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Hey, Look at this!Since a lot of you guys seem to have enjoyed my Paper Mario: The Book of Ages idea (or perhaps only the drawing, but who cares), I decided to do little pictures on each chapter during the paper adventure.
Picking up where I left off here [link] let's continue with the final Chapter. So Mario has all seven instruments of the Night Sky so Mario and the gang once again climb up the large clock tower in Countdown Town [link] to finally once and for all stop The Great Tick-Tocker! and save the princess an the world in the process. Once at the top, Mario battle's the magician again [link] and with that Mario starts playing the instruments and in a fanciful display of graphics, stops the doomsday comet and defeats the Great Tick-Tocker! Everything was all sunshine and rainbows until the clock struck 12:01 when the world should have ended if not for the instruments stopping the impact of the comet. The earth trembles and the sky shatters as buildings collapse and trees uprooted and people sucked up into the sky. Tears in the fabric of space form everywhere while TGTT only cackles. "Don't you see? The weight of ALL the times I've succeeded in annihilating the world are tearing the very essence of space time itself. Nothing can stop it."boasts the demented magician. Just when all hope seemed lost, once again, the Book of Ages reveals a new way out. It tells Mario that they have to journey into the book and erase The Great Tick-Tocker from time.
Once inside the book, Mario finds a place reminiscent of all the places they traveled through the chapters and many TGTT running around. It's Mario's job then to go through mini versions of the last 7 chapters and defeat each TGTT there, who battle similarly to the original chapter bosses (Like how Boomley in the first chapter will blow up at the end of the battle and so forth). Each time you encounter one of the Great Tick-Tockers, the party member from that chapter has a little dialogue with the magician (Buzz and Boomley share the chapter one TGTT and Goombert gets the one from chapter seven) and try to reason with him, but there pleas fall on deaf ears as TGTT is so warped in his own madness he can't be reasoned with. As all the mini-chapters have been completed, a giant gnarly clock tower arises in the center where all the TGTT go to. Mario and co. head over that way, but as they get to the front gate, Wario and Waluigi are waiting for them (And I finally drew them for once, yay!) [link] . Giving no reason on how they got there, they still insist on Mario handing over the instruments, as they must be worth a fortune. They then have a fight, Mario wins, and the Wario "bros." scurry off and swearing they'll get Mario some day! So Mario finally gets to climb the demented clock tower.
Up and up they go fighting strong enemies and evil shadow versions of themselves. Just as they're about to make it to the very top they hear the all to familiar voice, "Gra har har har! I finally found you Mario! What's a finale without a Bowser appearance? No more sequels! It's gonna end right here, right now. ONCE AND FOR ALL!" It's Bowser, who has been looking for Mario the whole time. He got in by following Mario into the book knowing he'd be up to that sort of thing. You battle, and obviously Mario wins. Then you find that Peach has followed you in to help you out, so Mario, Peach and the partners step out onto the top of the tower. There are hundreds of the Great Tick-Tockers up there all waiting. They are all TGTT of every timeline and they all speak in unison. "I am space... I am time... I can see your past... I can see your future... I consume time... And I will consume you!" With that, they all jump into the abyss and out of the nothingness emerges the grotesque form of Omni Tick-Tockers with the powers and stength of every TGTT combined. All seems lost as every attack appears to bounce off of him. It's then that the Night Sky instruments begin to resonate. The instruments in fact channel the wishes of the peoples of the world to grant the wish. Thus cues a scene that is reminiscent of previous Paper Mario's showing the various different characters from previous chapters wishing for Mario to save the day. With this new power, Peach plays the song of these wishes with the Instruments of the Night Sky to weaken Omni Tick-Tockers so the real battle begins. It's a tough battle, but eventually the forces of good triumph and defeat the Omni Tick-Tockers who vanishes and is erased from time and Mario and gang, including Peach, Bowser and the Wario "bros." are tansported back to the top of the clock tower where everything looks like nothing had ever happened. Only Mario, Peach, Bowser, the Wario "bros." and all the partners remember what happened. And they all lived happily ever after. The End?
Yep, that sums up my idea. And I'm amazed that you read the whole thing! Unless you cheated and skipped most of it, you cheeky little.... Anyways, if you are wondering, some of my ideas before might have changed (Like how I got rid of that chef bob-omb for the Bomb Boo in the previous chapter). Well, I guess that's it then... It only took me almost 3 years to finish it, but I did it. Now you can stop pestering me on it.
I'm done typing.
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Comments: 73
loopdeeloop271 [2023-12-06 23:29:55 +0000 UTC]
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CNDCPBSKfan [2021-04-20 15:33:20 +0000 UTC]
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darkcore2536 In reply to mountainhappy [2016-11-06 21:00:42 +0000 UTC]
Opinions aren't really necessary,
plus now people are going to start arguing about colour splash now.
Not like FNaF is any better...
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MrLsprites In reply to darkcore2536 [2021-12-09 01:35:35 +0000 UTC]
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TheEpicFailedArtist [2015-02-17 02:46:39 +0000 UTC]
THAT IS THE MOST EPIC MASTERPIECE I'VE EVER SEEN!
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orangeglasses2 [2014-10-10 04:41:11 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like a fantastic finale!
I bet there's an post-credits feature, a free roam, if you will. You can use the book to go back in time, and you should be able to use it to go into free roam mode.
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Bleakbar [2014-06-13 23:56:51 +0000 UTC]
Omg!!! This is genius! I wish they would have continued with the style of Paper Mario 2...that game was absolutely genius. 3 and 4 kind of dropped the ball and steered away from everything that made it great :L
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LaserRaptor5 In reply to Bleakbar [2024-05-01 01:11:44 +0000 UTC]
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Ukitake1984 [2014-02-27 03:58:46 +0000 UTC]
Why couldn't we have this for the 3DS instead of sticker star dang it Nintendo.
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ProtoTypedKnife In reply to Ukitake1984 [2014-07-13 12:29:28 +0000 UTC]
Because Majora's Mask fans would instantly realise what they did with the plot
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Pikachu4Prezident [2013-05-01 21:16:26 +0000 UTC]
Better than Sticker Star by leaps and bounds.
Seriously though, this is a pretty damn good idea all things considered. Sticker Star, by my book, is mediocre at best and shell of what made the series so great at worst. No partners present at all, combat system is way too easy, the plot is basically nihil, Bowser takes center stage again as the final boss of the game (seriously, he's had his run as the Big Bad in the first game, let the turtle rest for once), and Kertsi was a bland, forgettable character that had little to offer outside of being your substandard exposition fairy (except her hints are never helpful when they need to be, which is even worse).
You seem to have it all set in stone for all that can be said about the game. However, whether or not you're going to come back to the project and change some things around is up to you. This does need some work in some areas (as someone cited below, there is never any sort of backstory or hints dropped as to the TTGT's origins, or the titular book for that matter, whereas in The Thousand Year Door and Super Paper Mario, we got more than enough evidence to who our main antagonist was, his/her motivations, his/her origins, backstory, etc), but regardless, this game is definitely a keeper. You have what looks to be plenty of resources (and some music too), so why not buck letting this thing sit on the backburner and turn it into a full-fledged fan game?
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PsychoticEnigmaphobe [2012-12-25 04:59:40 +0000 UTC]
I like the bells on The Great Tick Tocker
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DunamisSolgard1002 [2012-08-24 09:25:32 +0000 UTC]
I just looked at all of these thanks to a buddy of mine, and may I just say....go to Nintendo, tell 'em you work cheap, and get them to MAKE THIS. X3
Bu tin all honesty, wonderful work!
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EllieMcDoodler [2012-07-23 00:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Awesome idea, the best I've seen for thses two so far!
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ProtoTypedKnife [2012-07-15 07:09:23 +0000 UTC]
I love how you can see scenery from past chapters in the background!
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ComicaPaloozaStudios [2012-07-05 17:23:53 +0000 UTC]
This needs to be a game. I would play this game.
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ProtoTypedKnife [2012-07-01 15:52:24 +0000 UTC]
isnt Mckenzies ability the same as soshis?
they both allow you to get over gaps plus soshi can run faster so dosnt that make mckenzie useless?
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ProtoTypedKnife [2012-06-30 12:02:24 +0000 UTC]
I love this idea!
Have you got any other game ideas in mind ? if so im sure it would be epic like this!
this game needs to happen!
also i dont know wether youll like this or not but I drew what I imaged to be the world map for this game!
hope you like it!
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Heartless-Hyren [2012-06-08 05:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Somebody needs to make this happen. Seriously. We've got tons of concept art, a complete story, and even music! Of course that still leaves programming and level design (the really hard parts), not to mention some witty script writing (and some witty chapter names), but still, this deserves to be made. I hope Paper Mario: Sticker Star is at least half this awesome!
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lord-Mont [2012-05-22 01:47:52 +0000 UTC]
i did not know there was music here, i'm gonna go listen to all of of it
Phwooosh
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GardevoirxGallade12 [2012-03-27 01:06:55 +0000 UTC]
how do you draw them like that its so cool like its offical
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BladeSquall [2012-01-19 20:07:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow... this has been an amazing project. Even if Paper Mario 3DS is just as awesome as this story, I want this to be a future Paper Mario game. Using the time-limit and time travel mechanics of Majora's Mask, re-playable bosses, an amazing, twisted villain, Bowser, the Wario "Bros." appearing in the story as Jr. Troopa-like foes, and amazing party members.
This just wins!
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McKenna402 [2011-11-24 00:46:30 +0000 UTC]
I feel like if this were an actual game, this final chapter would be very long. And no, that's not a complaint.
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beterbomen [2011-10-28 10:11:33 +0000 UTC]
So... In the end, we learn nothing. Nothing about TGTT, nothing about the book.
Kind of a letdown. If you or anyone else wants to make an actual game about this, they'll have to fill that gap. The Paper Mario games are so popular because they understand the importance of story over bullshit.
That is what I believe.
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Yuanougoombi [2011-09-12 16:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Waw.
Great story! This could be a successor of Paper Mario TTYD
Great pic, this is better than a Paper Mario.
In fact, it's simply AWESOME O_O
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crashmario64 [2011-08-19 17:56:50 +0000 UTC]
ok you stole my idea for a clock villian and final boss
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KaabiChu2000 [2011-08-02 01:09:02 +0000 UTC]
Awesome Final Chapter To Your Story!! PLEASE NINTENDO, MAKE THIS INTO A GAME!!!!!!!!!!
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kazehaze [2011-06-28 16:19:40 +0000 UTC]
great proyect congratulations..!!! I wish more chapters!!! X3
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Ninplanet123 [2011-06-02 23:47:43 +0000 UTC]
Very good but the final parts could use a little more work.
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Jopeja [2011-05-30 09:37:34 +0000 UTC]
I feel retarded... All of this time, I thought Chapter 8 wasn't out cuz it didn't say it on the first picture... Well, joke's on me!
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queenzelda01 [2011-05-06 02:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow this was a really good read. A lot of it in spots could be a bit better but maybe at the time this was written some other Mario rpg games have since released that you could have gotten some inspiration from & written a chapter from one of those games like Mario & Luigi's Bowser's Inside Story, or even from Super Paper Mario itself.
I really enjoyed reading all of this it was a great read & makes me wish this game were real in some ways. xD ^^
Thank you for writing this & thanks you very much for wanting to play the Paper Mario games again (btw) XD :3 Awesome job & great story. ^^
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BoomerBOmb [2011-04-09 23:43:07 +0000 UTC]
There is already a soundtrack for this? AND IT ROCKS!
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Cosmic--Chaos [2011-04-07 17:30:15 +0000 UTC]
This should be a game so much that it's not even funny
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Rocker313 [2011-04-05 03:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, F*ck 3DS, this should be published in it's place. The amazing story, the TTYD combat system, the riveting pictures, You're an amazing and capable artist, and for a year and a half, you were on my favorites bar. You're staying there, you deserve it. thank you so much for this amazing story. Please, i beg you. Send these pictures and texts to Nintendo, do the world a favor. Make this an actual game. This is the 3rd time i write this, so im sorry if its not as enthusiastic as i feel but the sutpdi back button made me angry. What is sad is, our jounrey is over. I can't believe it.. Well, all good things must come to an end. Thanks for the amazing ride. (Remember, get this sh*t PUBLISHED!)
Keep Your Amazing Creativity, Your Friend,
Rocker313
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fawfulur [2011-04-03 17:19:21 +0000 UTC]
that was awsome!!!! The story, the artwork...everything! Great Job
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Flammeye [2011-03-29 22:33:51 +0000 UTC]
Many people noticed the Culex reference but I also love the little reference the final boss has to "Countdown" from Super Mario RPG.
Kudos for finishing this in the best possible way!
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Marioshi64 [2011-03-28 11:55:54 +0000 UTC]
Spooky setting - check
Paper Warios - check
Cool Boss - HELL YES CHECK, it's like Steampunk Cortez
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KateSWalker [2011-03-28 01:51:06 +0000 UTC]
Fan-TASTIC. What a great ride this has been! Also, points for the Culex speech from Mario RPG.
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Noma [2011-03-28 00:22:56 +0000 UTC]
I would play the hell out of this. Currently playing through Thousand Year Door again and I think I'd much prefer Koopustus over Koops Great job once again, Chet.
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