3wyl [2010-11-25 19:16:28 +0000 UTC]

I feel as if you could place a comma after the "freeze", there... it's an interesting piece, anyway.

Honestly, don't worry about that. Well... I guess you could worry about it, but most (if not all) of my own literature is downright depressive. I guess that's just the way it is. Sometimes, we connect with it more.

I like what you're suggesting here... and how it feels like wisdom, but not.

Not sure if it's a story, as such, though...

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sempiterna [2010-11-16 19:51:11 +0000 UTC]

I can well understand why they can be sad so easy, very well chosen words

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