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celestial-elevator — Fuck Me Rape Me
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Published: 2008-11-08 18:32:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Grab my body from behindAs it's naked on the floor
Use one hand to squeeze my breasts
Slip the other one inside me
Then slam me 'gainst the nearest wall
Push me up against it
Penetrate my weak vagina
Hard and without mercy
Use your every means of flesh
To cripple me asunder
Back and forth, yeah torture me
For pleasure and erotic needs
Fuck me rape me do it fast
With speed I can't control
I want it to hurt so bad
To the point of dying
Breathe rapidly, no, don't hold back
Scream loudly let me hear
That kick you get from fucking me
Against my broken will
Now use your fingers, claws on skin
All over 'til I bleed
Make my fluids boil with heat
Arousing you yet more
Let me take a single breath
How deep is my decision
But put your hand against my mouth
So I cannot exhale
I want you to dig deeper now
You gotta cause more pain
Hit my face, strike anywhere
'Til I am barely conscious
Bite my neck like lycanthropes
An artery but exposed
Push on harder, make me
s u f f e r
I will hate you so much more...
Fuck me rape me
Through this night
Bring me torment with no end
(please) make me hurt and cry and die
Then maybe I'll be real.
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Comments: 16
Intense, graphic description. Not a take on the subject you usually come across, mostly it's the other side that's used. This isn't the standard victim-role that's been chosen. Very interesting and provoking. Loved reading it.
Going to put you in my waych, you have a lot of nice things I noticed
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Thank you for your comment, I loved it, and for the watch and your fav on At Least You Have Been Loved. I'm glad you like my work
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You have a style which appeals to me.
Been spending some minutes letting more of your work sink in.
A well deserved watch of lovely work, keep it up.
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Words so kind, thank you.
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Credit where credit is due
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thank you. writing it was a pretty intense experience.
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I would be surprised if it wasn't considering the subject
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thankfully not whilst I've been walking or traveling but had to log onto a computer and e-mail myself partial ideas at work a few times
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I guess it comes with being a writer
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Hm. As criticism is not desired, I will keep my mouth shut, but it is an interesting piece. Even disregarding the theme of it, it is a style you rarely use, so it makes it an interesting way for you to experiment with poetry.
I am honestly very impressed as you have pushed this poem right up into the reader's face - and that is a very good thing. Well done (even if a little masochistic).
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As criticism is not desired, I will keep my mouth shut
You almost make it sound like this poem is very poorly written. Or maybe I'm just paranoid.
Still, I appreciate your comment. Thank you.
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We all react different
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