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Finally finished this one! For some reason I didn't realize making 3 characters would take 3 times as long.
These guys show up in the White Deer chapter c: Raya is the most important one of them, but I need to design them all anyway. I think all together there should be about 5 or 6 of them, so I'll need to design some more for the comic.

Writing update:
I listened to the whole SKJ trash script and took notes for it, my main issues are with the opening chapters and Darek and Larisa's relationship. Lysa leaves the city she lives in, because she dreams of adventures and other such. I never introduce her family in the beginning because I can't find anything interesting there and it was never important. Then in the end it's still never adressed. I'm kinda wandering if I shouldn't just replace her family with Darek completely but it doesn't quite work because the whole conflict comes about because Darek never stays for her and doesn't let her come along wherever he's going. And I really don't want to have orphan characters. But this might still be something I'm gonna be changing? Or I'll just pretend her family doesn't exist, since they're never relevant in the whole plot. That so weird though .-.
Hope is all ready to be written as a second draft. I want to start doing a more writing focused challange, like 500 words a day or something, to progress the projects that need to be written.
Lo is doing a bit better I think. I wrote out all the different sides the characters have to them and I'm trying to introduce them slowly. I think it should clear up a lot of the confusion I had. Vess has 9 different ways he acts for example and I see how it gets confusing if I try to introduce them too fast. LO I also want to start writing. The further chapters are more-or-less clear in my head and I don't think I can figure out the beginning without diving in and seeing what works.

Goals:
do 500 words a day on any project
but mostly Hope, LO and HM

And next week (this week, since I missed a few days) I won't post a Hope drawing, but I'd like to do a LO drawing instead.

Description
Finally finished this one! For some reason I didn't realize making 3 characters would take 3 times as long.
These guys show up in the White Deer chapter c: Raya is the most important one of them, but I need to design them all anyway. I think all together there should be about 5 or 6 of them, so I'll need to design some more for the comic.

Writing update:
I listened to the whole SKJ trash script and took notes for it, my main issues are with the opening chapters and Darek and Larisa's relationship. Lysa leaves the city she lives in, because she dreams of adventures and other such. I never introduce her family in the beginning because I can't find anything interesting there and it was never important. Then in the end it's still never adressed. I'm kinda wandering if I shouldn't just replace her family with Darek completely but it doesn't quite work because the whole conflict comes about because Darek never stays for her and doesn't let her come along wherever he's going. And I really don't want to have orphan characters. But this might still be something I'm gonna be changing? Or I'll just pretend her family doesn't exist, since they're never relevant in the whole plot. That so weird though .-.
Hope is all ready to be written as a second draft. I want to start doing a more writing focused challange, like 500 words a day or something, to progress the projects that need to be written.
Lo is doing a bit better I think. I wrote out all the different sides the characters have to them and I'm trying to introduce them slowly. I think it should clear up a lot of the confusion I had. Vess has 9 different ways he acts for example and I see how it gets confusing if I try to introduce them too fast. LO I also want to start writing. The further chapters are more-or-less clear in my head and I don't think I can figure out the beginning without diving in and seeing what works.

Goals:
do 500 words a day on any project
but mostly Hope, LO and HM

And next week (this week, since I missed a few days) I won't post a Hope drawing, but I'd like to do a LO drawing instead.