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Published: 2015-12-11 01:38:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1711; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 6
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Description She was right.  It was beautiful.  So very beautiful.  But not because of the warm glow that throbbed hot each time he exhaled.  Not because of the way the little lights flickered up and down the stem.  Not even because of the miraculous metamorphosis from a dead-looking pod during the day into this gorgeous blooming flower at the fall of darkness. While those things were indeed to be admired...it was beautiful because it was from Kya.  

She hadn't meant it as a present, of course.  As she had been showing him the colony he asked her if the vines clinging to every building had a purpose.  She had smiled...by the Colors that smile!...and plucked one of the dull, brown buds and passed it to him.  

"Keep it.  Wait until it gets dark."  Her eyes had twinkled knowingly.  

He was starstruck and befuddled.  He had never expected this.  Not only had she spoke to him and lead him around the villiage but amazingly she seemed to truly enjoy his company.  He had never met a Jssfloon like her.

He smiled at the warm light on his face and all four hearts glowed like the bloom in his hand. 

(Playing with light and colors and inspired by this: Imprint  )

Flyspur and the Jssfloon belong to me.
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chill13 In reply to ??? [2016-03-26 21:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah. Flyspur's a sweetheart.

It's a pretty neat one. Ugly and brown during the day and beautiful and glowing at night.

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Simple-Clever-Bot In reply to chill13 [2016-03-26 21:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like an amped-up version of a Moonflower. Or, similar to one at least. 

As for Flyspur, I don't think anyone on the Nellie-Bell isn't a sweetheart in some manner or another. 

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chill13 In reply to Simple-Clever-Bot [2016-03-26 21:20:56 +0000 UTC]

.Moonflower. That sounds about right.

They do all have their good qualities. Even Ludge...but nobody's quite sure what it is.

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Simple-Clever-Bot In reply to chill13 [2016-03-26 23:23:30 +0000 UTC]

They'll figure it out eventually!

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chill13 In reply to Simple-Clever-Bot [2016-03-27 00:12:39 +0000 UTC]

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KatysCornerTx [2015-12-17 21:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Flyspur is completely smitten.  And it is adorable.

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chill13 In reply to KatysCornerTx [2015-12-17 21:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Yep.  He's so far gone, he's in another galaxy!

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MerryellaBrandybuck [2015-12-12 14:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Aw, this is so beautiful. Is there going to be a continuation?

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chill13 In reply to MerryellaBrandybuck [2015-12-12 15:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I hopefully will have a whole story about this.

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MerryellaBrandybuck In reply to chill13 [2015-12-13 10:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, great! Can't wait

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geminithewildfire [2015-12-12 04:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh so pretty and glowy! Love the warmth and the light ^^

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chill13 In reply to geminithewildfire [2015-12-12 15:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I just love doing glowy things!

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ChrystalK [2015-12-12 01:22:04 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. I love the serene, warm feel of the whole picture and the content smile on his face.

His eyes seem to have taken a lot of time. I mean, I just love that little spark in them.

The little plant in his hand is so cool! I wonder if it actually creates heat as well as light...

I was listening to Owl City's best songs and his song "Gold" came on. It fit the mood of the picture so perfectly! If you haven't heard any Owl City, here's "Gold": www.youtube.com/watch?v=tzoreF…

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chill13 In reply to ChrystalK [2015-12-12 01:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  
Yeah. It's a moment of quiet and content amazement for him.  He's pretty happy about how.

It might.  

Oh, I love Owl City.  But I haven't heard that one.  I have actually wanted to do a Hyperdrive picture inspired by Fireflies.  

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ChrystalK In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 02:10:56 +0000 UTC]

I hope this turns out well for Flyspur. I wonder if Rover will be for or against his little romance with Kya...

Oooh! That would be pretty cool. Especially if he kept it and planted it so that he could have its light and warmth on the Nellie-Bell!

I do too! A line from "Galaxies" is actually what inspired the title of my sci-fi project, Through the Galaxies. That would be awesome! I love that song... I just recently found a really cool video with a bunch of my favorite songs by him, too: www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZHucc…

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chill13 In reply to ChrystalK [2015-12-12 02:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Heh.  That could go two ways.  In the past Rover had done everything to try and get Flyspur to talk to a girl he liked.  Thought it would be good for the little guy.  And he could be just tickled at the whole situation.  But on the other hand he's used to Flyspur being constantly at his side.  And that might not sit too well with him.  

It would certainly make a great nightlight.

Oh, cool.  I have...I think his first cd.  And my BFF has another one.

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ChrystalK In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 17:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...hard to tell which way it could go. I'd love to see a heart-to-hearts (plural hearts in Flyspur's case...) kind of moment  with Rover attempting to get Flyspur to talk to Kya about his feelings, but then that dramatic part of me that likes option number two where Rover's furious at Kya for taking his best friend from him.

It would! It's so pretty, too. As long as no one's allergic to them.

Cool! I don't have any. I do listen to his songs constantly, though...

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chill13 In reply to ChrystalK [2015-12-12 18:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Who knows. There may be a bit of both. Rover's not exactly one to think ahead. I could see him being all "awww! Blue's got a girlfriend". And then. "Wait...don't spend THAT much time with her. This isn't going how I thought it would"

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ChrystalK In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 21:08:27 +0000 UTC]

XD That would be cute and funny at the same time. Flyspur's enjoying his romance while Rover's like, "Hey! Whadda 'bout me, Blue?!"

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chill13 In reply to ChrystalK [2015-12-13 20:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!

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ChrystalK In reply to chill13 [2015-12-13 20:58:56 +0000 UTC]

;D If only he woulc look ahead just a little...

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FeatherQuilt1988 [2015-12-11 23:04:45 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful! The lighting...

I'm curious about Kya now--is she sincere or not? And her colony, too--is it rather isolated compared to the Jssfloon civilization/area Flyspur comes from?

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chill13 In reply to FeatherQuilt1988 [2015-12-11 23:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

Those are some very good questions!!  Which I do hope to answer in the future.  What do you think about her?

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FeatherQuilt1988 In reply to chill13 [2015-12-16 18:20:08 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome!

Well, since I haven't read the story so far (I noticed you posted something about it today, but I'm not sure if I'll have time to read it yet--I need to get more caught up on your written stories, so thank you for being patient with me! ), my impressions are that yes, her culture is quite removed from Flyspur's, different clothes and environment and possibly even a different language. As for her motives, I'd like to give her the benefit of the doubt and not accuse her of just using him, but I'd think she'd at least have to have some sort of reason for paying so much attention to him, especially since she appears to be a person of some importance in her tribe (or I remember getting that impression anyway ). Perhaps she's thrilled to see an outsider and has always been curious about them, and so is attracted to him because of that (kind of the "princess kept behind walls and wanting to see the world" syndrome or whatever ). Her culture could possibly have a less strict idea of thirds "having their place" as well; or perhaps she even IS another third, just like Flyspur, and has somehow hidden it (through a fake scent like perfume or something)? So she sees him as a kindred spirit? I'm not sure. Again, I'm certainly not saying she wouldn't just be a nice person and treat Flyspur civilly in any case, but for her to be paying him such SPECIAL attention... it does seem like she'd have a reason of some sort, something that makes him seem like a kindred spirit to her. Whatever that something happens to be. We'll see, I guess!

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chill13 In reply to FeatherQuilt1988 [2015-12-16 18:52:07 +0000 UTC]

Well, I JUST posted it a couple days ago so don't feel bad.  

I like those theories!  One of them is pretty close to the truth.    Yes.  She is someone of importance.   

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Fantasy-Fashionista [2015-12-11 21:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh, pretty! I love the colors and the mood this sets. And I love Flyspur's small smile

And ooh, KyaxFlyspur moment, I presume? SO MUCH YES

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chill13 In reply to Fantasy-Fashionista [2015-12-11 22:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!  Most fun I've had with colors in a long time!  

Sounds like it, doesn't it.  

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Fantasy-Fashionista In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 19:31:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

And heck yes!! Lol.

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WorldBuildersInc [2015-12-11 18:48:09 +0000 UTC]

Aha! Good on Flyspur! Finally, a love interest!

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chill13 In reply to WorldBuildersInc [2015-12-11 22:10:51 +0000 UTC]

He has had very little contact with girls of his own species.  Oh, sure he did buisiness with them on Jssfloon and there was his mother and sister.  But actually having a pleasent conversation with a girl he isn't related to....it's a whole new experience for him.

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quiroz2 [2015-12-11 16:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty

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chill13 In reply to quiroz2 [2015-12-11 16:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you much!

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UniversesCollideInc [2015-12-11 11:50:53 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely. And Flyspur is just so HAPPY! I hope this ends well for him, even if it ends with a "Go with your friend; he needs you now. But I will wait for you until you can return...or forever if need be." moment.

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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2015-12-11 15:51:58 +0000 UTC]

He's positively giddy! Heh. Yeah. You know if she wanted Flyspur to stay with her he'd be pretty torn.

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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2015-12-11 16:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Probably even more torn than he was when he had to pick between Rover and his family; his family was a duty but this time he's wanted in a way he never dreamed anyone could.

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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2015-12-11 16:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Exactly.  He knew from the time he was little he would never have a family of his own, so it was something he never even dared to want.  But this came on him so fast he's hardly had time to realize what's happening.  

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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2015-12-11 17:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Poor guy...

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Phoenix-FireMage [2015-12-11 08:36:44 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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chill13 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2015-12-11 15:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!!

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 06:38:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Klonvon [2015-12-11 06:40:59 +0000 UTC]

This is so warm and heart melting. I really hope this goes well for Flyspur. He's such a nice guy, I'd love to see him this happy all the time.

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chill13 In reply to Klonvon [2015-12-11 15:50:13 +0000 UTC]

He's always looking out for everyone else he deserves to be happy.

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Klonvon In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 00:47:58 +0000 UTC]

I've got to say though, something about Kya sets me on edge. I hope I'm wrong, but I don't entirely trust her. No specific reason, it's just my paranoia acting up. Maybe...

I must now glare suspiciously at you, the author of this potentially heartbreaking scenario. 

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chill13 In reply to Klonvon [2015-12-12 00:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...She seems kind enough.  If she DID have an alterior motive i wonder what it could be.  

LOL!  Glare all you want missy.  I ain't givin' NOTHIN away.  *evil grin*

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Klonvon In reply to chill13 [2015-12-12 02:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Okay now I'm convinced you have an evil plan. I will glare harder!

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chill13 In reply to Klonvon [2015-12-12 03:13:18 +0000 UTC]

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Rebel-Rider [2015-12-11 05:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Good job. I love the lighting. I wonder what happens or happened to her. She doesn't seem like she's as anti-third as most people on that planet. Edit: How do Jssfloon eyebrows work? Are they just a darker pigment on the skin?

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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2015-12-11 05:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Good question. She doesn't seem put off by him at all from what he's seen. What do you think?

They are just darker markings on the skin. No hair involved.

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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2015-12-11 05:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Not sure. Maybe she had a third sibling so she has sympathy for them? Maybe she's a rebel who doesn't care about the society rules, which would be more likely if she's been off-planet. 

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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2015-12-12 05:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. That is logical. Having a Third sibling would certainly make her more understanding of them. And there are those in Jssfloon society who in general sympathise with Thirds.

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