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Another smaller part again. This is mostly due to the placement of events. This is a decent place to stop in order to avoid having the update be nine pages long. That, or it stops even more abruptly.
So yes, this should be obvious to those who remember the oldoldold work way back when. Coco has returned and with a few changes made since we last saw him. But that's all I want to say for now. All will be explained in due time.
Another thing to note is the subject matter roaring in abruptly. Or rather it spewing from the necks of patrats. I feel this is a tiny bit of a blunder on my part. It would have made more sense to establish the gore level earlier in the story. This is likely about as gory as things are going to get. I don't intend to have guts and flesh flying around any time soon. So your typical anime level of gore. Think Bleach-level I suppose. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go lash myself for bringing up Bleach.
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Comments: 35
LegendWeaver25 [2016-02-29 01:02:10 +0000 UTC]
"Ooo a puppy!"
"Careful honey, he has a knife."
"What? No, no I don't."
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Ot1sman [2013-09-22 18:50:28 +0000 UTC]
ALL OF MY YES, COCO. I just have such a stupid grin on my face from the awesomeness of that design and this entire page. Holy mother of Mewtwo, this is great.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Ot1sman [2013-09-23 14:12:43 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you. Glad you liked it XD
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Lilbluebox [2013-09-21 15:20:39 +0000 UTC]
I love this Herdier so much, you have no idea. He reminds me of Robin Hood, sort of. Maybe a knight.
Either way, he's total win.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Lilbluebox [2013-09-21 16:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like him XD
He Does have a sort of knightly presence, doesn't he?
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Lilbluebox In reply to ChaosMonkeyATG [2013-09-21 23:59:04 +0000 UTC]
He so does.
Can I compose a theme for him? I know it's ridiculous since you haven't even told us his name and he's been in the comic for all of one panel... but can I?
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Lilbluebox [2013-09-22 00:01:00 +0000 UTC]
Seems you caught me at a good time XD
Sure thing. His name is Coco. He was technically already revealed in the old version of the comic
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Lilbluebox In reply to ChaosMonkeyATG [2013-09-22 00:02:10 +0000 UTC]
Good timing for once in my life? HUZZAH!
Oooh. I don't think I ever read the old version. A theme for him should be out sometime this weekend then, methinks.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Lilbluebox [2013-09-22 00:03:10 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't recommend it. It's all fragmented and it's old crap too. And awesome. I'm looking forward to it :3
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Lilbluebox In reply to ChaosMonkeyATG [2013-09-22 00:04:54 +0000 UTC]
Well, that makes two of us! I want it to be really heroic.
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Ryua [2013-09-20 23:50:41 +0000 UTC]
Can't show the gore level before actually having some things die. Love the Herdier-to-the-rescue.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Ryua [2013-09-21 00:15:56 +0000 UTC]
I'd say you're quite right XD
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simperingidiot [2013-09-20 22:20:42 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic! Great action panels, I love your explanation for Billy, haha (I bet it would taste terrible too). What a bro! I love this comic.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to simperingidiot [2013-09-20 22:37:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, I'm happy you're enjoying it XD
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Dendino [2013-09-20 20:40:47 +0000 UTC]
COCO!!! So good to see him agian! It's also good to see he's just as nuts as ever.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Dendino [2013-09-20 22:37:25 +0000 UTC]
He's not nuts he's just doing what's necessary!.....brutally with a combat knife. Okay so a little bit crazy, ya XD
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Velink [2013-09-20 20:34:49 +0000 UTC]
OMG! a herdierr!! XD
Protect the citizen! kill the offenders! XD
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JellehBear [2013-09-20 18:15:32 +0000 UTC]
Yesyesyes. Epicepicepic.
I like what you kept and what you cut. It comes out very neat and clean in the presentation of this new character. :3
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PitchBlackEspresso [2013-09-20 16:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Please tell me that herdier will be part of your team.
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to ChaosMonkeyATG [2013-09-20 20:06:21 +0000 UTC]
Omg i hope so
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CritexMind [2013-09-20 15:09:46 +0000 UTC]
I'm not gonna lie, butt fire jokes always sound funny to me even though I don't laugh. And I'm really liking this new style
The slice panels were well-executed and, if you allow me, they would be better by using three layers, one for the head, one for the "slice" (this one being very or slightly transparent) and one for the body. Because they end up looking as if the slice passed behind them not through them, just my opinion :/.
Beautiful blood work as well, very accurate.
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to CritexMind [2013-09-20 19:16:49 +0000 UTC]
I thought about that effect but I felt it cluttered things a little too much. I want to emphasize clarity. But that won't stop me from experimenting. Thanks for the suggestion.
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2013-09-20 14:43:20 +0000 UTC]
That was a nice entrance, plus he looks awesome, I have respect for this herdier. I loved all the expressions here~
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2013-09-20 19:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Respect the terrier XD
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ChaosMonkeyATG In reply to Shireyaki [2013-09-20 19:14:33 +0000 UTC]
I count that as a plus :3
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