta guy, I'm quite female, thanks
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hehe i got ripped a new one from a guy on AOL
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What the folks meant about off proportion... I'm guessing they meant the face. Though Deedlit may be looking slightly up with her eyes closed, the face (eyes, nose, mouth, not the actual head and cheeks and chin) is skewed to the left as mentioned above. Basically what it looks like is, you drew the head, the general outline of the face then drew in the features of the face (eyes, nose, mouth).
While it is a cartoon character, this doesnt mean that it has no proportions. Anime animators have a supberb sense of anatomy, proportions, etc because it is only through the knowledge of such that you can create characters like Deedlit. As for my ratings, I gave you a D in originality because its a copied image out of an artbook. B- for Technique due to it, again, being a copy, while your shading is good, your knowledge of the facial structure is poor. It's just a copy, and only that, however, some artists would have shifted up a notch, taking that pencil and making it look more realistic. The heavy lines next to gradual, gentle shading throw off the actual grace of the piece. Also, the background gradiation could have been a bit more subtle from light grey to dark blackish-grey.
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COOOLL
but I muist agree with some comments above... this is nopt a WP... should be on art...
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Well i think such things are still REAL art, just sittin in front of Photoshop e.g. and using effects, pressing ctrl+z if anything is wrong ,is nothing compared with beautiful handdrawn things. I also draw a lot, but never considered to upload it.
Ok to the pic itself: its drawn reaaally nice, real cool shading.
propably upping smth. in the next time
stay tuned
ZeRo
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Well i think such things are still REAL art, just sittin in front of Photoshop e.g. and using effects, pressing ctrl+z if anything is wrong ,is nothing compared with beautiful handdrawn things. I also draw a lot, but never considered to upload it.
Ok to the pic itself: its drawn reaaally nice, real cool shading.
propably upping smth. in the next time
stay tuned
ZeRo
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Exelent pice of work u made here...ceep it up...
www.xlaxcrew.com
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doh. of course its out of proportion its a drawing of a cartoon elf but thanks for the feedback.
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its pretty good...the sky looks like you took way less time on it than the rest...
check out my work.....i draw alot too.
_ demonix
:attitudes are contagious, mine might kill you:
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drawing takes lots of patience and time.. this is great on shading and strokes..does seem a bit outta sorts but all in all very nice... keep up the great work...
peace!!
- riv
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Damn it all I was gonna say what reality squared said but overall a decent image. Wow it's been so long since i have done none digital work maybe i should go do some drawing. Invoices suck ass good use of the paper!
Jack Dirt
Keen B***h Keen!
http://engeluriel.tripod.com
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Hmmm,
I hate to be picky about freehand work, but the body proportions are off just enough to bother me-
The facial area curves off to the left, and you should be able to see more of the torso and abdomen through the front of the cloak- right now those areas show an unhealthy bending which makes the thigh of the left-side (right) leg look unnaturally long. The lone lock of hair down in the lower right-hand corner needs to have a steeper angle to properly align with the rest of her hair.
All-in-all a good effort, continue honing your skills.
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ears, so, pointy... must, control, rage...
I love anime, I HATE POINTY EARS!However it's nothing personal because your pic rocks. Your picture has inspired me to never upload anything that I've drawn, I'm too outclassed... I wish I could draw better... ^_^
Sir|Morphix
http://alpha.rbss.net/rbss/students/seni or/cwong/
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mmm...a bit too out of proportion imo.
-=[HaGeShiKu]=-
http://www.hageshiku.com
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i honestly dont know what indy art is. i thought this being freehand section was as close as it gets.
Thanks for the kind words, Wow i made pic of the day! makes me feel warm and tingly inside.
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wow, she is screaming for my help
i am coming to save her, well you did a great job
Fareed Rizkalla [ http://www.dekonstrukted.com/rtt/ ]
* you cannot hide from the truth
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lovely hand drawn deviation. i am interested in seeing more!
you should consider moving this into IndyArt.
--[ jark ]--
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quite nice but it's not a wallpaper
christian aka pyros
http://pyros.pixelmassaker.net
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I like your soldier image much better, but this is still good. Damn I wish I could draw.
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