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Published: 2016-02-09 18:16:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 14748; Favourites: 213; Downloads: 171
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Description halfway through this i was like "i don't even know what's supposed to happen" and i wanted to scrap it but i was more than halfway done so i powered through it.
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msflurker [2016-02-10 06:00:49 +0000 UTC]

The power of gene editing viruses, who says they will be only used to treat genetic diseases?

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Slime-Series [2016-02-10 04:57:44 +0000 UTC]

If I had to interpenetrate and maybe give a small story base on what I'm seeing:

Carrera Osane was very thrilled with her creation.  At age 21 and already she had created something she felt could change all of humankind.  Her creation that could help millions was called "nucleus technology" had performed very well.  On paper, computer simulations, and rat testing but she had no human trial periods setup yet.  Her "nucleus tech" was alot like nano tech but even smaller to enter the cell nucleus where DNA was held and alter anything she liked safely.  The nucleus tech wasn't something that the body produced and worked differently then any other organism but was undetectable from the body's natural body cells.  It had the power to identify HIV and every body harming viruses and dangerous substances and destroy them making them superior to white blood cells while working as a partner to them.  Taking copies of perfectly healthy subjects it can find and remove safely all forms of cancer and heal the damaged areas.  It could also alter the body and many other things safely.  However Carrera wasn't interested in that and felt that was more of a side advantage.  If new deadly viruses was created by some evil man or woman the tech was upgradeable with firmware and a computer app linked to the tech and made adaptable to handle all challenges.  It was perfect as far as she was concerned.

However getting the approval by the board to begin human testing wasn't going so smoothly.  New tech and everything it could do have some of the members a little worried.  Plus Carrera was told that usually to keep the attention of the board awake for such speeches a supermodel was usually used to help advertise to the board the products being sold to them to vote on.  Carrera wanted to present it herself as it was her baby and only she knew the inner workings of her tech.  But Carrera was focused to get it passed by any means necessary.  The lives saved with her invention counted on it.
Thinking up ideas to present the board and findings Carrera became stumped.  Till she got a common cold.  It hit her that she could be a test subject and show findings or the common cold being defeated by her tech.  Enhancing her cold to have a before findings she made herself very sick.  Dangerously so.  But some she began pumping in her Nucleus Tech into her body and activated them as soon as the tech was inside her.  In one hour her cold was gone and for good.  Nothing she could do could give her a cold anymore as her nucleus tech removed each one without her even knowing it.  She felt ready to present her findings.  Double checking the firmware on her linked computer and smartphone Carrera thought she closed the app down as she raced off to the scheduled meeting with the board.  She didn't.

Her roommate and best friend Dria Mitochon was known to enter into Carrera's room without permission.  She had gotten a virus on her computer after going to a bad hentia site and wanted to use Carrera's computer to finish watching the episode of her magical girl hentia series.  The new girl of the team was about to undergo her first transform with the activating words "I'm smoking hot!" to battle the evil genie girl that granted wishes to the one that dominated her on the battlefield (in the bed).
Opening up that same website that gave her other computer a virus Dria figured she would also drag the video over to Carrera's email for her to have a fun laugh.  She dragged the video to the program running the code and firmware of her tech and didn't know it.
At the board meeting things wasn't going so well.  For the members who was science enthusiasts their attention was kept but the rest for all the science talk she gave was dull and had their attention long lost.
"Perhaps I should of gotten a model after all".  Suddenly as she was using her phone to display more findings she saw a unknown put into her code.  'What is this?!'  A strange entry that worried her.  To ensure safety she had certain "hotword" protections programmed into the coding system to remove any unknown changes.  As soon as she typed in "virus" in the hotword area the file would go back to the mornings findings and code 48_F before any upload to the firmware and date sent to the tech could be applied.  She also had to do it without looking worried in front of the board.
'V...I...R...'
Dria: "The transformation is about to begin!  Time to send the feed over."  CLICK
Video hentia magical schoolgirl: "I'M SMOKING HOT!"
'U...S ' clicking 'OK' will remove any...' "ACK!"  The jolt made her drop her smartphone.  She was to late as the firmware was told to force upgrade from her own master system (her computer back home).  'Upload code:49_F to nucleus technology inside Carrera Osane'

Dria: "Wow that girl is literally smoking now!  She appears like she on fire while she having her massive transformation sequence and loving it all!  I can only imagine it..."
Carrera: "WOAH!?    NO NO!  Ah I mean..board this is all fine just some AHH!  AH!  OH!"  The experience was like no other.  Her tech began very quickly altering everything of her body and even slightly pored out of her pours to destroy her own outfit and just as fast lining together and using protective allusion defenses to make a new one tightly around her.
Carrera: " AHH EH?! AHH  OOOOOOhh AHHHHH OH!"

(one hour later)
Dria was vacuuming when she hear the door opening and closing.  That had to be Carrera.
Dria: "So how did it go?  Was the board impressed?  Did you get their attention?  Did you get approval?
Carrera: "...yes to all."
Dria: "Fantastic!  Oh did you also receive that amusing and sexy transformation I sent you?"
Dria turn around and found herself slack jawed and speechless of who was in front of her.
Carrera: "Yes I most certainly did."  (Holding up a vial of Nucleus Technology and a syringe) " Now let me send to you some sexy hentai girls I found coming back here DRIA!"
Carrera and Dria began playing a game of Cat and Mouse.

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ChompWorks In reply to Slime-Series [2016-02-10 12:56:28 +0000 UTC]

well, interesting take on it.

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docterzero [2016-02-09 18:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Well still turned out neatly!

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