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The Doll MakerThere once was a man who made beautiful dolls of all shapes and sizes. He even made life sized dolls. Many requested these expensive and exquisite dolls and though these dolls brought the humble man a lot of money he lived modestly with his young son Vine.
The young boy was fascinated by his father’s work. The doll parts and finished dolls filled the home. Each was unique and had their own beautiful personality. Vine would watch in fascination as his father would paint the delicate lips upon their pale faces. He wanted to be just like his father someday and create gorgeous works of art.
One day a rich business man requested an ornate life sized doll from the humble doll maker, he went by the name Gier. However the doll maker refused to make the doll upon discovering Gier was crooked and wanted the doll for perverted means. Gier grew enraged at the makers refusal, so enraged that he sent hired arms to get rid of the doll maker.
The doll makers home was set ablaze. He sacrificed himself to save his son from the flames. Vine watched in terror and dismay as his father burned alive before him. His tears only evaporated from the heat as he watched his home turn to rubble and ash.
He sobbed over the remains of his father, surrounded by charred reminisce of his home, of the beautiful ornate dolls. They were now melted, distorted, horrid disfigured atrocities of what they once were.
Vine searched through the wreckage with his tiny hands, trying to find anything that may have survived the blaze. In the end all he could find was a life sized pink glass doll eye. He cupped it in his hands and held it close to his heart, his messy black locks falling in his face. The eye was all he had left.
The child was at the mere age of nine when he watched everything he had ever known be destroyed in an instant...
Unfortunately the terrors were not over for the child.
Gier had his hired arms return to the scene of the crime, to make sure the doll maker was truly dead. They found the charred corpse of the once great maker however they also came across the son. Not sure what to do with the child they abducted him and took him to Gier.
Gier had no real means for the child but decided to keep him, kept him to replace the doll he never received. He kept Vine for three years, treating him like a doll, an object, playing with him. Vine was his prisoner. The boy couldn’t take it anymore and he began to lose himself. His mind began to deteriorate.
One night while the man loomed over Vine with him pinned to the bed, trying to play with him, Vine decided he did not want to play anymore. Vine quickly grabbed a pen off the nightstand and began to stab it through the man’s carotid. Blood gushed from the hole; it splattered all over the walls, floor, and Vine himself. Vine had just killed a man for the first time. As the body lay there, stiffening, Vine stole some money and quickly escaped.
Vine lived on the streets. He wanted to start up the family business again, to make dolls. He lived in an abandoned boarded up apartment in the bad part of town. With the money he stole he got parts and painted beautiful dolls. He sold them, getting more money, trading up, making more, more beautiful dolls. More life like dolls. Plastic, clay, and porcelain no longer became enough to satisfy Vine...
NEWS REPORT
Missing teen MURDERED. A horrific scene was discovered at the town park. Emily Rider brutally MUTILATED.
- Autopsy Report- Emily Rider:
Cause of death, blood loss and shock.
Found in what appeared to be an elegant hand stitched gown. The corners of Emily’s mouth had been sewn into a small smile with lips painted a deep red. Eyes...gouged out and replaced with glass ones, fake eyelashes and painted makeup. Her nails were removed and replaced with fake ones. A frozen expression remained on her face. Her head was shaved and replaced with blue hairs sewn into her scalp replacing her once blonde locks. And perhaps the most disturbing, every joint in her body was popped out of their socket or broken.
Truly the work of a psychopathic killer.
Examination Notes:
It appears Emily Rider was very much alive when the killer started to mutilate her. She was alive as he had her face sewn into place, each lock of hair tediously sewn into her scalp and as her eyes were gouged out.
She was initially found on a park bench, put in place like a doll on display. This would explain perhaps why the jointed were popped out of the sockets, it would make it easier to display her in whatever way he pleased. By the way the killing was executed it appears the killer views his crimes as works of art...
Jason Harris [ Medical Examiner]
Emily was Vines second murder but a first of a string. He got a thrill in creating new dolls. Carving into them, making them beautiful. He was now 17, never caught. Still living in abandoned homes, still killing.
He had gone completely mad, though he did not believe so. One might describe him as schizophrenic. Vine however thought he was fine. He lived in a reality he had created for himself in his own mind. He was not a killer, he was an artist, an artist who made beautiful dolls.
Vine prided himself in his work but still saw himself as worthless, dirty, used goods…
In an attempt to make himself as beautiful as his dolls he gouged out one of his own eyes and replaced it with the only thing he had left from his child hood, the glass eye. He then stitched half of a smile into his lips. However he did not finish the job, there was too much pain. He felt he failed in making himself beautiful, leaving scars, leaving his face mutilated by his own hands.
He knows he is damaged goods...he knows he is worthless...all he can do is make people happy by making his beautiful dolls...
His work became quite popular in the news papers and television broadcasts for displaying his art in public places. And he loved his given name by the public too...
The Doll maker...
"Just like daddy right?"
“Let me make you beautiful.”
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Comments: 337
Chisai-Yokai In reply to ??? [2014-03-09 23:02:08 +0000 UTC]
I don't have time right now, sorry ^^'
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TCXIQMXXN In reply to ??? [2014-03-08 00:34:38 +0000 UTC]
IT'S WONDERFUL HE IS AS BEAUTIFUL AS THE DOLLS HE MADE! LOVE THE STORY
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to TCXIQMXXN [2014-03-08 11:12:12 +0000 UTC]
Ah~<3 Thank you so much ^^
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Ryanshim [2014-03-05 23:58:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ there are two other stories if you are interested in reading them
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Chibi-chica In reply to ??? [2014-02-27 20:47:23 +0000 UTC]
So, I stumbled on your story through MrCreepyPasta. Very well done.
I love how this was written. And I was reading along while listening. The story is amazing, and I love how the news report flows into it as well as how it flows out. I was amazed. Plenty of creepy brownie points and props.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Chibi-chica [2014-03-06 00:00:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much ^^ that really means a lot ^^
Honestly I think the first story could use a lot of work but I still highly appreciate the praise.
If you are interested there are two other stories involving The Doll Maker that I think are better if you are interested in reading them ^^
I would love to hear your feed back~<3
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aracnea In reply to ??? [2014-02-26 16:36:16 +0000 UTC]
hay Mr. creppypasta read you story , how do you fell about that?
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to aracnea [2014-02-26 20:09:48 +0000 UTC]
I know ^^ I am very happy, though also very nervous.
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Bondon45 In reply to ??? [2014-02-26 09:04:33 +0000 UTC]
I didn't understand the end because I'm probably a retard or something.
The last phrase, did he kidnap someone else? And why was it "Just like daddy"? did he abduct a father and her daughter? I'm confizzled
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Bondon45 [2014-02-26 20:09:28 +0000 UTC]
The news reporters call the person who is murdering young women and making them into dolls "The Doll Maker"
Vine says "Just like Daddy right?" because in the beginning of the story it is explained that his father was a talented doll maker. His Father never murdered anyone like Vine does, but Vine does not believe he is killing anyone, he thinks he is just making the girls into beautiful dolls. He is delusional.
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AnkoandOrochimaru In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 16:12:11 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful. I truly loved it! I have a living doll itching to be his proxy! ._.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to AnkoandOrochimaru [2014-02-15 20:35:44 +0000 UTC]
Ah well he is merely human with no need for proxies, nor the knowledge of them really ^^'
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AnkoandOrochimaru In reply to AnkoandOrochimaru [2014-02-11 00:38:53 +0000 UTC]
Woops! Didn't mean proxy. << that was suppposed to say "itching to meet him"
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Soaringstar99 In reply to ??? [2014-02-06 05:06:02 +0000 UTC]
This is actually one of best creepypasta ever!Love him already!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Soaringstar99 [2014-02-06 05:24:29 +0000 UTC]
;w; Thank you so much, I don't know about the best but that means so much!
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sappyforest In reply to ??? [2014-01-16 00:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Kinda like the one I was making, in the eye thing...
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sappyforest In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-01-16 15:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but it wasn't any good, so Iditched it.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to sappyforest [2014-01-31 22:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Aw, that's too bad. Sorry to hear.
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sappyforest In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2014-02-04 18:56:32 +0000 UTC]
Nah, was a bad pasta anyway...
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to sappyforest [2014-02-16 16:14:52 +0000 UTC]
Well there is always next time ^^ I am not a writer myself but just like when drawing, one must continue and practice to get better. As long as you keep writing or doing what you are passionate about you will gt better in time ^^
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gatanii69 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 06:45:21 +0000 UTC]
i finish reading your story~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!
awesome!! i love story~~~!!!!♪v(>∀<*v)三(v*>∀<)v
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to gatanii69 [2013-12-24 14:58:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah~ Thank you so much ^^ I am glad~
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LockerCloset In reply to ??? [2013-12-23 15:20:20 +0000 UTC]
I love this story.
Haha I'm reading this one day before Christmas. xD
You write really well. NOW I'M GOING TO GO AND READ THE ANOTHER ONE! C:<
I found that fact funny, that my own Creepypasta is kind of like a puppet. (which is kind of like a doll, I guess)
okayletmejustshutup.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to LockerCloset [2013-12-23 15:32:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
I am actually trying to get a Christmas special out ^^
the story is finished, I just have to finish the art ^^
I am glad you liked, I am new at writing but thank you ^^
And that sounds cool ^^ Do you know The puppeteer?
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LockerCloset In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-23 15:38:28 +0000 UTC]
The puppeteer... I think I have heard that somewhere, but no, I don't know who/what the Puppeteer is. (or maybe I know, I just can't remember :d)
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to LockerCloset [2013-12-26 17:38:22 +0000 UTC]
He is a newer creepypasta, I love his story ^^ he is fun to draw too~
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LockerCloset In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-27 12:41:57 +0000 UTC]
I read his story aswell. (I accidentally went to his story, and I couldn't resist, I read it about right after this) It was awesome too!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to LockerCloset [2013-12-29 01:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes ^^ I love it, bleedingheartworks is really good artist ^^
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Opal59 In reply to ??? [2013-12-19 22:02:20 +0000 UTC]
this...*wipes eyes* this was beautiful...
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Opal59 [2013-12-19 23:30:29 +0000 UTC]
Ah~ ^^ Thank you very much ^^ <3
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Opal59 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-19 23:32:26 +0000 UTC]
YOU'RE VERY WELCOME! IT IS A VERY CREATIVE STORY!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Opal59 [2013-12-19 23:50:25 +0000 UTC]
You really think so?? Thank you again very much ^^ That means a lot! <3 especially sense I do not feel I am very creative.
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Opal59 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-20 00:15:59 +0000 UTC]
You are VERY creative! and you're welcome!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Opal59 [2013-12-20 20:28:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha if you say so! And Thank you again ^^
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Opal59 In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-20 21:48:34 +0000 UTC]
YOU ARE! AND YOU'RE WELCOME!
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Mesocyclonegirl In reply to ??? [2013-12-19 21:45:51 +0000 UTC]
This is epic. Is it on the creepypasta wiki?
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Mesocyclonegirl [2013-12-19 23:30:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
And no, I am unaware how the process of getting it on there would go.
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Mesocyclonegirl In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-19 23:58:12 +0000 UTC]
No problem, and I don't know how to do dat either. .-.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Mesocyclonegirl [2013-12-20 20:28:51 +0000 UTC]
I will have to find out~
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Mesocyclonegirl In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2013-12-21 01:13:53 +0000 UTC]
If I could ever write anything good, I would do that.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Mesocyclonegirl [2013-12-26 17:37:28 +0000 UTC]
It just takes practice ^^
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