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Published: 2017-10-04 02:57:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 23555; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 60
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Description Here we go, the first page.
Insight - 2

It's been quite a process; I don't usually spend more than eight hours on a regular picture, but I'm pretty sure this one took me well above that. I really hope you all enjoy it, though! I'm so excited to show the rest of the comic to you. ^^

These pages have taken me a while to create, so it may be a day or two before the next page is uploaded. Please stay tuned!

Emily, Daren, and Beepz (c) me, the guy no one remembers. 
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Comments: 33

LTMwasneverhere [2017-10-05 18:31:49 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling this comic is serious by looking at Emily’s somewhat realistic eyes.

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ChocEnd In reply to LTMwasneverhere [2017-10-05 20:32:41 +0000 UTC]

I guess

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XavierSchmidt [2017-10-05 16:34:48 +0000 UTC]

I think it's particularly interesting how you've drawn Emily's eyes in this series so far. In past drawings she has circular eye designs, while this series uses a sharper, more anime-esque shape. I couldn't help but feel like she looks particularly older as a result; instead of exhibiting a curious, wide-eyed expression in her youth, she seems more mature and world-weary. She's probably seen some dark things, and her eyes provide a hint toward her past.

Or it's just a simple stylistic change.

I may not have followed your characters' stories as much as some of your fans, but I am no less excited to see what comes next!

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ChocEnd In reply to XavierSchmidt [2017-10-05 16:43:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you're interested!

Thank you so much for your feedback, that was a fantastic comment to read. 
Yes, I wanted to change her eyes to make her appear a little older, since she is meant to be around 20 years old.

I can't wait to show you the rest of the comic. ^^

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Legomaster75 [2017-10-05 03:05:14 +0000 UTC]

Dats a spicy Meatball!  

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ChocEnd In reply to Legomaster75 [2017-10-05 13:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Mama mia!

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Chubbinator In reply to Legomaster75 [2017-10-05 03:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Noice!

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ChocEnd In reply to Chubbinator [2017-10-05 13:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Gorchard [2017-10-04 23:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Dats a nice firefox

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ChocEnd In reply to Gorchard [2017-10-05 00:24:53 +0000 UTC]

would you like to update your browser

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Gorchard In reply to ChocEnd [2017-10-05 20:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Yes give me the power to melt firewalls.

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GizmoTheDragon [2017-10-04 19:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Woah, nice action-packed first page. Wonder what the whole situation is?

Plot twist: Beepz put herself in a room where no one could disturb her so she could proceed with a system update, but forgot to plug herself into the nearest outlet
jk

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ChocEnd In reply to GizmoTheDragon [2017-10-05 00:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Who knows, maybe that's what happened XP

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Vinesaucefan [2017-10-04 19:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh wait this is the beginning of a comic

I was thinking they had Insight as stat of -1

I'll leave this here anyways:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=dNe4pn…

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ChocEnd In reply to Vinesaucefan [2017-10-05 00:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha

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Vinesaucefan In reply to ChocEnd [2017-10-05 19:57:37 +0000 UTC]

Perception is almost Insight right?

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ChocEnd In reply to Vinesaucefan [2017-10-05 20:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Sorta

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Vinesaucefan In reply to ChocEnd [2017-10-06 23:25:27 +0000 UTC]

yok

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Tiggsy-goo [2017-10-04 15:11:11 +0000 UTC]

looks awesome so far! : D

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ChocEnd In reply to Tiggsy-goo [2017-10-04 19:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Tiggs

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Tiggsy-goo In reply to ChocEnd [2017-10-05 15:10:15 +0000 UTC]

no prooob

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ARMed-Drifter-Ember [2017-10-04 12:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Emily's a pyrokinetic?

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ChocEnd In reply to ARMed-Drifter-Ember [2017-10-04 19:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Yup, she knows some basic fire magic.

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ARMed-Drifter-Ember In reply to ChocEnd [2017-10-05 00:26:43 +0000 UTC]

So, she's no black mage then?

That's a shame. I kinda wanted to see her cast Firaga.

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polycomical [2017-10-04 06:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice intro, very cool!

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ChocEnd In reply to polycomical [2017-10-04 19:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it.

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CrestDraggy [2017-10-04 03:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Ooohhh its looking good! Cant wait to see the rest!

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ChocEnd In reply to CrestDraggy [2017-10-04 19:23:57 +0000 UTC]

I won't disappoint!

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SumGhy [2017-10-04 03:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, here we go! ^^ 

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ChocEnd In reply to SumGhy [2017-10-04 19:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeedy!

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ParasideDragon [2017-10-04 03:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Holy Snaps!

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ChocEnd In reply to ParasideDragon [2017-10-04 19:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Snaps?

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ParasideDragon In reply to ChocEnd [2017-10-04 20:49:21 +0000 UTC]

It's a thing I say.

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