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ChimericalDestitute — Cherry Red
Published: 2005-08-15 05:43:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Someone's comfort. Someone's grace.
They've found me alone in this place.
Strange that one's haven,
can be another's hell.
Not that this place is hell...
I only mean to while away the hours,
listening, metaphorically, to my own voice.
My strength is my weakness,
my passion is my plague.
But I am sure those words have been uttered before from a thousand lips.
But should it not be the lips that are our downfall?!
Lips that make love in their meaningless significance.
Lips that live,
lips that die,
lips that kiss,
from mouths that sigh.
Why do we dispose of our time reveling in fantasies,
and lolling about in memories?
The time I have found for me,
for this,
is simply an extension of my loathing distrust for those lips!
Those lips! What symbolism they bear!
To lie, to love, to live!
To die, to hate, to curse!
The honorable intention of those lips!
For is it not lips that fade the glowing light of innocence for a moments pleasure?
Is it not the kiss that beings the romance that breaks the heart?
And truth be told...
you know I'm right.
For as your lips move silently along the lines,
are you not imagining those lips?
That last passionate moment in which you lost a piece of yourself to those lips.
See, now the lips of my imagination and gone and got you fantasizing.
They now beg a thousand pardons. Pardons that have been uttered before from a thousand lips.
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Comments: 11

LilRachaeLee [2005-08-16 04:41:11 +0000 UTC]

liz. honestly. i'm speachless. this poem is amazing. i can't even... agh. im so jealous. really though liz you are SOOOOO incredibly talented and i look up to you so much. God if i could even be HALF as good a writer as you someday. I'd be so happy. Liz you are amazingly talented! aghhhhh!!!:l a;soitahw;eltha !

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LilRachaeLee [2005-08-16 04:41:09 +0000 UTC]

liz. honestly. i'm speachless. this poem is amazing. i can't even... agh. im so jealous. really though liz you are SOOOOO incredibly talented and i look up to you so much. God if i could even be HALF as good a writer as you someday. I'd be so happy. Liz you are amazingly talented! aghhhhh!!!:l a;soitahw;eltha !

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LilRachaeLee [2005-08-16 04:41:05 +0000 UTC]

liz. honestly. i'm speachless. this poem is amazing. i can't even... agh. im so jealous. really though liz you are SOOOOO incredibly talented and i look up to you so much. God if i could even be HALF as good a writer as you someday. I'd be so happy. Liz you are amazingly talented! aghhhhh!!!:l a;soitahw;eltha !

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ChimericalDestitute In reply to LilRachaeLee [2005-08-16 16:47:07 +0000 UTC]

you sent it 3x you MUST mean it. i love you so much ray and you are so much better than i was 2 years ago. youll get there. promise.

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mongolShawn [2005-08-16 04:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Really love this poem. The feeling if very classic without becoming too elitist. Very smooth and flowing.

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kiwizz [2005-08-15 17:31:47 +0000 UTC]

"For is it not lips that fade the glowing light of innocence for a moments pleasure?
Is it not the kiss that beings the romance that breaks the heart?
And truth be told...
you know I'm right."
beautiful missed reading your stuff

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ChimericalDestitute In reply to kiwizz [2005-08-16 04:32:53 +0000 UTC]

your comments are my absolute favorite. i love you to death.

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SnailDude [2005-08-15 05:45:36 +0000 UTC]

its awsome!!!!!!! FAV 4 SURE!

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ChimericalDestitute In reply to SnailDude [2005-08-15 05:47:28 +0000 UTC]

wow thank you so much. i wasn't sure if i would like this at all. but maybe its not so bad.

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SnailDude In reply to ChimericalDestitute [2005-08-15 05:48:18 +0000 UTC]

np! its awsome!!

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ChimericalDestitute In reply to SnailDude [2005-08-15 06:06:57 +0000 UTC]

merci!

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