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Chisai-Yokai — CreepyPasta: The Doll Maker
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Description The Doll Maker

There once was a man who made beautiful dolls of all shapes and sizes. He even made life sized dolls. Many requested these expensive and exquisite dolls and though these dolls brought the humble man a lot of money he lived modestly with his young son Vine.

The young boy was fascinated by his father’s work. The doll parts and finished dolls filled the home. Each was unique and had their own beautiful personality. Vine would watch in fascination as his father would paint the delicate lips upon their pale faces. He wanted to be just like his father someday and create gorgeous works of art.

One day a rich business man requested an ornate life sized doll from the humble doll maker, he went by the name Gier. However the doll maker refused to make the doll upon discovering Gier was crooked and wanted the doll for perverted means. Gier grew enraged at the makers refusal, so enraged that he sent hired arms to get rid of the doll maker.

The doll makers home was set ablaze. He sacrificed himself to save his son from the flames. Vine watched in terror and dismay as his father burned alive before him. His tears only evaporated from the heat as he watched his home turn to rubble and ash.

He sobbed over the remains of his father, surrounded by charred reminisce of his home, of the beautiful ornate dolls. They were now melted, distorted, horrid disfigured atrocities of what they once were.

Vine searched through the wreckage with his tiny hands, trying to find anything that may have survived the blaze. In the end all he could find was a life sized pink glass doll eye. He cupped it in his hands and held it close to his heart, his messy black locks falling in his face. The eye was all he had left.

The child was at the mere age of nine when he watched everything he had ever known be destroyed in an instant...

Unfortunately the terrors were not over for the child.

Gier had his hired arms return to the scene of the crime, to make sure the doll maker was truly dead. They found the charred corpse of the once great maker however they also came across the son. Not sure what to do with the child they abducted him and took him to Gier.

Gier had no real means for the child but decided to keep him, kept him to replace the doll he never received. He kept Vine for three years, treating him like a doll, an object, playing with him. Vine was his prisoner. The boy couldn’t take it anymore and he began to lose himself. His mind began to deteriorate.

One night while the man loomed over Vine with him pinned to the bed, trying to play with him, Vine decided he did not want to play anymore. Vine quickly grabbed a pen off the nightstand and began to stab it through the man’s carotid. Blood gushed from the hole; it splattered all over the walls, floor, and Vine himself. Vine had just killed a man for the first time. As the body lay there, stiffening, Vine stole some money and quickly escaped.

Vine lived on the streets. He wanted to start up the family business again, to make dolls. He lived in an abandoned boarded up apartment in the bad part of town. With the money he stole he got parts and painted beautiful dolls. He sold them, getting more money, trading up, making more, more beautiful dolls. More life like dolls. Plastic, clay, and porcelain no longer became enough to satisfy Vine...

NEWS REPORT

Missing teen MURDERED. A horrific scene was discovered at the town park. Emily Rider brutally MUTILATED.

- Autopsy Report- Emily Rider:

Cause of death, blood loss and shock.
Found in what appeared to be an elegant hand stitched gown. The corners of Emily’s mouth had been sewn into a small smile with lips painted a deep red. Eyes...gouged out and replaced with glass ones, fake eyelashes and painted makeup. Her nails were removed and replaced with fake ones. A frozen expression remained on her face. Her head was shaved and replaced with blue hairs sewn into her scalp replacing her once blonde locks. And perhaps the most disturbing, every joint in her body was popped out of their socket or broken.
Truly the work of a psychopathic killer.

Examination Notes:

It appears Emily Rider was very much alive when the killer started to mutilate her. She was alive as he had her face sewn into place, each lock of hair tediously sewn into her scalp and as her eyes were gouged out.

She was initially found on a park bench, put in place like a doll on display. This would explain perhaps why the jointed were popped out of the sockets, it would make it easier to display her in whatever way he pleased. By the way the killing was executed it appears the killer views his crimes as works of art...

Jason Harris [ Medical Examiner]

Emily was Vines second murder but a first of a string. He got a thrill in creating new dolls. Carving into them, making them beautiful. He was now 17, never caught. Still living in abandoned homes, still killing.

He had gone completely mad, though he did not believe so. One might describe him as schizophrenic. Vine however thought he was fine. He lived in a reality he had created for himself in his own mind. He was not a killer, he was an artist, an artist who made beautiful dolls.

Vine prided himself in his work but still saw himself as worthless, dirty, used goods…          

In an attempt to make himself as beautiful as his dolls he gouged out one of his own eyes and replaced it with the only thing he had left from his child hood, the glass eye. He then stitched half of a smile into his lips. However he did not finish the job, there was too much pain. He felt he failed in making himself beautiful, leaving scars, leaving his face mutilated by his own hands.

He knows he is damaged goods...he knows he is worthless...all he can do is make people happy by making his beautiful dolls...

His work became quite popular in the news papers and television broadcasts for displaying his art in public places. And he loved his given name by the public too...

The Doll maker...

"Just like daddy right?"


“Let me make you beautiful.”
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Comments: 337

TicciToby2525 In reply to ??? [2014-04-21 01:49:45 +0000 UTC]

Yw

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TheHeroPhase In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 17:41:23 +0000 UTC]

I listened to MrCreepypasta read this; I love this story so much! Stories about dolls/doll makers are my thing! Amazing job.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to TheHeroPhase [2014-04-15 23:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^ That means a lot~

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TheHeroPhase In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-15 23:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Of course! I think the Doll Maker is my new fave Creepypasta character.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to TheHeroPhase [2014-04-16 02:44:15 +0000 UTC]

;w; Oh my gosh that really means a lot ;w; It makes me so surprised and happy when people tell me he is their new favorite. Thank you again~

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TheHeroPhase In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-04-16 02:45:01 +0000 UTC]

No probs!

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Animechick2000 In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 20:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Is it me or is Vine's past similar to Alois Trancy's past. If you haven't watched Black Butler and it's awesome second season, here's Alois' past (Spoiler warning. Duh.):
Alois' real name was Jim Macken. He was an orphan with a younger brother named Luka, and everyone in the village they lived in treated like outcasts (Black Butler takes place during the 1880s by the way.). One day, Jim and Luka find the village on fire, Jim is happy for a short moment, but ends up sad when Luka dies shortly after. A few years later, when Jim is eleven,  he and a few other young boys are kidnapped by an old pedophile.  Jim hears two boys talking about a wish granting fairy, which he attempts to summon but instead gets a demon named Claude, who says he will grant him a wish when he thinks of one. Jim then seduces the old man (he didn't want to. He had to.) and becomes his favorite, and his heir. Jim is given the name Alois Trancy and makes a contract with Claude. Alois then has Claude kill the old man and takes over the Trancy Estate. Alois makes his wish to obtain Ciel Phantomhive for revenge on Sebastian Michealis, when Claude tells him that Sebastian killed Luka. 
Seriously! Am I the only one who thinks Vine and Alois have similar pasts!?

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Animechick2000 [2014-03-27 20:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes I have watched Black Butler.
However the only similarity I see here is a pedophile being involved.
Vine was not an orphan, he had a father and was an only child.
He was not an outcast, he was just a normal kid.
No demons were involved, there was organized crime (Gier)
Vine developed schizophrenia due to his abuse, whatever mental illness Alois suffered due to his abuse was certainly not schizophrenia from what I can see in the anime.
Alois in the end simply wants revenge and uses a demon butler to obtain it.
Vine seeks no revenge in the end. He is content and delusional, he became a killer who abducts young women and turns them into "dolls"

The only thing Alois and Vine have in common is that sadly they were molested when they were young.

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Animechick2000 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-27 20:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, I never said exactly the same. But, there was also fire and the concept of the character losing their only family member involved. And, if you put their pasts in a nutshell they almost sound the same. 
Alois' past in a nutshell: loses brother after a fire and goes crazy due to sexual abuse.
Vine's past in a nutshell: loses father in a fire and goes crazy due to sexual abuse.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Animechick2000 [2014-03-27 21:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes but see the whole thing wrong with putting things in "nut shells" is that you are leaving important details out that can make a story extremely different. There are slight similarities but really nothing of significance.
The reason the "Nutshell theory" does not work is for example if I took the stories of two games and was like

The Legend of Zelda: A game where you play as a male protagonist who needs to fight a powerful monstrous boss who has captured the princess of the protagonists homeland.

Super Mario: A game where you play as a male protagonist who needs to fight a powerful monstrous boss who has captured the princess of the protagonists homeland.

The Legend of Zelda and Mario have those slight insignificant similarities that when worded as previously read can make them sound the same. However we both know that both stories are extremely different.

You see what I am saying?

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Animechick2000 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-27 22:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I know, and I already said I never saw them as the same, and I just saw some similarities between the two when I read the story. I sometimes use the in a nutshell thing to help me find some similarities between two things.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Animechick2000 [2014-03-27 22:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps, it's just that using the "nutshell" thing to describe two things as similar when for the most part they are not is very misleading.
Like I said, slight similarities but indefinitely different.

A lot of people compare my story to Mad Father. Unfortunately I never played the game though now I plan to based on what I have heard.

I hope you know by no means did I intend to come of aggressive or defensive, I was merely having a healthy debate I guess you could say with you.  I am not mad based on your opinions. I just like to clarify things. ^^

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thatonenerdybroad In reply to ??? [2014-03-26 02:18:21 +0000 UTC]

This is great woah

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to thatonenerdybroad [2014-03-26 20:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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Rosewhip22 In reply to ??? [2014-03-23 13:09:55 +0000 UTC]

He's he yours? I mean is he your character? My brother told me about this guy once, but when I searched it up in google popped in a different result. Maybe he must have seen it here. But anyways I like it. I feel sorry for Vine.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Rosewhip22 [2014-03-24 10:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes he is mine, I created him.
The name "The Doll Maker" Is a common one, like the concept of horror in relation to dolls is common so  you probably saw results for different stories by different authors though the stories shared similar titles.
Also Thank you very much ^^ and yes, I feel as though I made it more sad than scary.

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Rosewhip22 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-27 12:36:31 +0000 UTC]

I think I like yours than the one I've read in google. You had a group called the doll maker right? What are the requirements? Cause I want to make a Doll maker X reader story.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Rosewhip22 [2014-03-27 18:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I am really glad you like my story ^^
There are no requirements for joining the group ^^
I am happy you like him enough to write a fanfictions, however as the creator I respectfully request you don't write one that is The Doll Maker X reader. The Doll Maker, Vine, is asexual. He is not physically attracted to anymore and does not desire sex in any way. Gier sexually abused him as a child, the concept of sex disgusts Vine because of this. So if you were to write such a story it really wouldn't be about the same character.
My apologies, I hope you understand and are willing to respect my wishes.
Sorry, Thank you.

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Rosewhip22 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-28 14:11:13 +0000 UTC]

So... how about a friendly understanding. I mean no romance included. Just a simple and friendly understanding. Like he meets someone who knows how to make cute rag dolls and wants to know more about him/her (because that's what I had in mind) And thank u for making one rule clear for me. I like your drawings by the way. Would you like to draw mine? I mean if you're interested. Cause I'm still learning how to make shades and proper coloring. I'm only good on making stories. But maybe one of these days I'll draw a chibi.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Rosewhip22 [2014-03-28 17:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for understanding ^^
That story should be fine I think. It would be best if whoever makes the rag dolls is female for Vine is uncomfortable around men, particularly ones older than him. He has no problem getting close to women though, often calling them "Miss" and being very polite to them.
If there is anything you need to know about Vine or something you are not sure about when writing you story you can ask me. I have no problem with questions, if anything I rather be asked about him rather than people making guesses. ^^
And Thank you very much about my art ^^
I would but unfortunately I am very busy write now with art trades among other things. I don't even have time to draw for myself haha, tis sad.
As far as your art, practice makes perfect ^^ it just takes time and practice to get better. For me I think I am very good at coloring and such, however my anatomy is bad, I need to work on perspective and light sourcing. I know though with practice I will get better ^^ and so will you.

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Rosewhip22 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-30 14:31:16 +0000 UTC]

I really wish I could be a professional already. But you know what they say, same can be writer,s some cant. I really want to know more about Vine's attitude, manners, way of trying to interact with the reader, well almost everything so I wont keep asking too many questions. I had this odd habit of not asking too much questions because I think that someone might find it very annoying (Imagine me trying to ask a question to my teacher in math, but don't have the guts) And i can say that's one of my bad habits because I think too much of the future. I also saw a few of your cosplay pictures. You look very pretty and awesome.I think that dark colors suits you. And it's ok if your busy with other stuff. In fact, the other day right after I made the request, I kind of felt guilty of doing it. I have 2 pasta characters in mind. Both boys name harlequin and puppet master. But when i saw puppeteer in your works, I began to think of a new name for him, but unfortunately I have none. But anyways, thank you for taking your time. I really appreciate it.       

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Rosewhip22 [2014-03-30 16:00:20 +0000 UTC]

It's good to ask questions ^^ Though I understand being nervous about asking them, I can be the same way, especially in school.
You can ask me whatever you please about Vine, I won't mind at all~
If it helps, I don't know if you have a Tumblr, but I have an rp/ask blog for him. You could ask me or Vine questions there ^^ You could interact with Vine ^^ You could also read threads to see how Vine interacts with certain characters~ I'm sure that might be of some help~ Here is a link to the blog~
the-doll-maker-vine.tumblr.com…
I hope it could be of some use ^^
Thank you very much about my cosplay ^^ I work hard on them.
It's okay, don't feel too guilty, people ask me that sort of thing a lot, I just feel bad when I have to turn them down. I unfortunately just don't have enough time, otherwise I would help people out. I Like seeing other peoples OCs ^^
As far as the name you should not worry too much, many others have OCs with names similar to "The Doll Maker" as well. It's not about the name, it is about the story and the character themselves that set them apart from others ^^
It's not a problem ^^ I always answer questions and messages regarding my art ^^

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Rosewhip22 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-30 16:09:55 +0000 UTC]

ok, i'll give it a shot on asking questions on him. I just hope he doesn't make a creepy offer cause I'll freak. I wont be able to sleep tonight. But thanks anyway, I'll book mark it.

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Rosewhip22 [2014-03-30 16:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha ^^ I guess you'll just have to find out~
You're welcome ^^

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Rosewhip22 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-30 16:12:51 +0000 UTC]

How will I know if he replies?

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luvsam In reply to ??? [2014-03-22 01:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Ah I get it Gier was a pervert and child molester and that's why Vien's father denied his quest

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-26 20:24:51 +0000 UTC]

Well Gier was "crooked" as in part of organized crime. It was unlikely that Vine's father knew that Gier was a pervert to the extent that he was but Vines Father did not want to work for a criminal and that is why he refused his services. But yes Gier was a child molester, likely involved in the illegal child slave trade.

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-28 20:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Okay I understand =<

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meyers99 In reply to ??? [2014-03-19 02:15:24 +0000 UTC]

hey uh how u make a story? i just made this profile and i wanted to write stories but i dont know how plz tell me how

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to meyers99 [2014-04-06 18:48:31 +0000 UTC]

Go to submit, submit art, then choose "enter text" and you shall be able to type up a story ^^

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thatonenerdybroad In reply to meyers99 [2014-03-26 02:19:25 +0000 UTC]

When you go to upload a deviation, instead of clicking "upload" there's a thing beside it, that says "add text"
Done.

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SonicFan1155 In reply to ??? [2014-03-14 02:04:19 +0000 UTC]

I just heard Mrcreepypasta on Youtube read this story. It was very chilling!

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to SonicFan1155 [2014-03-14 02:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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SonicFan1155 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-14 02:23:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I'll check out some of your other stuff as well!

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to SonicFan1155 [2014-03-14 02:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah~ Thank you again ^^

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HorizonAllure In reply to ??? [2014-03-10 21:29:54 +0000 UTC]

hmm..seems you're not the only one with a "Dollmaker " uvu

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to HorizonAllure [2014-03-11 02:39:47 +0000 UTC]

It is a common concept

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luvsam In reply to ??? [2014-03-09 14:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh I get it when they mean ''play with him'' that means to have sex with the little boy that sick fuck >

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-09 16:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Gier molested Vine and kept Vine captive for three years. Unfortunately such awful things are not unheard of in real life.

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-09 16:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh If I was there I would kicked Gier's ass for molesting my son Vine and killing my father ( that sick fuck >;(

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-09 16:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Well Vine's mother died during child birth and his Father died in the fire. There was no one to know or care about the fact that Vine had gone missing and was being held captive. Vine was alone to fend for himself and he was only nine.

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-09 16:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Damn that's hard to go through

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-09 17:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Yep yep~

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-09 17:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Okay I have a question for you to ask

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-09 17:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Sure sure, ask away~

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-09 17:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Okay did you heard about this legend called ''Kagome,Kagome''? * smiles evil*

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-09 17:22:24 +0000 UTC]

Someone mentioned it to me but I have not gotten around to reading it ^^'

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-09 17:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Easy it's about these dead children waiting for their next victim to arrive at a empty house in Okinawa,Japan now people went there and end up dead the next morning and this legend is true he he >

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Chisai-Yokai In reply to luvsam [2014-03-09 22:35:43 +0000 UTC]

There are many strange youkai that may or may not exist in our world.

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luvsam In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-03-09 22:39:04 +0000 UTC]

Come on read it it's fun and creepy * evil smile*

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