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Published: 2008-09-26 16:46:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2406; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 23
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READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT!!!Ouch Poor baby
Sorry for the delay in posting. I have tons of work for school so my own personal work has been slow.
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why is she so roboty when she looks so... zombie like?
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The best way to describe her is a combination of the two. She is a reanimated corpse that has been programed like a robot by her creators.
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The perspective in the second panel is killer and the blurred effect is well used.This is getting awesomer with each page..I'm an offical converted fan.
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Aww thank you 
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Don't worry there will be a new page soon :3 I just have a lot of homework so I don't have a ton of time to work on it.
I'm so glad you like everyone
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Zusha is my fave
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Thank you
Tashu is a cute little thing.
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yeah,she's my kind of person ^.^
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Well done!
I like Zusha's expression, good job.
Seto is in troubles... can someone help him plz??
I'll wait patiently the next chapter x3
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Thankies
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OMG SQUEE!!! New page!!! ...wait so the girl is a robot? (the one with metal on her,and muscle) Or is that just how she talks? Other than that awesome page! Can't wait for more.
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No she's not a robot she is organic, but she is programed like a robot and thus speaks that way
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ah, ok that makes more sense. Organic.....sweet.
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Yeah... She's not a very effective... whatever she is...
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I actually though 'Terminator' for a second...
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You're great at portraying movement! And Zusha's expression made me lol.
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Aww thank you 
Zusha's angry face is funny then?
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You're welcome. ;D
Yes it is.
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*squirms in seat* !! I'm excited! ^_^ I love the dots of blood on the back of Seto's head! And, again, wonderful expressions!
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Aww thank you
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I still think that you draw well people (and color) but in the graphic storytelling you will improve. And you are actually improving
The 2 frames with diagonal cut of the girls on the top tells properly the situation. And the background helps you to say that they are on the top of the roof and not in the backyard (that it's the improvement)
The last frame have maybe the problems of drawing too static (kind of "stay for a moment, please, guys, I'm going to draw you") added to the permanent brick space (probably you should make those bricks just say that are there, but not being significant from your characters when they are not.
In bacgrounds topic, you have all the levels of background results, here in this page. You have a discret and well done background in the 2nd frame, and acceptable in the 2 diagonal ones and in the last and first frames it's too heavy in the frame.
The first frame, apart from that... you could have used a twisted point of view, and that probably would added more dynamism to it. But as it is now is hard to see if the hand is staying and she is going away or the opposite intetion (apart from script, of course xD)
Nice to see your drawings ^_^
Of course, I critizise your work, not you, I encourage to continue drawing (I have to say this because I don't wan to be misunderstood) ^_^
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It's alright 
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Dont stress yourself, just do it when you can ^^
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