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Published: 2013-02-09 10:13:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 7909; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 22
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Description It wasn’t that he didn’t like Darwin. Okay…maybe that was part of it. But mostly he simply didn’t trust him. He had lied to them, tricked them, stolen Polly and most importantly put the entire crew in danger of a very unpleasant death. It’s true he had helped the Captain get their faithful dodo back. But the Pirate with the Scarf had to ask himself ‘why’. Was he truly sorry for what he had done and wanted to right the wrong? Or was the scientist in him simply unable to let a priceless specimen come to harm? He simply didn’t know where the man’s loyalties lay. And that made the first mate uneasy.

Number Two was perfectly happy with the Pirate Captain’s suggestion to ferry the young scientist to an island where he could study the local wildlife to his hearts content. Of course the island idea had quickly gone sour when they realized the natives were cannibals.

Then the Captain did the unthinkable. He had invited Charles Darwin to join the crew. Number Two had voiced his concerns quietly to the Captain but was instantly vetoed. The Captain trusted Charles wholeheartedly and was certain he would make a terrific addition to their pirate band. The rest of the crew agreed and gave him a hearty welcome.

The Captain had asked for his suggestion on what their next adventure might be. What had been Darwin’s reply? Search for the legendary colossal squid! Not only was there no booty involved in the venture but it was also dangerous. And for bait he had used ham. Ham! What a ridiculous waste of a good dinner and the crew’s safety.

Now Number Two stood on the deck of the ship, cutlass in hand battling one of the largest creatures in the sea as it tried to swallow their vessel whole and thinking how he hated being right. The entire crew was on deck, each fighting a huge tentacle as it threatened their lives and their home. And where was Mr. Darwin? He had started out taking notes in his journal as the creature appeared. Now, he was cowering under the staircase that lead from the main deck to the poop deck clearly showing how important his new friends were to him.

Then something unexpected happened. It all occurred in scarcely a few seconds but seemed to drag on for much much longer.

“Look out! Behind you!” It was Darwin’s voice and Number Two turned just an instant to see what was going on. Charles had leaped out of his hiding place and was shouting in the direction of Albino Pirate who was currently occupied with some very important bits of rope. A gigantic tentacle, nearly as thick as their main mast, had appeared behind the young man and was beginning a huge sweeping arc and Albino was right in its path. Not really hearing the warning over the sounds of the battle going on all around he simply smiled and waved.

Seeing what was about to happen Number Two started in that direction but he knew there was no way he would make it in time. Darwin, very much to the first mate’s surprise, leaped toward the danger. With a hard shove he sent the boy sprawling onto the deck just as the monster’s powerful arm swung down. It missed the Albino Pirate but caught Darwin full in the side of the head knocking him both senseless and overboard.

Amid the chaos no one else had seen what had happened. Without a second thought Number Two dropped his cutlass, threw off his hat and dove off the ship after a man he no longer disliked.

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aileiltaliesin [2018-03-08 19:05:48 +0000 UTC]

I like your continuation cannon here a great deal. Now that we, the audience, know that Charles has come to value the pirates as people and not 'avenue to get a dodo bird', it is realistic that not all of the pirates would have the same information and beliefs about his character (that and it's a Number Two's job to be suspicious and second-guess courses of action which have an effect on the safety and wellness of the whole crew). You've treated this thoughtfully and I appreciate the growing respect you've planted.

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chill13 In reply to aileiltaliesin [2018-03-08 19:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Yep.  Scarf is really the only one who thinks things through and he takes his job of protecting the others extremely seriously.  The others may have forgiven and forgot whet he did before but Scarf saw it as a mark of his character, and a dangerous one.

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aileiltaliesin In reply to chill13 [2018-03-09 05:32:03 +0000 UTC]

As my dad always used to tell us: thoughts are the most dangerous things about people 'cause you never know what sorts of actions they'll turn into. Being totally fair, Scarf had no way of peeking into Darwin's heart and satisfying himself that, yes, he has come to value the pirates.

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CyborgPhoenix [2018-01-03 02:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Meriwether: Is gettin' a giant squid really worth this, man? I mean think about it, you're probably gonna die and then I'll be without you to pick on for bein' such a nerd. 

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CyborgPhoenix [2017-12-12 05:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Meriwether: Ooh, yeah stupid stunts that involve you almost dyin'! *Sarcastic grin* That'll get girls to like you for sure~  *Light punch* Be careful next time, *kisses his cheek* I love you when you're y'know,  alive. 

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CyborgPhoenix [2017-11-05 23:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Meriwether: Whoa! *Rushes to see if he's okay, she slips a little and accidentally rams the toe of her boot into a rather, erm, bad place*

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daisybtoes [2013-06-06 02:19:34 +0000 UTC]

This is good stuff. Your pirates are really cool guys. Imagine: Charles Darwin as a pirate!

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redlikeroses42 [2013-05-23 22:50:41 +0000 UTC]

wonderful job! <3

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chill13 In reply to redlikeroses42 [2013-05-24 00:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! So glad you like!

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arcnova [2013-02-10 05:26:06 +0000 UTC]

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chill13 In reply to arcnova [2013-02-11 06:47:19 +0000 UTC]

10 Q!
You like dis movie?

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arcnova In reply to chill13 [2013-02-11 15:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Haven't seen it. I probably should eh?

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chill13 In reply to arcnova [2013-02-11 20:24:14 +0000 UTC]

I think you would like it. It's funny and British.

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Mutil8tor [2013-02-09 18:15:32 +0000 UTC]

E-Everything about this is incredible :'D The drawing, the story, the shading, everything! You most certainly leave me excited for what you do next!

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chill13 In reply to Mutil8tor [2013-02-11 06:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! So glad you like. I'm hoping to still do some more pirates stuff.

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Mutil8tor In reply to chill13 [2013-02-11 07:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh please do!

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Keatonprincess [2013-02-09 17:36:15 +0000 UTC]

OH MY LORD YOU ARE AMAZING x

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chill13 In reply to Keatonprincess [2013-02-13 16:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Thank you!

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Mort08 [2013-02-09 16:30:24 +0000 UTC]

-claps enthusiastically- We have a great artist AND a great writer!

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chill13 In reply to Mort08 [2013-02-09 16:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Awww. Thanks! That means a lot coming from you!

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Tartansweet [2013-02-09 13:52:32 +0000 UTC]

You rip out my heart and serve it back to me with squid tentacles. Lovely. But all joking aside, this is really fantastic! I cant wait to read and see more!

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chill13 In reply to Tartansweet [2013-02-09 16:53:11 +0000 UTC]

What a recipe! Lol!

So glad you like! Thanks.

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Tartansweet In reply to chill13 [2013-02-09 23:39:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it's been passed down generation to generation... O.o you're welcome.

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Floating-Away [2013-02-09 13:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, you need to write and draw more!

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chill13 In reply to Floating-Away [2013-02-09 16:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Actually I'm almost constantly drawing. But this (and my 'Cricket' story) are the first writing I've done in a long while.

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Floating-Away In reply to chill13 [2013-02-09 16:58:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm so jealous, you can write and draw, I can only write, and even that's not very good!

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artjuggler [2013-02-09 11:11:46 +0000 UTC]

You can write well, as well as draw much better than I can!
I am very envious!

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SapphierShadows [2013-02-09 11:08:28 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic!! the story, the picture everything! i love their poses in this, very realistic in my opinion!
gosh, i sure hope Charles and Scarf and the rest of them will be ok!!

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chill13 In reply to SapphierShadows [2013-02-11 06:50:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you much! I had to rework Darwin's pose several times.

Me too! It was three in the morning and I had to stop writing or my brain would fry. I'm worried about them myself!

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SapphierShadows In reply to chill13 [2013-02-11 07:41:26 +0000 UTC]

i'm not surprised! O_o it looks tricky to draw!

awww man gosh, i hope you do a part 2 of this so we all know if they're safe or not!!

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Undreamtstories [2013-02-09 10:46:48 +0000 UTC]

I really like the fan fiction you wrote in the description, it really complements the picture.

I love how you drew the bubbles, the composition of the picture, anatomy, posing and the shading.

This is the type of deviation that's really worth taking the time to comment on and it's exactly what I hope will appear in my news feed.

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chill13 In reply to Undreamtstories [2013-02-09 16:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! This comment really made my day. I'm so happy the composition turned out! I can't tell you how many times I cropped this thing. This is my first real attempt at bubbles so it makes me glad you like them!

THANK YOU!

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Undreamtstories In reply to chill13 [2013-02-10 00:05:56 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome!

I also had a quick look at your favourites and saw that bubble tutorial.

And when I compared the tutorial with your bubbles I can honestly say that you did very well for your first attempt.

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chill13 In reply to Undreamtstories [2013-02-17 17:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. That was a great tutorial. Very helpful.

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