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Published: 2015-06-03 23:03:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1285; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 1
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But what happens when u coem home and mom is not rly ur momthis, and the next couple chapters set up the backdrop of the story so they may be a bit slower-paced but I drop a few hints here and there so if you think you're reading too deeply into it, you probably aren't! : D
bonus author's hint: what's a cat?
enjoy~
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Comments: 35
Holy crap I was gonna shout Milf Alert until that last panel. All I'll say to work on here is backgrounds and depth perception/anatomy when working with angles. I'd recommend laying things out in a grid format and then drawing the backgrounds and characters through that structure. There are a lot of templates you can find online. c:
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oh that grid format is a good idea, I'll definitely keep my eye out for more refs because those will help a lot I feel
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interesting approach to the bgs for more variety without too much extra work, and nice motion blur at the hittting of the clock near top of the page. the pacing here is great and love the more subtle characterizing of her forgetfulness and whining. the shades around the clothes look especially good, and the more roundish way of nose is a nice more distinct approach that I appreciate .the perspective for shortening on the 2nd to last panel feels like it came off a bit odd, but I like the use of it and the effort to get more angle variety.
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Hooo thanks for the feedback! Easier bgs are easier on me, since I'm definitely not the strongest when it comes to inanimate objects. Even animate objects haha yes that second to last panel didn't turn out quite how I wanted, hopefully comic-ing will help me experiment a bit more with perspective so I can learn!
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no problem, and yup, way to go with comics really that need to be so long scale and are hobby based I feel. and sounds like a plan
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Oh man, Limbo King is a shape shifter. That's going to keep things interesting!
Also, Celery's shorts.
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WELL... At least the creepy cat thing seems to make decent pancakes? It's not as good as having a real mom, but it's a start.
I have a million questions, this start is really intriguing and unsettling. Β
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Unsettling is exactly what I'm aiming for ;D
And you're right! It seems to be pretty good at making pancakes but how can Celery tell if she's never had them before B)
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sorry, that's a question I cannot answer! You are welcome to your own theories, and are encouraged to see if they come true ;D
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does her mom really have jagged teeth or it is just an expression?
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her mom does not have jagged teeth but some other character certainly does B)
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Celery acts like I do about morning meetings XD
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a role model to us allΒ
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Pffftt I love it already |D
Now... Is her name Celery as in Rapunzel?~
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Oh! I had no idea Celery was a reference to Rapunzel! xD
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OHP whoops! I was close - It's cabbage.
Translated to German, cabbage becomes Rapunzel XD
Still tho - loving the name
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Ahahah maybe I'll add in a character named Cabbage ;D
And I'm glad you're liking her name, I hope you will also like the name of her Rival which will soon be revealed...B)
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Oooh sweet |DΒ
And heeee I'm sure I will~ I look forward to it!
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oh yeah 4 sure
100%
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Ya know, I thought this comic was going to be told in first person there for a bit. ^^
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