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The Doll MakerThere once was a man who made beautiful dolls of all shapes and sizes. He even made life sized dolls. Many requested these expensive and exquisite dolls and though these dolls brought the humble man a lot of money he lived modestly with his young son Vine.
The young boy was fascinated by his father’s work. The doll parts and finished dolls filled the home. Each was unique and had their own beautiful personality. Vine would watch in fascination as his father would paint the delicate lips upon their pale faces. He wanted to be just like his father someday and create gorgeous works of art.
One day a rich business man requested an ornate life sized doll from the humble doll maker, he went by the name Gier. However the doll maker refused to make the doll upon discovering Gier was crooked and wanted the doll for perverted means. Gier grew enraged at the makers refusal, so enraged that he sent hired arms to get rid of the doll maker.
The doll makers home was set ablaze. He sacrificed himself to save his son from the flames. Vine watched in terror and dismay as his father burned alive before him. His tears only evaporated from the heat as he watched his home turn to rubble and ash.
He sobbed over the remains of his father, surrounded by charred reminisce of his home, of the beautiful ornate dolls. They were now melted, distorted, horrid disfigured atrocities of what they once were.
Vine searched through the wreckage with his tiny hands, trying to find anything that may have survived the blaze. In the end all he could find was a life sized pink glass doll eye. He cupped it in his hands and held it close to his heart, his messy black locks falling in his face. The eye was all he had left.
The child was at the mere age of nine when he watched everything he had ever known be destroyed in an instant...
Unfortunately the terrors were not over for the child.
Gier had his hired arms return to the scene of the crime, to make sure the doll maker was truly dead. They found the charred corpse of the once great maker however they also came across the son. Not sure what to do with the child they abducted him and took him to Gier.
Gier had no real means for the child but decided to keep him, kept him to replace the doll he never received. He kept Vine for three years, treating him like a doll, an object, playing with him. Vine was his prisoner. The boy couldn’t take it anymore and he began to lose himself. His mind began to deteriorate.
One night while the man loomed over Vine with him pinned to the bed, trying to play with him, Vine decided he did not want to play anymore. Vine quickly grabbed a pen off the nightstand and began to stab it through the man’s carotid. Blood gushed from the hole; it splattered all over the walls, floor, and Vine himself. Vine had just killed a man for the first time. As the body lay there, stiffening, Vine stole some money and quickly escaped.
Vine lived on the streets. He wanted to start up the family business again, to make dolls. He lived in an abandoned boarded up apartment in the bad part of town. With the money he stole he got parts and painted beautiful dolls. He sold them, getting more money, trading up, making more, more beautiful dolls. More life like dolls. Plastic, clay, and porcelain no longer became enough to satisfy Vine...
NEWS REPORT
Missing teen MURDERED. A horrific scene was discovered at the town park. Emily Rider brutally MUTILATED.
- Autopsy Report- Emily Rider:
Cause of death, blood loss and shock.
Found in what appeared to be an elegant hand stitched gown. The corners of Emily’s mouth had been sewn into a small smile with lips painted a deep red. Eyes...gouged out and replaced with glass ones, fake eyelashes and painted makeup. Her nails were removed and replaced with fake ones. A frozen expression remained on her face. Her head was shaved and replaced with blue hairs sewn into her scalp replacing her once blonde locks. And perhaps the most disturbing, every joint in her body was popped out of their socket or broken.
Truly the work of a psychopathic killer.
Examination Notes:
It appears Emily Rider was very much alive when the killer started to mutilate her. She was alive as he had her face sewn into place, each lock of hair tediously sewn into her scalp and as her eyes were gouged out.
She was initially found on a park bench, put in place like a doll on display. This would explain perhaps why the jointed were popped out of the sockets, it would make it easier to display her in whatever way he pleased. By the way the killing was executed it appears the killer views his crimes as works of art...
Jason Harris [ Medical Examiner]
Emily was Vines second murder but a first of a string. He got a thrill in creating new dolls. Carving into them, making them beautiful. He was now 17, never caught. Still living in abandoned homes, still killing.
He had gone completely mad, though he did not believe so. One might describe him as schizophrenic. Vine however thought he was fine. He lived in a reality he had created for himself in his own mind. He was not a killer, he was an artist, an artist who made beautiful dolls.
Vine prided himself in his work but still saw himself as worthless, dirty, used goods…
In an attempt to make himself as beautiful as his dolls he gouged out one of his own eyes and replaced it with the only thing he had left from his child hood, the glass eye. He then stitched half of a smile into his lips. However he did not finish the job, there was too much pain. He felt he failed in making himself beautiful, leaving scars, leaving his face mutilated by his own hands.
He knows he is damaged goods...he knows he is worthless...all he can do is make people happy by making his beautiful dolls...
His work became quite popular in the news papers and television broadcasts for displaying his art in public places. And he loved his given name by the public too...
The Doll maker...
"Just like daddy right?"
“Let me make you beautiful.”
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Comments: 337
Chisai-Yokai In reply to ??? [2014-05-12 00:38:18 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you very much, that means a lot ^^
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conom In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-05-12 22:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Welcome, when i see a good creepypasta i know its a good creepypasta.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to miku-knight [2014-05-06 19:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^ That means a lot ^^
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imagination-firework In reply to ??? [2014-05-05 00:11:55 +0000 UTC]
When I saw the picture of Vine I thought that he was a girl but, when you said boy I was like
Me: *Reads* *Finds out Vine is a boy* OMG!!!
Anyways the story was real good
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to imagination-firework [2014-05-05 00:14:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
And yeah, it seems I am not very good at drawing men for whenever I draw them people mistake them for females ^^' I am working on it.
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imagination-firework In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-05-05 00:55:56 +0000 UTC]
It's not a bad thing or anything like that! I just thought he was a female because of the long hair...
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to imagination-firework [2014-05-05 01:07:43 +0000 UTC]
Guys can have long hair ^^'
But yes I understand ^^ Tis alright~
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imagination-firework In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-05-05 01:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Sorry if I bothered you at all ^ ^"
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to imagination-firework [2014-05-05 01:19:29 +0000 UTC]
There is no need to apologies, tis all good ^^
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VvStardustvV In reply to ??? [2014-05-04 22:01:17 +0000 UTC]
I love it. Probably in my top three favorite creepypasta. How do you pronounce Vine? Is it just Vine or is it Vin-eh?
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to VvStardustvV [2014-05-04 22:07:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, that really means a lot ^^
It is pronounced Vine like the plant ^^
Like a grape vine ^^
Here is a link to the origin of his name if you are interested ^^
the-doll-maker-fc.deviantart.c…
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RainbowCrash147258 In reply to ??? [2014-05-03 17:55:20 +0000 UTC]
I luv it but I'm not I true writer... And ...I think it's rushed I don't get it
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to RainbowCrash147258 [2014-05-03 17:56:46 +0000 UTC]
It is rushed.
What is it that you don't understand so that I may explain it to you.
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BlazBlood In reply to ??? [2014-04-21 20:40:18 +0000 UTC]
whoa it is truly amazing work you did here!im loving it!kinda like the puppet master!made me kinda shiver!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to BlazBlood [2014-04-21 22:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
And The puppet master?
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-23 21:30:41 +0000 UTC]
one more question . How did it feel when Mr Creepy Pasta read your story .
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-23 22:00:23 +0000 UTC]
That's a hard question to answer ^^'
I was extremely happy when he ask me if he could narrate my story and I said yes.
I was extremely nervous about it though as well, worried about what people would think.
I later realized my story was not that great, that it was rushed. I believe my character is good, but that first story needs more work, it's not well written.
I am very appreciative of what he did though. He helped my story become more well known, even if it is not the best. Plus I love his work.
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-24 03:15:04 +0000 UTC]
I was laughing because you said you were so nervous xD
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-24 03:53:00 +0000 UTC]
;w; I had a lot of anxiety actually.
After how mean people were about Clockwork I was scared that would happen to my story too. ;w;
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-24 03:58:54 +0000 UTC]
I liked '' Clockwork '' x(
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-24 04:10:02 +0000 UTC]
I like it too.
It got a lot of hate though when mcp read it.
So that is why I was so nervous for him to read mine.
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-24 04:32:27 +0000 UTC]
They deleted it because they said it was a Jeff the killer spinoff xd
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-24 04:37:34 +0000 UTC]
The story does need some work, yes, but I still believe it has potential.
The author is working on re-writing the story to make it better.
I am a sucker for a good design and I love clockworks design.
My story got deleted from the wiki from being a Jeff the Killer rip off too *Shrug*
I think it is ironic because character wise Vine is kinda the opposite of Jeff.
But oh well.
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-24 05:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Ugh xD That's why I want to post it on DA
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-24 09:43:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, There is another wiki where your things won't get deleted though.
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-26 00:10:53 +0000 UTC]
I got another idea . Something happened to this boys face ( self inflicted) and now he where a bag over his face
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-26 00:23:51 +0000 UTC]
The bag sounds like it could be a cool idea. It makes me think of "Love is Blind"
yaramillerblogfolio.files.word…
Though what wounds did he self inflict and why?
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-26 00:29:49 +0000 UTC]
Foster mother and girl he liked died
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to respectlo [2014-04-26 00:39:50 +0000 UTC]
How did they die?
And still, what caused him to mutilate his face? Why not cut or some more other more common form of self harm? (I am not saying ou should change it to cutting, I just want to know the reasoning behind the face specifically.)
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respectlo In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-26 00:47:39 +0000 UTC]
He killed them and his foster mother called him a ugly piece of shit . I don't know all the details but I was brainstorming and it seemed like a great and different idea
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BlazBlood In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-21 22:16:31 +0000 UTC]
oh its and hmm like 1980's movies about these killer puppets!and it still scares me to this day!you should watch it!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to BlazBlood [2014-04-22 03:35:22 +0000 UTC]
I will keep it in mind ^^
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