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ChocolateIsForever — Fatal Mistake part1

Published: 2010-04-06 19:58:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 6473; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 35
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Description Hi guys!

As promised, here it is: what happend after Orin the most happy and honest fairy in Ireland got shot by Kael the faun/wannabe warrior. I finished it FINALLY!

On the sixth panel, The clan's Chief punishes poor Kael for killing a fairy(they call them Sprites, in general) because they think fairies are divine creatures and well, killing one can't be good right? Right.
But Fairies are immortal.
But they don't know it. YET.

Oh, and Orins feet are tied with white, marygold-scented cloth in the last panel, it was part of the ritual in order to purify the dead body and all.

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*Orin, Kael, The Chief and every character in this comic are part of my own story so the precious copyright goes to dear and gorgeous me. Don't steal, don't TOUCH! hehe, I'm kidding, you're free to touch themLOL

Enjoy!
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Comments: 16

Devonthefandomkeeper [2017-05-08 17:53:01 +0000 UTC]

I think I've seen this before. Your stories are great!

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DagTillDeath [2011-10-31 12:38:56 +0000 UTC]

lol I love the tears in his eyes in the second last frame. so dramatic

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ChocolateIsForever In reply to DagTillDeath [2011-11-03 14:53:22 +0000 UTC]

haha glad you like it
I had tons of fun with these OCs

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DagTillDeath In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2011-11-03 22:47:31 +0000 UTC]

XD

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freakizoid82 [2010-09-19 06:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Great story, keep drawing! I would love to read more!

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ChocolateIsForever In reply to freakizoid82 [2010-09-29 06:53:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!
I'm going to continue these tales, with strip comics like this one, so if you please, stay tuned for more~!

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freakizoid82 In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-09-30 20:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I will

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IF-LovE-WaS-BluE [2010-09-06 06:38:32 +0000 UTC]

SHOOT
i just thought the hair on my arm was a spider, no worries.
Hehehhehehe these characters are so fun C:

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ChocolateIsForever In reply to IF-LovE-WaS-BluE [2010-09-09 05:49:44 +0000 UTC]

hahahahaLOL
glad it's only hair
Thank you very much!
*feel hugged by Orin, he's such an enthusiast with fun people!*

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Nikki-vdp [2010-04-09 07:43:13 +0000 UTC]

OMG Kael is sooo gentle pulling that arrow out...*cough* *cough* And damn, Orin does have real tendencies for drama considering he can't die As always love your work on the expressions, and great job on the pose in the last pannel,

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ChocolateIsForever In reply to Nikki-vdp [2010-04-13 20:24:17 +0000 UTC]

...Isn't he?!
Unfortunately, this is the right way to pull an arrow off(pulling from the wound's end out--no kidding, I've read it somewhere) that's why I drew Orin collapsing with the face on the ground
yeah, I know, he's drama queen....but you can't really blame him his heart stopped there!
Thank you very much!!
...and I had to make 3 sketches before finding the right pose but at least it's appreciated, so I'm happy!

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AteMozzarella [2010-04-07 03:49:50 +0000 UTC]

*goes off to read the previous one*
Seems interesting

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ChocolateIsForever In reply to AteMozzarella [2010-04-07 11:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

The previous one isn't a comic though...But the pic that shows how it all started...by Orin's death that is

And I hope you like the rest of my stories including these characters!

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AteMozzarella In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-04-07 11:52:02 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see more 8D yes yes.

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ChocolateIsForever In reply to AteMozzarella [2010-04-07 13:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Wish granted!

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AteMozzarella In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-04-07 13:47:33 +0000 UTC]

wheeeee

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