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Published: 2004-10-29 18:13:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1929; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 371
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5 page sequential i did for HW ... basicly we just needed to do one with a speicif place in mind ...its very unfinnished ... much moreso than the previous ones ive submitted
and i kinda trailed off by the end hah
anyway C&C would be awosme ... im open to anything just fire away
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that shit is mad old ... i gotta take it down lol. THe backgrounds worked well tho. That was the first project i took photos for befor i started. Somthing i don't think i do enough now
thanx. much appreciated
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Where do you get the templates for each page from? Just out of curiosity.
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templetes?
Im not sure what you mean ...
i don't use templets
If you mean the paper i used? Just go to Bluelinepro.com ... honestly tho, That blueline shit isn't the best, I would reccomend just geting some nice bristol and ruling the paper yourself. A standard comic page is 10"x15" and the bleed can run to the edges of the 11"x17"
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The moves are really cool!!! The anatomy is really perfect! Just some inkins and coloring u have some COOL pages to sell XD!
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this is so damn beatiful!
if i could give you one advice it should be to take the pipe in the middle of pannel one on page 2 and use it to form the boarders of the underneath laying panels -i suppose its a matter of taste, but it would help creating the sewer-atmosphere...
anyways- your really cool man -i love your work...print a mag if just in b/w and id buy it at once...
peace and keep up!
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naa man thats a really dope idea ... imma keep that in mind next time i wanna do some cool pannel borders ...
Im open to everything people can throw at me
so thanx bro
also i really appriciate the support bro
it means alot
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im glad i can help...
and thanks for your art!
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i didn't know why i didn't see this yet..
nice work here dude..
not as tight as your previous entries.. but still nice
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sadly i keep having less and less time to complete my assignments ... siiigh ...
but thanx man pacing was really my main concern with it ... the drawings kinda came secondary
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i'll just follow how you progress. i'm certain that your future work will put a smile on my face.
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great layout and well done actionshots...like how you did the starting of the fight, the build up i mean. keep up the good work and i'm looking forward to the finished version (colored and all)
Peace
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pacing was somthing i was definitly trying to keep in mind as i was doing this .. im glad it came through
about the finnished version ... as i look back at these pages ... eventho i turned them in as finnished really they are noting more than layouts ... sad to say
so If there really comes a time where i can go back lightbox and transfer what ive got making them suitable for inking i will ... as for now ive really gotta move on ... shitloads of other assignments to on the way so i really have no idea if im gonna really ever get these inked up
i appricate the support alot bro
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i dont know what to say
i dont see anything I dont like..
the panels, the structures, the bodies
i love it all
sorry for my meaningless comment..
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very cool dude....have you got any tips for me on seqs?
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tips ... shit man the only thing i can tell you without typeing a novel is to just read all kinds of comics ... read and observe ... everything ! ...
study them ... what works what doesnt ... everything in comics is very deliberate ... allways, so use them as a sudy ref
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wow man your busting out the seqs I really need to practice this much as for as they go the panels feel really packed for some reason! you can tell place you rushed through to but its a really fun story to look at i would say try giving more feeling of space!
great angles
great bg work
you know i dig seeing this stuff bro!
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thanx alot bro and yea im busting shit out ... schools got me working hard man ..
this was one i finnaly got to make up which was cool ... i wanted to put annother couple pages of fight but just ran outta time ... i had to fill that 5 page quota and thus the kinda crappy last 2 pages ...
but yea anyway i'll have more homeworks scanned in soon enough
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Love the layout man. It's got a good rhythm. Awesome perspectives also. I really like the dynamics of the characters too as far as their posing is concerned, particularly in that third panel on page 3.
And SF3 is one of the greatest fighters ever, so that's a definite plus.
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hell yea bro ive been playing way to much of the game latly lol
thanx for the kind words
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Looking really good so far. i love the composition and the balance , they look just a bit cluterd but it still a bit rough . i love the perspective and the movement.
So no real crits so far.
Love it! cant wait to see it doone.
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yeh im realy trying to be concious of alot more shit wen im doing my pages. Cus you only have so much space to move the story along its definitly not easy.
I dunno if i'll ever finnish the pages ... maby if i feel the need to practice myinking/coloring but as for now they're homework and 'done' in my eyes
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the person with the jacket is obviously me
genius, bc that's my exact muscle structure
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great job man, everything reads pretty well in its rough state, so that a great thing. keep up the good work!! What college to you go to anyways?
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thanx alot man ...
yea i was really working on my pannel layouts with this assignment ... to better my story telling ... dave cavilleri (editor at DC ... if thats how u spell it) ... was tellin me to make my gutters a little bigger which is good advice cus at time it does get clutterd
im going to SVA (school of visual arts) in NYC
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Thats awesome man I wish I would have had some classes in sequential art.
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This is great. ^_^ You do a good job at this. I love it. It's amazing. Wish I could do that. But that's what I'm in college for anyway
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