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Chisai-Yokai — I'm Sorry...
Published: 2013-11-12 21:36:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 5436; Favourites: 134; Downloads: 0
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My character Noah, Jeff the killers son whom I am writing a story about. Well I hope it is liked ^^
Here are the chapters~ (Update: Chapters have been put in storage.)
Chapter One: ayatonyaa.deviantart.com/art/J…
Chapter Two: ayatonyaa.deviantart.com/art/J…
Chapter Three: ayatonyaa.deviantart.com/art/J…
Chapter Four: ayatonyaa.deviantart.com/art/J…
Chapter Five: ayatonyaa.deviantart.com/art/J…
Chapter Six: ayatonyaa.deviantart.com/art/J…
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This is really old, but he is meant to be the son of Jane the Killer so that is why his eyes are black.
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I can see that, but I thought her eyes being solid black were because of her mask? That's what I've always assumed, but Noah is a great character, even though other Jeff the Killer fan girls might not agree
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There are many different versions of Jane the Killer.
There is the original, where Jane worked for the military and was given a super soldier serum that cause her eyes to go black and skin to go white.
Then there is the Jane that gets burned by Jeff after he kills her family and then goes on to wear a mask.
Then there is the Jane that sold her soul to Satan for power so she could get revenge on Jeff for murdering her family.
Noah is the son of the third version of Jane I mentioned. Her and Noah's story takes place after this one: www.youtube.com/watch?v=g939vb…
In this version Jane has powers such as shape shifting that was given to her when she sold her soul. At one point she makes herself look like someone else whist trying to get close to Jeff in order to kill him and sleeps with him.
By the end of the story we find out Jane had gotten pregnant and has the baby.
So Noah's story is based on that though I changed some details.
The Jane VS Jeff story is not very good but I liked it when I was 15 and that was when I made Noah.
Fangirls never hated Noah in my experience.
Thank you for your compliments though ^^
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Awe 
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I really want to read Noah's story but I can't see it because there's an error in the page. I wanted to know if there was another website where I could read his story
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I apologize! I put his stories in storage as I was no longer happy with their level of quality! My apologies!
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Aw noah looks sad... amd adorable * pokes him * :I
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He has a lot of reasons to be sad ^^
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But really, how did you colored it to be that perfect?!
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Ah~ It is not perfect~ What do you mean? I used water color and marker if that helps ^^
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Oh, okay! Thanks dude.^^
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Thank you so much ^^
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This makes me wish he was real! I would so date him XD
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Haha Thank you ^^ I want him to look attractive though also be his character. I think he has his heart set on Shannon though haha ^^
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Haha I don't mind. Too bad I'm yandere. Something I would never say: "Oh, its okay... I understand that he'll always love her more than me."
Imma kill her XD
(I'm just kidding by the way... if you didn't know)
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(I understand)
Haha I see, Well if Noah does not accidentally kill her first ^^
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oooo. Kill her kill her!
(In reality don't kill her... they so cute together 
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Haha I am not sure what will happen yet ^^ It will be a surprise for the both of us ^^ Noah is in control of the story not me ^^
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That's how it is for my two stories. I never know what's going to happen until I start writing it. :3
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Haha yes my characters have control, not me ^^
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:3 I think its better when its that way.
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Hai Hai
Is Your icon now Flandre?
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Uhhh... Maybe? I don't know who she is I found her randomly, and I liked it for my icon since she looks like a cute witch and is eating a strawberry. I looked up the name and they DO look familiar. Maybe they are the same :3 what anime is she from? It looks cool.
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She is from a video game called the Touhou Project, more specifically Touhou 6: Embodiment of the Scarlet Devil. She is a vampire who is insane. I draw her a lot actually, sense because most of what I draw is Touhou fan works ^^ I had actually planned on cosplaying her. She is one of my favorite characters from the game ^^
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Oh cool! What system is it for?
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As soon as I get my laptop situation fixed I'm so getting it... Hell yeah! Oh look at my journal and tell me what you think of my story idea? I'm eager to know what others think lol. :3
... If you don't mind? You gave me good advise last time.
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I read you're journal entry. Looks like it could be interesting ^^ I did a zombie Apocalypse story once but I never finished. I like your different ideas. Just make sure it does not end up to close to something like that book/movie Warm Bodies or something ^^
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Definitely not. The cure is not as simple as feeling love. XD It will be very complex and scientific.
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me gusto es muy profundo *-*
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Thank you very much^^
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