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The afternoon sat,pregnant with insignificant purpose.
3 lives,
3 friends,
1 escape.
The bathroom is cool,
the outside air is warm.
The tissue crumbles,
As it scrambles to clean up the mistakes.
Explanations,
from one to another.
Each separate,
Aware only of their own abilities.
Working:
on, with, off, of and for each other.
Learning,
Teaching,
All with careful carelessness.
A quiet gathering,
Recorded,
Remembered.
The permanent color of a peaceful bond,
deep,
soft,
unconditional.
No outside influences,
just the three.
Moments tied loosely,
perfectly unaligned.
An afternoon unhindered-
simply insignificant.
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Comments: 6
YardTackler [2005-09-24 07:58:49 +0000 UTC]
ada is always gorgeous, even when she doesn't know a camra is around!
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ChimericalDestitute In reply to YardTackler [2005-09-24 19:08:20 +0000 UTC]
lol of course she is. she's perfect.
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UnspokenRequest [2005-09-18 03:27:34 +0000 UTC]
I adore your word choice in this poem.
"Careful carelessness"
"Perfectly unaligned"
"Simply insignificant..."
... Just great.
Keep it up, please.
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ChimericalDestitute In reply to UnspokenRequest [2005-09-18 14:49:53 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I'm so glad you're back to your commenting ways. I did miss you so.
Thank you darling! I think it's about time my style and word usage matured a little.
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UnspokenRequest In reply to ChimericalDestitute [2005-09-18 17:12:35 +0000 UTC]
It is uniquely Liz.
And hey, I've been listening to JLC a lot lately. Cathedrals is a great song.
Go liz.
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ChimericalDestitute In reply to UnspokenRequest [2005-09-19 03:34:09 +0000 UTC]
Cathedrals is the greatest ever. I am going this Thursday to their last concert in Nashville. They are breaking up. I cried when I found out. Sobbed actually.
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